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Banshee531


I've always been a lover and writer of fanfiction, but it wasn't until I got into MLP that I really found something I loved writing about. Hope you all enjoy.

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This story is a sequel to Power Rangers Guardians vs Power Rangers Revolution X


The Power Rangers are back! Now in their senior year of High School, the Rangers are hoping to have a peaceful time. But to their horror, a new threat has surfaced and is out to get them and take their Elements. To stop it, the Rangers must create new weapons, find new allies and defeat new foes. One thing's for sure, should they win, they will become legends.

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Hmm, not bad Banshee, think you can give me more?

That's not the TV series Mystic Force Theme. I've actually never heard that theme until today.

"Element of Adventure"? If it's not Daring Do, I am going to be surprised.

"Element of Darkness" on the other hand. . . I have so many theories. But I won't share. ~That would be telling!~

8638515 It's the Ron Wasserman theme, that he wrote for the series. The creaters chose the hip hop one over it, which everyone says is a big mistake.

Was this unedited by any chance? Because they're were numerous times where characters were saying Yeap, instead of Yeah.

The start of a new adventure. It will be fun to see the Rangers balance school and being heroes.

Of course Flash's friends can tell there is something between him and and Sci-Twi already.

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KO awesome chapter, the Rangers are back and will become stronger together now that they’ll face a new enemy pulling the strings and hope they’ll be able to defeat him. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

Ok your already better then power ranger in that you don't have super in your season 2

Oh my gosh. Cadance is joining the team. :pinkiehappy:

1. I see Flash's new haircut has been addressed. :ajsmug:
2. Wizard of Oz reference. Nice. :ajsmug:
3. Man, I've missed this. :twilightsmile:

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Blizzard's last line. That's exactly what the witch says as she melts.

I can't believe I didn't think to mention this earlier, but you could have given a less mundane reason for Flash's new hairstyle. For example, some of his hair could have gotten grazed off in a monster fight, and then, Rarity cut the rest of it to even it out. Oh well. "shrug"

So who's Adventure and Darkness?

The teen suddenly looked panicky as his eyes darted around, before landing on the sight of a spoon that a student had just put down.
"Spoon...Table Spoon," He said.

:facehoof: Creativity is not strong with this one. Havoc, you suck at making a name for yourself... literally.

I am still calling it form the last time, Havoc is the Element of Darkness unless it's Twilight...:twilightoops: :facehoof:I just can't let Midnight Sparkle go, can I?

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In the first story, he hinted that two of the Rangers are OCs. Considering that all the non-OC Rangers are accounted for, I don't think there's room for Twilight becoming a Ranger. Midnight Sparkle's just going to have to appear in a different story, but you know, that is totally Banshee's call.

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Grand Hoof, an OC, had Forgiveness before Sunset. So one could argue that one of the OC Rangers is covered... technically. But you seem to forget that I:facehoof:ed after I suggested Twilight before commenting that I cannot seem to let the idea of Midnight Sparkle being in Banshee's work go.
But chips on the table, gun to the head, I still wager Darkness is Havoc

"I made them encase all the Rangers got caught or hypnotised," Twilight explained as she took the other out along with Hypno Chargers. "Now we can do anything the Rangers can...minus morphing. Here!"

Clever girl.

Rainbow meanwhile was watching carefully, looking confused. "Where's Soarin?"

To paraphrase Applejack, looks like somebody's got a crush on the new guy. :raritywink:

"You should have seen what happened to Shining Armor. Apparently he was trapped in his office keeping the mind controlled officers from hypnotising him."

Well, that explains a lot. :twilightsmile:

Meanwhile in the back field, Soarin and Rainbow were enjoying themselves with a soccer ball.

Just going to leave your friends to do all the work I see. :ajbemused: I'm surprised the others didn't chew them out for slacking off.

By the way, Havoc had a great plan. He came closer to succeeding than Darklight did. If the Rangers hadn't been prepared, he would have won for sure.

"Get me a list of every monster the Rangers haven't fought before," Havoc explained. "I want their names and abilities. That way we'll be able to decide whether they'll be capable of defeating the Rangers or not."

Now that's the first in a long time the villains have actually thought things through, because as Henry Ford once said, 'if you always do what you always did, you will always get what you always got.'

