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Banshee531


I've always been a lover and writer of fanfiction, but it wasn't until I got into MLP that I really found something I loved writing about. Hope you all enjoy.

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This story is a sequel to Flash Sentry, Defender of the Peace S2


After what could possibly be considered the most craziest wedding ever, Flash and friends are finally back home, safe and sound. However, when a new ancient and dark evil appears, its up to the Elements of Harmony to save the day once again. Will they win, or will this latest battle be their last?

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Chapters (8)
Comments ( 112 )

It's gonna be Flash Sentry, isn't it?

Comment posted by Brawny Steed deleted Mar 20th, 2018

An interesting start, I was expecting something else. But let's see how this plays out.

Well that’s an interesting prologue. I wonder how things between Flash and Sombra will be in this story, considering how they were in your Yugioh story. I’d like to see more of this Ruby character and her relationship with the princesses.

Hey, this got featured! Its on the bottom, but still...Way to go!:twilightsmile:

Edit: And its gone...oh well. Still, it was nice to see this featured.

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Well, it keeps going in and out on the featured board.

"It seems you won this round Sombra. I just hope that when you return, there will be a warrior strong enough to defeat you."

Cut to Flash sleeping comfortably in bed. Then, Scootaloo jumps him like "Come on, big bro! Wake up! Wake up! Wake up!" Flash attempts to crawl back under the covers. Then, Scootaloo jumps on him even harder.

I'm not making demands or anything, but this would be so cute if it actually happens.

Well. We may get a new knight. Great job. I can’t wait to see if Flash can meet Ruby.

Geez, a Flash Sentry fic in the Featured box? Is the world ending?

I haven’t seen this story in the featured board, but it is in the popular stories list.

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That would work...if this was at the end of this first chapter. I think the transition to the next chapter won't work as well.

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Well, I can picture someone maybe adding that scene if this ends up getting adapted into a movie or a TV special.

Sombra: "Grand Hoof never told you what really happened to your father."
Flash: "He told me enough. He told me you killed him."
Sombra: "No, I am your father."
Flash: "No, that's not true! That's impossible!"
Sombra: "Search your feelings, you know it to be true."
Flash: "NOOO!!!!"

I couldn't help myself.:rainbowwild:

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Of course not. :ajbemused:

Great job on the backstory, Banshee. :twilightsmile:

That’s the exposition out of the way. Now on to the action! Can’t wait for Flash to meet Ruby.

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Darn it, you beat me to it. lol

Overall great chapter. I like how Flash has job to do. I wonder how Ruby will react to him. Also I wonder if his magic may spook Ruby. Overall, I cant' wait to read how things are in the crystal empire.

Making friends with Ruby is turning out more difficult than anticipated.

Sombra: " Join me and I will complete your training. With our combined strength, we can end this destructive conflict and bring order to Equestria."

Flash: "I'll never join you!"

Sombra: "If you only knew the power of dark magic."

I regret nothing!:rainbowdetermined2:

I hope Ruby’s attitude improves once they stop Sombra.

Sombra: Flash. You can destroy Tirek. He has foreseen this. It is your destiny. Join me, and together we can rule Equestria as father and son. Come with me. It is the only way.

I regret nothing!

Sombra: There is no escape. Don't make me destroy you. You do not yet realize your importance. You have only begun to discover your power.

Sombra: You are beaten. It is useless to resist. Don't let yourself be destroyed as Grand Hoof did.

8854930 Don't make me put a ban on star wars quotes. :trollestia:

Comment posted by Foxhelm deleted Apr 11th, 2018

Oh boy, the climax is just around the corner. Ruby needs to be careful or she’ll get herself killed.

Oh and answers to your author's notes, Ruby will lose, 1) Sombra is a position of power that dwarfs her. 2) if she wins, that removes the threat that Sombra poses and thus removes all the narrative tension.

Twilight nodded before smiling. "At least this time I won't have to worry about you doing something reckless and getting yourself killed."

And... you jinxed it. ::ajbemused:

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Its not a jinx at this point. Every time Twilight asks him to not be reckless means he's gonna get in trouble.

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But Twilight didn't ask this time. She's just assuming that his current job and their present circumstances are going to prevent him from having to do anything reckless.

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Eh, just her mentioning that makes Flash do something reckless.

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Grand Hood: “Dark times lie ahead of us and there will be a time when we must choose between what is easy and what is right.”


You said nothing about Harry Potter, :trollestia:

8857414 It's what is good and what is easy. If you're gonna quote something, get it right.

So you went the Fiendship is Magic route? :ajbemused:
Boo!

I admit it's not a bad chapter, but why can't Sombra be the rightful king that fell into darkness and not an evil usurper?

Sombra just shook his head, laughing as he did. "I am not just any monster Ruby." He magicked off his cloak, revealing a royal cape that had been hidden beneath it. "I am the king of the monsters!"

To paraphrase Odo, Nobunaga, "I'm the (demon) king of the sixth heaven (hell). Come and face me!"

An entire chapter dedicated to Ruby’s backstory. Not bad. I guess we get back to the action next time.

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Grand Hoof: "So uncivilized."

Whoa, no wonder she was so dismissive of Flash when they met. In the next chapter, Flash does something reckless which somehow saves everyone, and Twilight yells at him. :raritywink::ajsmug:

Wow. I think Flash could relate well with Ruby. I wonder will he be able to help save Sombra, or will Sombra be destined to be destroyed.

"Ruby, it doesn't have to be this way. Join me in my conquest of the empire, and together we will rule this land. It is our destiny."

and you threated ban Star Wars quotes. :ajbemused:

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