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Banshee531


I've always been a lover and writer of fanfiction, but it wasn't until I got into MLP that I really found something I loved writing about. Hope you all enjoy.

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This story is a sequel to Flash Sentry, Defender of the Peace S6


When the students of Canterlot High go on a trip to Camp Everfree, they are amazed to discover a magical force is causing strange things to happen around the camp. Meanwhile, Twilight Sparkle is still suffering with the mistakes she's made while using magic as the dreaded Midnight Sparkle. With the help of her friends, she must overcome her fears, and now embrace her newfound magical abilities to save the camp.

All the while, Flash is dealing with his own issues, mainly his unclear feelings toward his best friend and her interest if some guy she barely knows. But as he does this, he now finds himself wielding his own magical abilities.

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Comment posted by Foxhelm deleted March 30th

Well, Banshee finally adapts his least-favorite Equestria Girls movie for this! Let's hope Flash must prevent Timber from getting together with Twilight.

I don't care what anyone said, Timber deserve to get his heart break by Twilight! He's so lucky that i ain't his boss cause I would fired his ass if he was dating an under-age student... A camp counselor dating an under-age student, what were Hasbro thinking?

"I tried three times to get her up, but she wouldn't have it." The teen was leaning against the wall outside her room, not looking into it. It was a house rule that Flash and Twilight weren't allowed in one another's rooms, something the two never understood why Twilight's parents had enforced since Flash had moved in. Either way, it meant Twilight had to lock her door at night, keeping Flash from going in earlier and throwing her out of bed.

It seems her parents are more overprotective in EQG than Equestria.

Timber smirked as he took the microphone from his sister, "Think of me as that awesome guy," he threw the microphone into the air and caught it with his other hand. "Who should always be invited to fun things."

Press a BOO button

Random man: YOU SUCK, TIMBER SPRUCE!!!!!

"Only because you two have that Sibling Supreme contest going. If that hadn't been a thing, you two would be at each others throats."

Season 9 foreshadowing.

"Looks like the two are flirting," First told Flash, making Flash go wide-eyed at this. He felt something in his gut wrench as Twilight rolled her eyes at Timber.

Every Flashlight shippers' reaction to Twimber ship in a nutshell..... just wanting to say that nutshell line.

"What were you doing at a girl's gymnastics competition?" Timber asked, raising an eyebrow as he walked up.

Shut up, Timber! :twilightangry2:

And as Flash began to head for the onyx tenet, his eyes and body didn't notice the few stray sparks of static electricity that sparked around his fingers. The campers would soon learn that this week would be unforgettable, but for entirely different reasons.

Ooooohhh..... Human Flash is getting his own power? An electric power? Is he becoming Flash?

Get it, Flash transform into Flash! Ha ha ha ha! Pun intended! Sorry but not sorry. :ajsmug:

Well, this is short chapter but this is just the beginning of Flash's greatest challenge... stopping Timber from stealing his beloved Twilight.

I know some of you don't bash on Timber but not for me, on next week and week after that, I will bash Timber everytime he appears in this fic.

Fuck Timber Spruce.

Oh yeah i can't wait for timber to be let down

Oh boy! I have waited patiently for years for you to get to this! Kinda ironic that this terrible movie was what finally convinced you to make your own version of the show, and we get one of the greatest adaptation series thanks to it.

I am just going to come out and say, most of the adaptation fanfics I find of this story are just lazy and disappointing. Off the top of my head I can only think of one fanfic version that is any good and gives Flash justice, maybe two. Most people who adapt this and Friendship Games do a borderline plagiarism of the movies, like they copy and pasted the transcript with little to no changes in dialogue. The biggest “changes” most people make are a) replacing Sci-Twi with a Human Sunset, b) make it so Sci-Twi gets in a relationship with Sunset instead, or c) add a bunch of pointless OCs that don’t contribute anything to the story and just steal lines or feel completely out of place. I know you won’t be doing any of those things though so this is going to be good.

As for the actual story, it seems like it is off to a good start. Nice to see that all the guys in the group are not impressed by Timber, and instantly see through his bullshit. It also looks like Flash is getting some electric based magic. That is interesting, so maybe he’ll be like Static from DC or something. Also, the small explanation of what happened to Cinch after the Friendship Games was entirely satisfying. Much better than just learning Cadance had replaced her from a single line in Dance Magic.

