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TheLegendaryBillCipher


More of an Equestria Enthusiast but glad to be here. | Audio Reader

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Hearts and Hooves Day is a busy time for many ponies, especially party ponies. Fluttershy knows this, but she can't help but worry if Pinkie Pie will return. Or maybe move onto somepony else.


Written for Hearts and Hooves Day 2020. (:pinkiehappy: :yay:)
Cover art used made by SpeccySY.

A thank you to Silent Whisper for proofreading before publishing.

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Comments ( 7 )

This story is absolutely adorable! It made me wanna hug the special people in my life. The characters were well-written too!

Awe! Flutterpie is by far my favorite ship between canon MLP characters, and it gets so little love. This was adorable, A+!!!

Flutterpie is a good ship, it's just...
Yes.

This story was sweet and I enjoyed it. Special mention for two things I appreciate a lot: 1) No vanished sidekicks. I tend to find it quite jarring when, in a Twilight-focused romance, Spike is never mentioned. Or Sweetie Belle (or her cat, forgot her name) for Rarity. Just... there's people around these people. They have family, friends, a social net that may or may not include pets. So Angel being present? Thumbs up! 2) Good Pinkie Pie characterization. She's exuberant. Full of energy, maybe even capable of breaking the fourth wall. But I always cherish those stories that depict her as a person, and not just a plot tool or one-trick-pony (harrharr). You gave her empathy, a softer side - I quite like that. (Admittedly, the shows writers themselves seemed to struggle with her character from time to time...)
Long story short:

Thank you.

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