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Dr Sharaz Jek
Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!
Dr Sharaz Jek
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This could use some cleaning up, but at the same time was really hot how it tells of such dark acts but saves most explicit detail to instead properly portray the narrator's voice. Appreciate it! 💕
I don’t like it. You teased me by the cover art; which now officially does not go with this story
At least you know that death is better, but killing your child when they are born, that I do not except. Also, thanks for using that "spear", there is to many cowards that doesn't do that.
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Thank you! It's true pretty much all my fics could use cleaning up; should probably invest in an editor someday but am shy about that!
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Hard to find exactly what I want, but that was the closest Fleur design I could find for how I pictured her here. Much happier looking than she ends up, though...
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Understandable, I certainly don't advocate most of the dark stuff that crosses my mind! I find it interesting to think about, at least.
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
Remember to vote in the contest's poll -- voting closes at midnight, June 6th.
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Having the narrator go last is a good way to build up tension and sexual energy.
-Seems very edgy and trying too hard.
-Doesn't really earn the dark places it tries to go to.
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barely half-erect at the site.-- sight.-It's nice that the narrator is at least a little bit conflicted about this.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 60/100
Allure: 70/100
Enticement: 50/100
Immersion: 80/100
Prose Quality: 89/100
Total Score: 349/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!
Well congrats. This story got me reading the Black Company books.
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Excellent, I love the series but it's an acquired taste, so I hope you enjoy it!
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About 70 pages into first book now. So far it isnt bad.
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Nice, the earliest portion is the hardest imo as you're thrown in without context, although once I understood what the author was doing I loved it.