Also, interesting change for Diamond Tiara to be going to Crystal Prep instead of CHS. It might be small, but still interesting and a little fitting considering her attitude before her redemption.

I can’t wait for the next chapter! Thanks for this!

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I'm with you due maybe at the end of this Twi would tell that guy.
Twilight "I'm sorry Timber but there's someone else...."

Timber "It's Flash Sentry isn't it?"

Twilight "Yes."

I was definitely put off with this movie when it came out and I'm really hoping that your iteration will help fix everything that was wrong with it. I'm quite confident and hopeful that you'll do you fine.

A pretty good start already Banshee, I can already feel the tensions start building up between Timber & Flash in this one! :raritywink: Good that we got to know Cinch got hit by the karma stick hard for all the crap she pulled during Friendship Games, not to mention Flash's powers starting to manifest themselves, should be a wild ride in the upcoming chapters! :rainbowdetermined2:

But wait, what's this over here on the trail???.......Oh just some Highlights! :

Twilight nodded back, "Not long after Cinch was forced to leave due to a 'stress induced mental breakdown.'" Everyone chuckled at this, remembering when they had heard about Cinch's dismissal. She had tried to get the school board to shut down CHS on the grounds of doing some kind of illegal student experimentation, accusing Celestia and Luna of using magic to create some kind of super solider student just to raise CHS's academic standing. Of course, none of the board believed her and both Cadance, Ruby and their principals had denied ever seeing magic used during the friendship games. The students of Crystal Prep had also denied the allegations, and Cinch went insane, screaming that it was all true. Eventually, the board forced her to step down for fear the stress was getting to her.

Ahhhh sweet, sweet delicious karma......priceless!!! :ajsmug:

"What about rope courses?" Flash asked, getting a raised eyebrow from Gloriosa. "This place is surrounded by trees. You've gotta have a tree top assault course."

"Sorry," Gloriosa replied, "That honestly sounds a little dangerous."

"We'd wear harnesses," Flash grumbled as he crossed his arms.

Bummer, guess the extreme bike-riding's cancelled as well? :fluttercry::rainbowlaugh:

"The sundial was our year's gift!" Celestia spoke up, while Luna started coughing.

"Even though some people thought it was a little impractical, since the sundial can't be used at night."

"But I thought campers weren't allowed to wonder around at night," Flash pointed out, Luna then glaring at him, "Shutting up now."

Wise choice Flash! :rainbowlaugh:

And as Flash began to head for the onyx tenet, his eyes and body didn't notice the few stray sparks of static electricity that sparked around his fingers. The campers would soon learn that this week would be unforgettable, but for entirely different reasons.

Dun Dun Dunnnnn!!!! :twilightoops:

Looking forward to the next installment Banshee! :twilightsmile:

Timber smirked as he took the microphone from his sister, "Think of me as that awesome guy," he threw the microphone into the air and caught it with his other hand. "Who should always be invited to fun things."

there's the guy with the most punchable face in the world

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there's the guy with the most punchable face in the world

Pal, you just read my mind! I have been looking for years for a story where Flash punches that jerk in the face but have yet to find one. The closest I have found is him punching him in the gut, which I will admit is a great alternative.

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I have no idea what you're talking about. "Sudden Pinocchio nose"

Good grief. Please tell me you're not rehashing that one arc from your Pokemon series. :facehoof: I know conflict and conflict resolution are a healthy part of any relationship, but there's something uncomfortable about the way you write the two of them fighting. I can't explain it. Not that that one arc was bad, it was just really uncomfortable seeing them be jerks to each other. Also, whenever you write about them fighting, it kinda feels like they're only fighting for the sake of dragging out the romantic tension between them. Granted, my discomfort might have more to do with my personality as opposed to your writing ability.

I'll be honest with you. My biggest problem with the movie wasn't even the fact that Flash got shafted although that was terrible. I just found the whole movie except the ending really depressing. I'm hoping that your version turns out better in that regard as well as the shipping aspect.

