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Zizi Tachyon


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In an alternative take on the grand finale, Chrysalis, Tirek and Cozy Glow betrayed the real Grogar. Overpowered and forced to team up with the Mane 6, they defeated the ancient wizard together. Tirek struggles with the memories of this brother and Cozy Glow questions her ideas of friendship and power. Together they travel to the land of centaurs to find answers to their problems and to understand friendship. Was Twilight right to let them free like that? And can they save Chrysalis from being consumed by self-doubt and lust for revenge?
(This is my first fic.)

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Comments ( 12 )

I’m interested in your story. Showing Twilight how the magic of friendship is blind to see the injuries and dying unless they accept it

Interesting place to start. I can't wait to see were this will go.

vito #3 · 1 week ago · · ·

Waiting for more!

I've said it before and I'll say it again, Tirek is a dad and it's beautiful. The way he protectively clutches Cozy and doesn't want his enemies to touch her, showing he cares for her well-being is content I wanted to see in the two-parter. Also, thank you for not having the princesses retire. Twilight just started up a school, and should run that for a while instead of jumping from a school she just began to ruling Equestria. I thought that transition in canon was WAY too fast.

I don't think 'Good heavens!' is something Twilight would say. That sounds more like Rarity.

Thanks for the positive reactions!

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I don't think she normally would say it either, but I figured it was appropriate for the situation, and I don't know of a better interjection for Twilight to use (it sounds better than "Sweet Celestia", and "Oh no" or something like that is too weak). If you have a suggestion let me hear it.

Janyo #7 · 1 week ago · · ·

Woah. Amazing! I loved it. I liked this world setting, I felt the explanation about the villains helping the Mane 6 was sorta rushed, I would like to know more about how the Legion of Doom worked with the girls together but well, it seems the plot is more about the things that will come next. Nice too see Tirek really care for Cozy, I hope they can be a good trio with Chrysalis. BTW, left her with Starlight could ve dangerous, I hope she didn't go nuts. Nice story. Hope you update soon.

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I understand that it's strange that I leave out much backstory. I was inspired to write about the villains after the finale, that's why I started here. Things that happened during the fight will definitely be integrated into the narrative and affect the motivations of the characters, so you'll hear more about it than in the "what happened previously" section. I've got a couple of interesting ideas for the fight and I'll keep fleshing it out. I may even turn it into a standalone story one day, if I can handle it.

Will there be a prequel that details how things would’ve gone if Grogar REALLY was back and knew about the Terrifying Triad’s attempt at betrayal before curbstomping all of Equestria’s defenders and taking control of the Windigos?

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I'd love to work it out, but first things first. I'm pretty busy, and this being my first fic (or even my first story since the days of high school assignments), I'm not exactly the fastest writer.

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I could provide you some dialogue if you’re interested.

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I'd like to try to write this myself, but if you want to help me out with drafts, I post the chapter in the 4chan FimFiction thread before I upload it here. You can leave crititicism if you like.

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