So when do we meet the Ranger for Adventure? Seriously, you have been stringing this along since before they found Soarin and Shining... I assume you haven't forgotten this plot element. Don't get me wrong seeing the villains actually learn is a great way to increase the narrative tension, but you still have to address headway in finding the other two elements and rangers at some point.

Well glad I helped you come up with an idea. Also, good to see Rainbow and Soarin are getting closer with each other. Looks like unlike Darklight, Havoc actually learns from his defeats, that doesn't sound good for the Rangers.

At the reception desk, the woman manning the phones was typing away at her compute. "Canterlot Studios, how my I direct your call? Okay, just putting you through now."

I think you mean "computer" and "may"

"Maybe they're in the gym of the cafeteria,"

or

He asked asked the camera, before pointing his staff at it.

You want to delete one of those "asked"

"Give my your Elements!"

me

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Am I allowed to ask about las Sirenas? wink wink nudge nudge

8653972 Their not showing up. Sorry.

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Maybe they'll be brought back this year in a n EQG special?
But it would be funny if one of them had one of the elements on them

Nice chapter. I see it is heavily based off the TMNT episode Monkey Brains. So it is confirmed Micro has a crush on Rarity. I suspect that based on how they interacted in the first story. Guess Micro should be lucky Spike doesn’t have a crush on Rarity in this world, or he’d need to deal with a jealous angry dog all the time.

He was so focused on his work, that he did noticed five others walk into the room.

didn’t

The took attacks met and caused a loud clang, before Flash was suddenly sent flying back and crashing into the ground.

two

What you did was no small feet.

feat

Wait didn't Havoc and his father have the ship before Darklight?
:twilightoops:
Someone related to Havoc?

This is a new development.

:ajbemused:Still waiting for the Ranger of Adventure.:ajbemused:

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You know, I thought there was something familiar about this chapter. I only remember seeing the beginning part with the flowchart though. The other Rangers laughing at Micro feels just a little out of character. I mean, after everything that they've already faced, it feels kind of weird for them to just dismiss a monster just based on it's appearances, but I guess one can justify that by saying that the monster was really funny-looking. Speaking of laughing, hey Banshee, what was Flash thinking of that made Psychofist laugh?
By the way, I'm super hyped up about that new monster. I can't wait to see it in action. Hey Banshee, I know that you probably can't tell me, but when is Cadance going to get involved? I'm only asking because you put her in the intro.

8666925 Watch this and skip the first two minutes. As for Cadance, she'll be in it soon enough.

You know, that gag with the shopping bags wasn't as funny as I expected. Then again, it was pretty short, and because of that, it wasn't quite punishing enough to be that funny. Oh, well. What the mall scene lacked in humor it made up for in ship.

So Ranger of Adventure?
Next Chapter?
Seriously this is the twenty-fifth chapter in the series overall since the Manticore Zord and the Element of Adventure had a Ranger for it was first brought up.
I am not going to let you forget this plot element

"I'll handle them master," Havoc said. "You get to safety."

Wrong speaker.

Okay, I knew the moment that Table had asked Sunset out that he was going to break her heart. I didn't think it'd be happening so soon. :raritycry:
By the way, why do I get the feeling that this is going to be a ship season? Not that I mind, I mean Dino Super Charge was pretty ship-y too.

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Foxhelm, before you bug him about the Element of Adventure again, I've got a feeling that he'll be appearing in the next chapter. At least, that's how Dino Super Charge did their Aqua Ranger reveal. Then again, the next chapter could be Cadance's debut. :applejackunsure: If that's the case, then the Orange Ranger should be coming up in the one after, probably.

I know this is my third comment already, but how can a monster that sounds so ridiculous end up so powerful? :rainbowlaugh: I love it. :pinkiehappy:

Well that was heartbreaking. Not only is this the first time the Rangers didn’t defeat the new monster, Sunset found out her crush was the Big Bad. Things are going to be intense going forward. Wonder if Havoc has ever heard of the saying “hell hath no fury like a woman scorned”?

On the plus side Flash got a clue on his dad, and I love that you included his pet dog “Banana”. Now I have a feeling that the Orange Ranger is Relic Fragment. It might have been like it was for Grand Hoof, with him having the powers but not knowing what they were or what he was called.

Raise Dust Buster.