Oh gosh! I want to like this SO BAD! But I'm kinda terrified that I won't. I mean, I want to like it because I think highly of you as a writer and a Flashlight shipper, but I'm worried that I won't because our interpretations of the characters don't always line up and because our tastes in fiction don't always mesh.:facehoof:

Okay, okay. I'm just going to calm down and keep reading. I'll attempt to enjoy this, but please don't take it personally if I don't. :fluttershyouch:

"I tried three times to get her up, but she wouldn't have it." The teen was leaning against the wall outside her room, not looking into it. It was a house rule that Flash and Twilight weren't allowed in one another's rooms, something the two never understood why Twilight's parents had enforced since Flash had moved in. Either way, it meant Twilight had to lock her door at night, keeping Flash from going in earlier and throwing her out of bed.

:raritywink:

This chapter looks good. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

I think Timber should get a punch in the face near at the end of this book

At least, Flash has Royal Knights and lesser extent to Sunset backing him up when it come to Twilight and Timber situation.

Human Flash is one insecure dude! He better make a move or else, Twilight will be taken by Timber! Stop be so insecure!

Here's highlights

Flash mumbled as he looked away, "I don't trust that guy. There's something about him that's just...I don't trust the guy."

There, there, Flash. I can understand that too, I don't trust Timber too.

"Yes," Flash nodded. "And I don't like that guy looking at Twilight like a piece of meat. I mean, he's too old for her. He's like, what...eighteen. She's a minor. And he works here. Isn't there a rule about administers not dating campers?"

Presses a clapping button

Thank you! So glad someone brought that one up! I means why would someone ship a camp counselor with a minor?! Come on! :twilightangry2:

First laughed, "Flash and Twilight, sitting in a tree."

"K-I-S-S-I-N-G," Heather continued.

Hahahaha! I knew they would do that Kissing song!

"Does that include couples?" Heather asked, making Sunset raise an eyebrow, "If everyone in our world has a doppelganger, then that means they must have the same parents. Which means the people and ponies in both worlds got together with the same pony."

I didn't think about that, but sorry to disappoint you, Heather but Human Lightning and Wild are in different school and they are not in relationship with Human Rarity or Pinkie. Oh! Not to mention Human Rainbow is not dating Human Soarin or where is the ship tease for Human Applejack with Human Rogue? Hell! Would we even get to see Human Rogue appear in EQG world?!

Sorry, just pointing it out.

My apologies.

"Whoa!" He heard Timber say as he helped her back up. "I know I'm charming, but you don't have to fall for me." Twilight blushed at this, Flash now feeling the gut wrenching sensation fill him.

Presses a BOO button again

Random man: YOUR PICK-UP LINE SUCK TOO, TIMBER SPRUCE!!!!!

Yup, even Patrick doesn't like that line too.

Everyone smiled at this, liking the sound of it. That is, till Timber spoke up, "I don't know. It's an awful lot of work." He moved over to Gloriosa, crossing his arms. "I wouldn't want you guys to miss out on doing other fun camp stuff because you're so busy building a dock for future campers."

Excuse me for one moment...

Timber is definitely one lazy slacker bum!

Timber smirked as he put the lantern down. "You think that's crafty? You should see my macaroni art." He then whispered something Flash knew wasn't funny, through Twilight clearly found it because she started giggling.

SHUT UP! SHUT UP!!! SHUT UP, TIMBER SPRUCE!!!!! :flutterrage:

"I...I'm not sure," he looked at his hands and saw they weren't hurt. Not a single splinter had pieced his skin, "The board just shattered."

First The Flash and now, The Hulk? Damn? What kind of power you having, Flash?!

I hope Flash grow some spines and just confessed to Twilight about her feelings or else, he will let Timber win!

Come on, Flash!

Oh Flash....

That ending is gonna make things interesting for the next chapter.

Another good chapter. You already managed to fix one of the biggest problems with Legend of Everfree, Sunset’s advice to Flash. She gives entire friendship speeches to everyone else, but the most she could spare him was a “get over it” in canon, I call that borderline relationship sabotage. Bu5 here she actually gives him good advice, and is onboard with the Royal Knights plan to help him and Sci-Twi hook up.

I’m curious to see what Flash’s powers exactly are, or maybe he has multiple powers since he currently seems to have Lightning and strength based magic.

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I didn't think about that, but sorry to disappoint you, Heather but Human Lightning and Wild are in different school and they are not in relationship with Human Rarity or Pinkie. Oh! Not to mention Human Rainbow is not dating Human Soarin or where is the ship tease for Human Applejack with Human Rogue? Hell! Would we even get to see Human Rogue appear in EQG world?!

