• Published 19th Oct 2019
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The Dawn of a New Mission - ScorchingFlamesInc



For the first time in a long time, the cutie map summons a particular student of Twilight Sparkle to solve a friendship problem. The problem? Teach three familiar characters the power of friendship. It won’t be easy.

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Bonus: Outtakes and Bloopers (Non-canon)

Author's Note:

Character key

Green=Chrysalis

Red=Tirek

Light Pink=Cozy Glow

Hot Pink=Luster Dawn

Purple=Twilight Sparkle

Violet=Spike

Grey=Tree of Harmony Spirit

Blue=Crew Member

Black=Director

*Chapter 1, Take 1*

"You know about the Tree of Harmony, right?

(Luster nods)

"Well... um... sorry, I may need more time to prepare for this. You told me to say it in my own words and I need to get it right."

*Chapter 1, Take 2*

"You know about the Tree of Harmony, right?"

(Luster nods, but then her nose twitches)

"ACHOO!!!"

"CUT!!!"

*Chapter 1, Take 5*

"You know about the Tree of Harmony, right?"

(Luster nods. The boom mic hangs down when the shot returns to Twilight)

“Well, a while after I became an Alicorn, the next Summer Sun Celebration was only a short time away. However, on a night where the celebration was around the corner, Princess Celestia and Luna vanished. The sky had both the sun AND the moon, splitting it into two. Even worse, vines and clouds from the Everfree Forest started to cover Ponyville. My friends and I soon discovered-"

"CUT!!! Sorry, Princess, but the boom mic was in this shot."

(Twilight sighs and Luster giggles)

*Chapter 3, Take 4*

(Twilight dims her horn after pretending to free Chrysalis, Cozy, and Tirek from stone)

"ALRIGHT, BRING THE STATUE OUT OF HERE! PRINCESS, GET READY TO ACT WEAKENED!"

(Camera shows ponies putting the statue of Tirek, Cozy, and Chrysalis on a cart and rolling it away. Camera moves to show Chrysalis and Tirek on a bench)

"I have to say, they got every detail right."

*Chapter 4, Take 1*

(Luster is setting up the tent. But then a pole recoils and smacks her face)

"AH! SON OF A-"

"CUT!!!"

*Chapter 4, Take 2*

(Luster is finished setting up the tent, but then it crumbles to the ground)

"Seriously?"

*Chapter 5, Take 3*

"AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!"

(Chrysalis, Tirek, and Cozy run out of the woods, but then Chrysalis trips and lands on her hoof)

"ACK!"

"CUT!"

*Chapter 5, Take 4*

(Chrysalis, Tirek, and Cozy run out of the bushes. Tirek exits later, stumbling)

"Sorry, sorry! A branch hit me in the face!"

(Camera shows Chrysalis facehooving while Cozy giggles a little. Luster just watches.)

*Chapter 6, Take 1*

"NOW DO AS I SAY!!!"

(Luster giggles)

"What?

"Sorry, it's hard to take you seriously..."

*Chapter 6, Take 3*

"NOW DO AS I SAY!!!"

(Luster snickers loudly)

"Come on! That's the third time!"

*Chapter 6, Take 5*

"NOW DO AS I SAY!!!"

(Luster full-out laughs)

"Ok, can we just practice until she gets used to it?"

*Chapter 7, Take 9*

(Everyone is asleep. A clicking sound is heard. Seconds later, a blue pony calls out.)

"THE SMOKE MACHINE ISN'T TURNING ON!!! IT'S JAMMED!"

(Chrysalis opens her eyes)

"Really?"

*Chapter 12, Take 4*

"But DON'T think this means anything!!!...

(Everyone is staring at Chrysalis)

"Sorry, I forgot the rest of my lines. *begins chuckling* I didn't have enough time to read the script."

*Chapter 14, Take 9*

(Cozy runs over to Luster and begins crying. Chrysalis and Tirek join them in a group hug.)

"AAAAANNND... CUT!!!"

(Chrysalis, Cozy, Tirek, and Luster seperate. Cozy wipes her tears.)

"How was that? Was... was that good? I've been doing fake crying for years, that had to be good."

(Laughter)

"What? I'm serious."

*Chapter 16, Take 6*

(Tree of Harmony spirit takes red gem out of box. It projects something.)

"Loyalty..."

(She puts the gem away and takes out a pink one. It projects something too.)

"Kindness..."

(She puts pink gem away and looks in the box.)

"And... hey, where's the magic gem prop?"

(Everyone looks at Spike.)

"What? I was hungry and I didn't know it was the prop."

(Camera moves to show Cozy talking to Chrysalis)

"I'm surprised they even got the real Tree of Harmony Spirit to participate in this."

*Chapter 18, Take 4*

(Tirek, Cozy, and Chrysalis sit in a circle in their reformed appearences. Tirek opens a card package.)

"AND THAT'S A WRAP ON 'THE DAWN OF A NEW MISSION'!"

(Applause)

(Princess Twilight walks in with tray)

"WHO WANTS HAYBURGERS?"

"Not me."

(End)

Comments ( 17 )

Sounds intresting, I will definatly give it a try, when I have a bit more time on my hoofes.:twilightsheepish:

10210779

Take all the time you need.

10216037

Have fun reading this story, along with its sequel and threequel :pinkiehappy:.

I'm surprised the Tree of Harmony and Luster aren't pissed at Discord for what he did.

10345364
I'll mention that... somehow... in the next chapter.

10365234
agreed it's still a good idea on the story for cozy.

10365303
Well, have fun with the next ones.

10408392
Let me know when you do so I can know which ones got some stuff added in and such.


What do you think about my other comment by the way?
Felt like Discord sure caused issues more than he realizes, such as for the Royal Sisters there.

10408396
You definitely were trying to explain your thoughts.

10408399
Hopefully I can read the rest of the fic soon and the other one and such.

This was a amazing and inspiring fimfiction
Keep it up!!

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