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Cackling Moron

"Fluff" in the same way what collects under the sofa is fluff.


This story is a sequel to Sniffles

Having recovered from the lowly sabotage that had seen her briefly bedridden, The Queen and her thoroughly useless human servant can now proceed with vengeance, domination, victory and all other things that come naturally to her.

Events conspire to make this difficult.

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 507 )

I'm kinda curious to see how Chryssie and Richard met in the first place.

Congradulations, you managed to make Chrysalis of all characters cute.

Man I love your writing. Can't wait to see more!

Yo we heard you liked tsundres...

Imagine if we just never see Richard ever again. The rest of the fic is just playing it completely straight :rainbowlaugh:

The Tsun is strong within this one. Very, very strong :rainbowlaugh:

I'm divided between wanting shipping and for them to keep the father/daughter relationship. It's so adorable! :rainbowkiss:

Age and maturity are only loosely correlated.

I am unsatisfied by these portions and will now grovel at your feet for more.

Quick question. Firstly, how old is Richard. And secondly, how Russian is he?

As old and as Russian as he needs to be.

Honestly I haven't given it much thought. I rarely do. Somewhere between "born" and "dead".

Love, of either kind, finds a way :twilightsmile:

I’m getting more and more convinced that “Richard” is just a robot like C3P0. It’s like his only purpose in life is to clean and do as he’s told. Is that the running gag of this one, that he’d really a butler robot?

First you had Russians and now you have bots?

He's actually just Huey, Dewey and Louie out of Silent Running all stacked in a trench coat.

...and they can talk now I guess.

Dear lord, we're approaching critical levels of tsun! Quickly, someone find that bug an appropriate way to Express some dere! Otherwise she MIGHT EXPLODE WITH VIOLENT ROMANCE!

And that would be terrible.


Age and maturity are only loosely correlated.

Yes. They actually post that along with my picture in several local schools and municipal buildings as a suitable warning to the public at large.

Gosh I absolutely adore your writing . I crave more chapters !

No that would be awwwffuulll if that happened.

I've arbitrarily decided to toss them out at midnight, because I can.

That's midnight where I am, obviously.


I suppose that's Australia then . Joke's on you , when it's midnight where you live , it's only 2pm here in France !

...how can it be 2pm I'm only across the channel and it's, like, five thirty...

I never had a good grasp of time anyway.

I keep picturing Richard as being always dressed in a perfect butler suit.

Me neither , just know that there is around an hour difference between France and the UK . But I need to say that I made a mistake myself , I took into account the hour where you answered my first comment and not the time where you uploaded the thing so the timestamps in my comment where false and that I in addition rounded the thing instead of saying the exact time.

My raging angst has been tempered by your strong words. Thank you

im imagine a future scene where it how the villain three getting defeated like in canon but Richard just shows up and politely abducts chrysalis before she get turned to stone to the confusion of everyone and a mortified chrysalis

I don't know about this Richard fellow, he seems to be falling down on the job. I mean, there he was, Chrysalis laying on top of him and he doesn't try to pet or even hug her! Everyone knows you have to hug the bug! Get it together Richard!

Chrysalis: You dare think you have the permission to hug Your Queen! I should execute you for your insolence! A Queen does not need to be pitied by some lowly creature! *Fights as hard as possible to deny that it feels nice*

This modern world is so confusing...

Whatever floats your boat, I say.

Being human, he found the choice unsettlingly euphemistic. Like what you’d find stamped on the records of someone who’d had an icepick tapped into their brain. He knew it wasn’t like that, it was just where his mind went. Cultural thing.

Yo, was that a mother fuckin Trotsky Assassination reference!

I was thinking more lobotomy, myself.

Tap tap.

"While you were learning how to spell your name, I was being trained to conquer empires!”

I see Chrysalis is being played by John Travolta in a wig made of blue cellophane.

Nice chapter .One thing I wonder tho is if Richard actually thinks the ponies are the badies in this story ?
Because to us who have watched the series it is obvious they are not but to someone who doesn't know much outside of where he is (read:Richard), he could actually think that Chrysalis is the good guy in the story .

Also , I might be wrong but I think you forgot the quotes in this line :

It had been spiky, too! Couldn’t ever forget the spikes. The spikes were important.

How much - or how little - Richard is aware of is an open question, and doesn't really matter, ultimately. He's at least on-the-ball enough to hazard a guess that the hammy lady insisting on still being called a queen despite hiding in the woods and swearing revenge is probably not the good guy.

Mainly he just has a soft spot for her. As shall be elaborated upon...

And, weirdly, that's not meant to be in quotes. S'just a line. Spikes are important!

Damn, Richard has the patience of a saint. I wonder if he had some kind of a caretaker job back in his world.

Got a typo in that there chapter title.
Anyway, nice work!

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