Sorry, just pointing it out.

My apologies.

On one hand, I see your point, I really do. But on the other hand, High School romance does not always instantly equal future partners. It is possible any of them could hookup sometime after they graduate or something.

can not wait to see what you got planned te end part got me hype high long time reader just made a account and figuring things out and hope to start posting soon.
But I really want to see how this will go.

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Fair enough.

I could see some of them hooking up after graduating from school.

Comment posted by Foxhelm deleted March 30th

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Alright, I tend to get carried away with bashing Timber everytime he's appeared.

I will tone it down but still.

He's lucky that I ain't his boss or otherwise, I would fired him or even worse, call police on him for dating a minor like Sci-Twi.

Just saying.

I'll admit I'm not a fan of EQG and Timber but I'm liking where this is going and you have been doing a really good job on the Flash Sentry Chronicles. Makes me Whish you were a writer for Flash Sentry in the cannon show.

Yeah, no offense, but this story is even more big saddening than the source material so far, and the only thing I've been able to look forward to is Twilight and Timber not being a thing. Also, please tell me Flash is going to do more than notice that Twilight is having problems. I get that he's feeling inadequate, but at least have him TRY to show her that he cares about her problems, even if it's something small.

Like I said last time, our interpretations of who these characters are sometimes don't agree, so don't take everything I just wrote personally.

Glad that the Royal Knights & Sunset are on Flash's side regarding his feelings for Twilight, especially Sunset's brutal honest advice! :rainbowkiss: Also Flash's powers are starting to get stronger, hopefully that dock won't get destroyed too much like in canon! :raritywink:

And lo & behold......some Highlights! :

"You guys are being ridiculous," Flash stood up. "There's nothing going on between me and Twilight."

"But you want there to be," Iron chuckled while Flash turned to glare at him. "Admit it."

First laughed, "Flash and Twilight, sitting in a tree."

"K-I-S-S-I-N-G," Heather continued.

"No, no, NO!" Flash yelled, "You guys are dead wrong."

De Nile Flash......more than just a river! :rainbowlaugh:

"Because she doesn't know you're an option." Flash turned to her with wide eyes, "The way I see it, you've got two options. Either tell Twilight how you feel and see where it goes from there, or don't tell her and find a way to get over your feelings for her. Because even if you're not willing to risk your friendship, getting jealous every time she shows interest in a guy isn't going to do it any good."

"Ouch," Flash added, "You're not pulling any punches."

Sunset playfully punched him in the shoulder, "Not really my style. Sorry."

Gotta love her brutal honesty! :rainbowlaugh:

Flash let out a growl, unconsciously tightening his grip on the wooden board. He remembered what Sunset had told him, wanting to not be jealous, but he couldn't help it. That is, till the plank in his hands suddenly exploded. He felt his hands touch as sawdust and large splinters scattered everywhere around him. The sound caught the attention of everyone around him, Twilight turning to him, "Flash?" She moved over to him, "Are you okay?"

"I...I'm not sure," he looked at his hands and saw they weren't hurt. Not a single splinter had pieced his skin, "The board just shattered."

Just think, that could've been your head Timber!:twilightoops:

"I don't know," Rainbow replied with a slight gulp, "Gaia Everfree could be some creature that got booted from Equestria and ended up in this world." She began to hug herself, "That's what happened with the sirens."

"What are the odds of that happening twice?" Flash added, "Even if that Star...swirly guy did like banishing evils to other worlds, he'd have to be a total idiot to send them all to one world. That's just asking for trouble."

He he yeah, a total idiot indeed..........oh boy! :twilightoops:

As soon as the light came on, the flashlight's bulb exploded. Flash quickly dropped the device, making it hit the ground with the broken glass surrounding it. He stared at the destroyed tool in shock, soon walking around to reach a lantern, which thankfully didn't explode. The teen began to pick up the broken glass next, grumbling to himself as he finished the job right before Iron showed up.

