Have you ever had a rotten day, well, in the case of Twilight sparkle, she has had a really rotten day, and now it might turn her into a monster.
What does everyone think of the new Chapter so far?
10149167
Disturbing.
But you need to divide up the writing into organized paragraphs.
10151229Thank You, I'll try to work on that.
10149167This has great potential. Just organize the paragraphs and it will most likely end up in my favorites. I like where you're going with this.
Thank You all so much, I didn't think that this story was going to be as popular as it is now.
I'm not going to spoil anything, but the ending to this fanfic will be a tragic one.
10177376I have fixed the paragraphs so that they look better.
What does everyone think of the new Chapter so far?
10149167
Disturbing.
But you need to divide up the writing into organized paragraphs.
10151229
Thank You, I'll try to work on that.
10149167
This has great potential. Just organize the paragraphs and it will most likely end up in my favorites. I like where you're going with this.
Thank You all so much, I didn't think that this story was going to be as popular as it is now.
I'm not going to spoil anything, but the ending to this fanfic will be a tragic one.
10177376
I have fixed the paragraphs so that they look better.