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There’s more to the magic of friendship than meets the eye!

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This story is a sequel to A Place in Equestria


Queen Chrysalis and the evil Changelings are back, and are hungry once again! When they kidnap Thomas, the Changeling queen has devised a evil plot for use on the sweet child as her way to extract her revenge on Princess Celestia, Luna, Cadance and Shining Armor, and the Main Six, and then conquer all of Equestria.

After the Mane 6, Starlight, Trixie and Spike are chosen to go rescue their precious little Thomas by being led by a reformed changeling named Thorax, they vow to bring him back before all of Equestria is doomed.

(This is my alternate take on the episodes “The Times They Are A Changeling” and Parts 1 and 2 of “To Where and Back Again”)

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 21 )

Do the guards know that Thomas is Celestia and Luna's nephew

The three fillies looked with fearful shock and Thomas looked at them like they saw a ghost. “Thomas! Look out!” Scootaloo said. Thomas turned around and saw the Changeling, “AAAAAAAAHHH! MOMMY, HELP ME!”

“Hang on, little bro!” Scootaloo shouted, as she charged towards the Changeling, but two more appeared. Scootaloo backed up, and then Sweetie Belle screamed, “RUN!” The fillies ran off to hide. The Changeling that surrounded Thomas wrapped him up in Changeling slime and held him in its forelegs, “No! No! No! Help!” The Changelings flew off with their hostage, “MOMMY!”

Thomas sounded a lot like Nemo just now

never take away a child from the mother she will move hell to get their child back

It's he is me the names been taken by my friend mostly

awesome i hope thomas feel better soon

I can't wait to see the next chapter

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Yep, but I made it a Christmas special, taking place between “A Hearth’s Warming Tail” and “Best Gift Ever”

When Chrysalis drained all the love out of Thomas, I think it was almost similar to the 'Dementor's Kiss'

You'd get really sick similar to the way Thomas did if you were attacked by a dementor.

The Changeling hissed at him, and then Thomas cowered, and then they made it back to the Badlands, until they saw the Changeling Kingdom up ahead, which was a really big pointy hive with big holes./quote]

It looks almost like a Geonosian hive

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