Better reign in those emotions Flash, before you blow up something bigger! :pinkiegasp:

Sweet 2nd chapter Banshee, till the next one!!! :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Foxhelm deleted March 30th
Comment posted by Foxhelm deleted March 30th

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Nothing will ever make SciTimber okay for me. I'd prefer her staying single over that. :ajbemused:

Banshee, as a woman, I have no way of knowing what it's like for a man to be crippled by inadequacy, but I am of the opinion that a real man wouldn't let inadequacy stop him from giving a woman what she needs, and right now, Twilight needs someone to talk to, someone who will listen, and someone who will show her that he cares. If Flash doesn't find a way to at least TRY to give that to Twilight, then maybe his love for her is purely imaginary. :ajsleepy: He doesn't have to tell her how he feels. He just has to let her know he's there for her. That's it.

poor Flash going through so much

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Well Timber Spruce is a jerk.

This story is getting interesting so far! I am just shocked that there are so many people who hate Timber Spruce. He seems like a good person. While I still ship Flash with Twilight in both Equestria and the human world, I don't want to see Timber getting mistreated. I think that would be unfair. I just have to agree with Foxhelm about this.

I would be fine if SciTwi got together with Timber and Flash would be content with them. Those boys could even settle peace between each other. Not that I think it will happen anyway. I just want to read a good story.

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Well he brags alot, and he kept flirting at Applejack, and he's only like Twilight's body, and let not forget that one time he use Twilight as a human shield when they were at the beach and should I keep going on or you get what I'm mean?

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When did those things even happen?

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In the EQG shorts the beach episodes.

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I'm afraid I have to disagree with you. That was simply odd, friendly banter between Timber and AJ. Also, I thought Timber hiding behind SciTwi because they thought Pinkie's floatie was a sea monster was pretty funny. It's kind of the joke that the ordinary boy would hide behind the powerful girl in fear. It may seem a little cliche but that all it is, a joke. The guy isn't perfect of course.

I still don't see Timber Spruce as a bad guy in any way. Sorry😐🤷🏿‍♂️.

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Timber: Sees possible danger and hides behind a girl.

Flash: Sees actual danger but runs towards it because his friends need help.

Flash vs Timber, obvious winner in this situation.

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That's fair. However, I still won't start disliking the guy because of that. I don't want to cause any trouble. I still love your series so far.

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You have your opinions and I have my opinions.

I like Flash comfort Twilight over Midnight Sparkle incident but damn! That ending!

Not only Flash finally confesses about his true feelings toward Twilight (FINALLY!) but his powers causing him to run away from her as he doesn't want to hurt her like how Twilight doesn't want hurt to her friends.

Here's highlights

"GYAH!" She cried as she began to fall back, Flash gasping at this. But as she fell, something happened. In the blink of an eye, time stopped. Twilight remained frozen mid-fall while Flash stood there moving at normal speed, the teen's brain completely stalling at this. But then he noticed that Twilight was still falling, just very slowly, and quickly ran up. Moving at relatively normal speed compered to everything else, he managed to reach her before she fell in the pond behind her.

Okay, I definitely playing both songs right now!

"WHOA!" They both yelled as they fell, their faces coming within inches of one another. Both of them panted as they stared at each other, Flash doing everything in his power not to blush until Twilight realized she was laying on him.

Ship tease! ❤️❤️❤️

"Right," Twilight nodded before taking a deep breath. "Keep it together...deep breaths. You are not a monster." Flash was about to add a quip in, only for someone to walk out from around a tree, making both yell. That is, till they saw it was Timber, making Flash scowl as Twilight said, "Oh...hi." She let out a chuckle, "What are you doing here?"

Way to go, Timber for ruined the moment.

"Yeah...though it has its downsides." He pushed a branch up so he and Twilight could walk under it, then let it go, causing it to twang right into Flash's face. The teen staggered back, but the other two didn't even notice. "When I was younger, I wished we'd sell this place so we could live in a town like normal people."

Rude. 😡

"Ooookay," Flash commented, "Now I've really seen everything."

Get used to it, Flash. You will be seeing a lot of weird stuffs but unfortunately, unlike your pony counterpart, you along with Sci-Twi, Rainbooms and Royal Knights of this world sadly won't get a proper closure due to Equestria Girls got cancelled.

Damn it, Hasbro.

"Power?" Sunset gasped before snapping her fingers, "Maybe that's it. Flash's power isn't strength or speed, it's energy."

Definitely The Flash.

