Daydreamer Series: Story #1, Pathway to Madness

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Daydreamer Series: Story #1, Pathway to Madness

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Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #1 · Feb 14th, 2020 · 1 · · Prologue: The Birth of insanity incarnate ·

I hope that you'll all enjoy this story.

red-sun

red-sun #2 · Feb 14th, 2020 · 1 · · Prologue: The Birth of insanity incarnate ·

interesting idea

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #3 · Feb 14th, 2020 · 1 · · Prologue: The Birth of insanity incarnate ·

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I know, right. I don't think any Midnight Sparkle fanfic writer has done something quite like this before.

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #4 · Feb 14th, 2020 · 1 · · Prologue: The Birth of insanity incarnate ·

To anyone reading this story, please leave a like if you enjoyed reading it.

Also, leave a comment telling how much and why you enjoyed reading it.

Nosoni

Nosoni #5 · Feb 16th, 2020 · 2 · · Chapter 1: There's nothing more Contagious then Laughter! Part 1: The Confrontation ·

Really amazing story so far im getting a good Joker vibe coming from midnight sparkle keep up the amazing work and cant wait how you introduce sunset

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #6 · Feb 16th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 1: There's nothing more Contagious then Laughter! Part 1: The Confrontation ·

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Thank you so much, I really needed to hear something good about this story because I wanted to give a new take on the character.

diablo4000

diablo4000 #7 · Feb 16th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 1: There's nothing more Contagious then Laughter! Part 1: The Confrontation ·

It's a good idea and interesting but......It too fast, your rushing the story and just getting things over with.
it so fast and rushed..

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #8 · Feb 16th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 1: There's nothing more Contagious then Laughter! Part 1: The Confrontation ·

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Ok, I understand, I'll make some edits to try and make Midnight's little chit-chat with her father a lot longer and I may have to change the ending to just driving him insane instead of blasting his face into hamburger, cause I just realized that would be an act of more satisfying revenge than just killing him, I'd also have to include a torture scene.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #9 · Feb 23rd, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 1: There's nothing more Contagious then Laughter! Part 2: The Comedy begins! ·

As people would always say, all it takes is one rotten day to turn a normal member of society into a monster.

I thought the Joker was the only one who said that. And he only said it once.

DangerDean

DangerDean #10 · Feb 23rd, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 1: There's nothing more Contagious then Laughter! Part 2: The Comedy begins! ·

Down the hatches!
We got a badass Twilight! This is not a drill!

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #11 · Feb 23rd, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 1: There's nothing more Contagious then Laughter! Part 2: The Comedy begins! ·

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I know right, I always wanted to make Midnight Sparkle have a more psychological like origin instead of that "Unleash the magic, Free the Magic" BS that we got in the movie.

P.S. I hate principal Cinch, by the way. So what do I do to satisfy my hatred for her, how about death by Midnight mist, my version of Joker Toxin.

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #12 · Feb 23rd, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 1: There's nothing more Contagious then Laughter! Part 2: The Comedy begins! ·

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Nova, As you have seen in my story, the Joker isn't the only one that's had a really rotten day.

Nosoni

Nosoni #13 · Feb 23rd, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 1: There's nothing more Contagious then Laughter! Part 2: The Comedy begins! ·

Cant wait for the action scene between daydreamer and midnight sparkle

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #14 · Feb 23rd, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 1: There's nothing more Contagious then Laughter! Part 2: The Comedy begins! ·

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Don't worry, it will come later on in the story.

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #15 · Mar 2nd, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 1: There's nothing more Contagious then Laughter! Part 2: The Comedy begins! ·

I wanted the theme of this story to be like a bleak Noir like feel to it.

redandready45

redandready45 #16 · Mar 26th, 2020 · 1 · · Prologue: The Birth of insanity incarnate ·

This looks...OK.

It is a bit cliché and forced, but it is a noble effort for a first or second story.

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #17 · Mar 26th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 1: There's nothing more Contagious then Laughter! Part 2: The Comedy begins! ·

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Why thank you. You are quite kind. I promise, more chapters will be coming soon.

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #18 · Mar 26th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 2: The Fatal Countdown to Madness! Part 1: Terror at the Grand Prix ·

What does everyone think of the new Chapter so far?

redandready45

redandready45 #19 · Mar 27th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 2: The Fatal Countdown to Madness! Part 1: Terror at the Grand Prix ·

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Disturbing.

But you need to divide up the writing into organized paragraphs.

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #20 · Mar 27th, 2020 · · · Chapter 2: The Fatal Countdown to Madness! Part 1: Terror at the Grand Prix ·

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Thank You, I'll try to work on that.

Northguard

Northguard #21 · Apr 12th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 2: The Fatal Countdown to Madness! Part 1: Terror at the Grand Prix ·

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This has great potential. Just organize the paragraphs and it will most likely end up in my favorites. I like where you're going with this.

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #22 · Apr 12th, 2020 · · · Chapter 2: The Fatal Countdown to Madness! Part 1: Terror at the Grand Prix ·

Thank You all so much, I didn't think that this story was going to be as popular as it is now.

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #23 · Apr 25th, 2020 · · · Chapter 2: The Fatal Countdown to Madness! Part 1: Terror at the Grand Prix ·

I'm not going to spoil anything, but the ending to this fanfic will be a tragic one.

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #24 · Oct 7th, 2020 · · · Chapter 2: Fatal Countdown to Madness. Part 2: It's a mad world out there. Part 1 of 2 Will you, Won't you, Will you, Won't you, Won't you join the dance. ·

How does everyone like the new chapter so far?

Northguard

Northguard #25 · Oct 8th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 2: Fatal Countdown to Madness. Part 2: It's a mad world out there. Part 1 of 2 Will you, Won't you, Will you, Won't you, Won't you join the dance. ·

Makes sense that she let Lemon live. She asked for forgiveness after all.

Kal Dano

Kal Dano #26 · Oct 8th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter 2: Fatal Countdown to Madness. Part 2: It's a mad world out there. Part 1 of 2 Will you, Won't you, Will you, Won't you, Won't you join the dance. ·

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👍👍👍👍👍

Grand-Galvatron

Grand-Galvatron #27 · Nov 27th, 2020 · · · Chapter 2: The Fatal Countdown to Madness! Part 1: Terror at the Grand Prix ·

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I have fixed the paragraphs so that they look better.

cloud45

cloud45 #28 · Jan 3rd, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter 2: Fatal Countdown to Madness. Part 2: It's a mad world out there. Part 1 of 2 Will you, Won't you, Will you, Won't you, Won't you join the dance. ·

twinkle twinkle littlie bat how i wonder where your at

EASTON

EASTON #29 · Jan 23rd, 2023 · · · Chapter 2: Fatal Countdown to Madness: Part 2 It’s a Mad World out there. Part 2 of 2: Would not, could not, would not, could not, could not join the dance. ·

I had forgotten the plot

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