Rise

Remained me again why I agreed to take chemistry as my only extra curricular activity instead of baking?

Remind

Twilight smiled as she knelt down to scratch the dog. "He's so cut,”

cute

My rip still ache

Do you mean “ribs” like the body part?

Due to how his first met the Rangers,

he

I remember the hicks he use to take the two of us on.

I think you mean “hikes”

This time, you wont be walking away."

You forgot the apostrophe between n and t. Won’t

Let's show this guy why you don't mess with a girl in a bad move

mood

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Sometimes, the most ridiculous sounding monsters are the most dangerous in Power Rangers.

We talk about changes. There is now infighting among the villains... Havoc has been relieved... there is a new villain and Flash is one step closer to solving the riddle of his father.

And does Havoc actually have feelings for Sunset...:twilightoops:

Why do I get the feeling that something like what might be going on with Ben Solo/Kylo Ren and Rey in the new Star Wars trilogy is going on between Havoc and Sunset?

"We're not fighting monster everyday anymore," Lyra told her. "Without that, we'll never burn off these calories."
"Well I'm getting some," Sweetie told her, "and don't think of taking any of it because you changed your mind." With that, she moved over to the stand.

Of course, Sweetie isn't worried about calories. She's thinner than Lyra, and I'm assuming that she also has a higher metabolism. :ajbemused: Don't feel bad, Lyra. I know how that feels. :twilightsmile:

By the way, I'm rereading this chapter out of boredom. :ajsleepy:

"Aww," Rainbow said as she scratched the back of her head. "It was nothing. Twilight and Sunset should really get all the credit. It was their inventions which saved the day."

:pinkiegasp: Rainbow Dash is being modest?! Cue the flying pigs. :rainbowlaugh:

Hold on. Is what happened to Sunset going to play into whatever is going on in Flash's love life? I mean, back in the day, she used Flash, and now she just got used by someone she at least thought of as a friend. I mean, I don't know if that was planned or just a coincidence.

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I noticed that too. Sunset doesn’t seem to have the best dating record. She dated Flash just to use him to be popular and now she ends up being used herself. That's got to sting.

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I think the dramatic irony might be lost on Sunset.

"What's this virus do?" Pinkie asked, her head being flat due to her concern.

Pinkie spends a lot of time with her hair flat in your stories. Then again, bad things happen to her friends in your stories.
Man, I love seeing Flash kick butt! :rainbowkiss:
By the way, I think the monster's name is misspelled. I think the name you're looking for is "Rogue."
You put my feels on a roller coaster in this one. :raritycry:

The others all smiled seeing the father and son reunite. Many questions still lingered, but they could wait for later. For now, they would just enjoy the moment.

Hear, hear! :pinkiehappy:

Wow, that was amazing! We get a new power for Flash and finally see the Orange Ranger. 9 down, 1 to go! Looks like Flash’s legendary mode is the closest he’ll get to having a battlizer, good enough for me.

They nodded a they watched him place the photo in the box before he began to bury it once gain.

again

Flash frowned, not liking the idea of being without his Element, but know they needed it and gave it to Sunset.

knew

Seeing Flash attack the others had caused her a great deal of fear, seeing one of the nicest persons she knew acting so savage.

I think you might mean “people”. Persons isn’t really a word.

I'm the fasted swordsmen in the multiverse

fastest

"Who do you know my name?" Flash asked.

"I'm the one gave it to you."

Flash should say “how” not “who” and Orange Ranger should include “who” in that sentence. “The one who gave it to you.”

Flashes new form reminded me of the Red Dragon Fire Ranger from Mystic Force, for some reason. God I miss Battleizers, I was never a big fan of them giving the entire team Super Battle Forms, and having that be an entire series seperate from the first.

Great Chapter! Also, good idea by using Twillight and Flash's relationship as base, I think this will help them grow closer. And, I know you will think I am dumb, but, how is the orange ranger's suit? Is it like all the others, but with orange, or is something else?

Hold on. Why do Flash's parents keep changing eye colors in your stories? Is it for narrative reasons or just because you felt like it?

8696422 Basically the same as the others, but with orange and a different shaped visor.

Would I be right in assuming that Flash's parents' eye colors in this story are the same as in The Flash Sentry Chronicles? Did you change it in your Yugioh series just to make a Harry Potter refence? :ajbemused:

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