Flash looked away, taking a deep breath. But as Twilight looked around the tree to stare at him, he glanced back at Timber. "Yes, I do like her. More than that, I really like her. I care about her more than anything in this world, even myself." Twilight's jaw began to drop at this, her entire world turning upside-down as he continued, "That's why I'm willing to let her go if she'd be happy with you."

Spits drink

WHAT?!?! You can't be serious! I like you're not acting possessive but really?! :pinkiegasp:

"NO!" He yelled, "Stay away!" They locked eyes at this, Twilight now seeing pure fear in his. "I don't wanna hurt you." And as those words hit Twilight's ears, memories of their earlier conversation now struck her. The memory hit her brain like a truck, making her gasp as she knew what Flash was feeling at the time.

Poor Flash. :pinkiesad2:

P.S.

Here's a lesson.

Don't bottle yourself so much cause the more you bottle yourself, you ends up hurting yourself.

It's better to talk with someone about the issues or else, you will hurt yourself like what happens with Twilight and especially, Flash.

Comment posted by Foxhelm deleted March 30th

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To be fair, at least Flash didn't came across as possessive about Twilight.

He was willing to let her to be with Timber if it make her happy.

I know a certain author (whom I refuses to name) tend to write a lot of fiction where all of his character came across as possessive about girls and get butt hurt when the girls doesn't love them back.

Okay, this was worth the price of admission. :ajsmug:

Loving this looking forward what the last three are going to be about.

Yikes, quite the cliffhanger at the end there for Flash & Twilight, hoping they can bounce back from this next chapter! :fluttercry: On the light side it was interesting seeing the main cast finding out their powers! :rainbowdetermined2:

*flicks on a flashlight* Now where are those pesky Highlights? :

Everyone turned to the dock, now seeing the boat had somehow shot halfway across the lake and slammed right into it. The riders, Sandalwood and Derpy, were in the water while Timber, Fluttershy and a student named Captain Planet were on what remained of the dock.

Ok if a pig/human hybrid shows up to pollute the camp's lake I'm out of here! :facehoof::rainbowlaugh:

"GYAH!" She cried as she began to fall back, Flash gasping at this. But as she fell, something happened. In the blink of an eye, time stopped. Twilight remained frozen mid-fall while Flash stood there moving at normal speed, the teen's brain completely stalling at this. But then he noticed that Twilight was still falling, just very slowly, and quickly ran up. Moving at relatively normal speed compered to everything else, he managed to reach her before she fell in the pond behind her.

Whoa, Flash just went Neo for a sec there! :twilightoops:

Sunset crossed her arms at this, "I still think we should try to figure it out."

Flash nodded in agreement, "I'm with Sunset. I don't want our powers to suddenly go off and make a disaster. What if Rainbow accidently goes super speed and runs off the edge of a cliff?" Rainbow went pale at that thought.

Welp.....that was a buzzkill! :ajbemused:

Flash looked away, taking a deep breath. But as Twilight looked around the tree to stare at him, he glanced back at Timber. "Yes, I do like her. More than that, I really like her. I care about her more than anything in this world, even myself." Twilight's jaw began to drop at this, her entire world turning upside-down as he continued, "That's why I'm willing to let her go if she'd be happy with you."

No no no FLASH!!!!!!!! :pinkiegasp::facehoof:

"NO!" He yelled, "Stay away!" They locked eyes at this, Twilight now seeing pure fear in his. "I don't wanna hurt you." And as those words hit Twilight's ears, memories of their earlier conversation now struck her. The memory hit her brain like a truck, making her gasp as she knew what Flash was feeling at the time.

But before she could say anything, Flash turned and with a great jump, managed to leap onto a branch of a nearby tree. "FLASH!" Twilight yelled, but Flash jumped away. Leaping from branch to branch, he disappeared into the forest, the lightning disappearing into the night.

Doggone it my heart, why????? :fluttershyouch:

Things sure went pear-shaped at the end there, hoping things are looking better next chapter Banshee! :twilightsmile:

Wow, so Flash's powers are "Energy" which can be used for speed, strength, or lightning. That sounds useful.

Flash confronting Timber was a great part. Even if I absolutely do not support the idea of Twi and Timber together, I will admit that Flash saying all he wants is for Twilight to be happy, even if she doesn't end up with him, was very mature of him. Though what happens afterwards with him running away from Twilight hurt a bit. I hope he'll be okay.

