Gallus opened a door in the former castle of Princess Twilight Sparkle.
“This will be where the three of you sleep.”
“Thank you,” replied Chrysalis. She, Tirek, and Cozy stepped into the room.
The room was a peculiar one. There were three big beds. One was in the left corner. The other and the middle, and the third on the right.
“Do you promise to enjoy your new lives?" asked Gallus.
“We promise,” Cozy said.
“Perfect! I wish you a long and happy stay in Ponyville.”
With that, Gallus left, allowing the door to close on its own. The trio was now alone.
“The room is nice. I could get used to this!” Tirek said.
“Me too. It’s been so long since I’ve had an actual BED!!!” said Chrysalis.
“I bet the pillows feel like marshmallows!” Cozy Glow exclaimed.
“Maybe,” Chrysalis said. She then patted her head and discovered something wasn’t right. Her facial expression suddenly became one of worry.
“My crown! It must still be in that forest!”
“Should we maybe convince Luster to help you get it?” asked Tirek.
Chrysalis thought for a moment.
“Nah! Even if I go home after learning about friendship, the throne SHOULD belong to the one ruling it today.”
“Thorax?” Cozy asked.
“Yes. Changelings do have long lifespans, ESPECIALLY rulers. If I go home, I’ll find something to do.”
“WHEN you go home,” Tirek pointed out.
Chrysalis turned her head to him and smiled.
“Do you think your brother is still out there?” Cozy asked.
“Maybe,” Tirek said. “If so, I hope he’d forgive me.”
“Of course he would,” Cozy said.
“You sure?”
“Absolutely!”
Tirek smiled.
“So, Cozy,” Chrysalis began. “What do you think your cutie mark is gonna be? Your NEW one?”
Cozy put her hoof on her chin.
“Since my cutie mark that meant manipulation was removed, I have a feeling the new one will be the opposite.”
“Let’s hope,” Tirek said. He then walked over to a shelf with books in it and saw a deck of cards on top.
“Hey,” Tirek said. “Any of you wanna play cards?”
Chrysalis and Cozy looked at each other and nodded.
Tirek grabbed the cards.
“Any of you alright with playing in here?”
“Sure,” replied Chrysalis.
“Finding a table would take FOREVER!” said Cozy.
Tirek walked over with the cards and sat down. The other two former villains walkers around a bit and sat down too.
Tirek opened the card package.
The Magic of Friendship Grows.
The End
Pretty decent story, using Luster to reform them was a cool idea.
Very good. Though I think you need to make it clear when Gallus is saying "I promise you won't cause mayhem when I leave?" And shouldn't promise be "trust" or take out the "I".
Been a pleasure going over this for you. Hope I've been helpful.
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You have done well. I thank you for all your help.
And if you’re up for it, you can help edit the sequels or any other future stories.
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Thank you for the support.
This won’t be the end though... it’s just the beginning.
IF YOU DON’T READ THE AUTHORS NOTES, I ADVISE YOU READ MINE FOR INFO!!!
Aww, that was a cute ending <3 They became friends together in the end. That was a good story to pass the time. It felt a bit rushed and too ooc in some cases but it was good. Can’t wait to see the sequel.
This is a very nice ending. Truly this makes this a day glory.
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Thank you.
Cozy Glow meets Rumble.
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It's out now. And I have plans for the villains to work together in the third act.
Why didn't you respond to my comment?
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I have no idea...
Perhaps that can be up to any interpretation.
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Lol
This was a wonderful story. The only real complaint I have is that it seemed a bit rushed. Other than that, it was really heartwarming and I look forward to reading the rest of your stories. Keep up the good work!
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I might actually acknowledge that in a future story and make it a major plot point.
Plus, the sequel does take things a bit slower.
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Lol. Good one .
Nice story. It is always a pleasure to where there is story with trio getting a happy ending.
good story i just finished it and it was great i didn't want to admit it but i out of the three i was thinking cozy glow would be the only to reform in the finale (mostly cause she was a child but she's still my least favorite as both a character and villian) but still great story.
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Thank you. Have fun with the sequels.