"Yeah...though it has its downsides." He pushed a branch up so he and Twilight could walk under it, then let it go, causing it to twang right into Flash's face.

Asshole! I've seen stuff like that elsewhere. Most commonly a version where someone holds a door open for someone then purposely closes it in someone else's face. It is one of the easiest ways to show someone is a jerk.

Flash gave him a long glare, his eyes narrowing as he saw Timber just calmly smile at him. "Good. I won't do anything to get between the two of you. But be warned that if you do anything to hurt Twilight in any way." He held his right hand up. "If you break her heart, I'll be on you like that!"

He snapped his fingers...and that's when it happened. A sudden bolt of light blue electricity exploded from between his fingers, firing right at Timber. The bolt then shifted just past him, striking the tree behind him. He, Spike and the girls all gasped at this, but didn't have the time to process it as a cracking sound caught their attention.

Ah, so close to zapping him. Oh well, maybe we'll get lucky in one of the chapters we have left.

Poor flash hope he will be alright.
also while he might have liked Sci twi he was willing to let her go

Comment posted by Foxhelm deleted March 30th

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I kind of agree with you. Not wanting to antagonize anyone. You made some valid points. While I ship Flashlight, I can't help but think of the pony versions in this AU. The SciTwi and EQG Flash don't seem to have the same romantic spark as those two do, in my eyes.

Comment posted by Foxhelm deleted March 30th

Well, at least Flash finally control his power... ish.

Look like this chapter has officially sunk the ship between Sci-Twi and Timber... I think.

Here's highlights

'Flash likes me...he said he likes me?!' she asked in her head, 'But...but why me?! Why would he fall for me and not like....Sunset or Rarity?! They're much better looking and I'm...I'm... She looked down at her hands, 'I'm nothing special. No one should like me, not even...Flash.' Her thoughts hesitated at that moment, a new question forming in her head, 'Wait...do I like Flash?'

Geez, Twilight! Don't be so angsty about yourself! We get it! Who do you think you are?! Wanda?!

I watched WandaVision... awesome show. :pinkiehappy:

"Oh..." Timber stumbled on his words, only to narrow his eyes, "Good. So, you know what he tried to do to me, right?" Twilight glanced back at him, raising an eyebrow as he continued, "You saw what he did. He somehow...shot a bolt of lightning at me! I don't even know how that's possible, but he almost fried me!"

Jumping to a conclusion too soon, Timber? :ajbemused:

"Leave!" The girl yelled, not noticing several objects around her to suddenly glow purple and begin to float in the air. Timber went wide-eyed at this, backpedaling as her began to tremble. And as he did this, Twilight saw what she was doing, closing her eyes as she tried to calm down. But as she did this, the items stayed suspended in air, only for the sound of footsteps to scrape under her.

Press the button

Sorry, I just couldn't resist. :ajsmug:

"Oh please," Heather groaned while putting her hands on her hips. "We know that look. It's the same look you used to give us when you were pretending to be nice to us so Lightning would like you." Sunset's eyes darted away at that, remembering that certain memory, "Sunset...that's the look you use that says you're hiding something."

"So what is it?!" Iron finished.

Busted!!!

"Still weird." The Royal Knights then shrugged and walked away, all hoping this wouldn't lead to more magic insanity and giant portals to another world.

You just jinxed yourselves, Royal Knights. :ajbemused:

"So you're gonna let them go!" The four all turned to the mouth of the cave, a lone teen boy now standing there with a long glare.

Flash to the rescue!

The vines slammed into Flash's back, "AAAAAHHHHH!" He screamed in pain, the vines to wrapping around his midsection before spreading to his arms and neck. Once tightly gripping him, the vines retracted, pulling him down to his knees before everything but his face was surrounded by the vines.

Or not. :twilightoops:

Can Flash, Twilight and Sunset make it back to Camp Everfree before it's too late?!

Will Gaia Everfree succeed on trapping everyone in her camp forever?!

When will Twilight get over her angsty-ness?!

Find out on the next exciting chapter of The Flash Sentry Chronicles!

Kyle Hebert will be proud of me!

Kamina: WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE?!

Comment posted by Foxhelm deleted March 30th
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