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DwarvishPony


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This story is a sequel to Voices Taken


After almost two years dating Adagio, it's time for Sunset to take a long look at where things are going.


An entry into Oroboro's Sunset Shipping Contest-Endings

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Comments ( 10 )

I mean. It definitely fits the prompt, I can't deny that. I also can't deny the veritable sucker punch conclusion to one of my favorite Sundagio arcs, but I guess that's just inevitable.

nice work, though it is very sad.
also be sure you credit the cover artist

That's a heartbreaker. :fluttercry:

I've followed this particular Sundagio series since Voices Lost, but now it seems to have come to a bitter end.

However, I'm hoping that there will be a sequel to this in the future, one that's end on a happier note for Sunset and Adagio. Maybe even featuring Sonata, who's been absent thus far.

Sad story, but well done.

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Originally I'd had a much different story set up, but I scrapped it a few days before the deadline because it bored me.

I may still post it if I can work out the kinks.

A very bitter place to be, and an extremely hard choice to be made. I'd be lying if I said that I didn't hope for a reconciliation sequel, but that doesn't mean this is a bad resolution of the story. Well wishes to both Sunset and Adagio

Can't deny that this was very well done. As a huge shipper of these two, it truly broke my heart. :(

(no kidding i cried real tears)

Is it possible to have a sequel for this with a good ending? 💔😭

This reminds me of Posh's story, in a good way. I like the different approach in this one. It's been quite the trilogy seeing the relationship between these two as it rises and falls. For something written on a phone, it's very high quality.

Honestly this felt more like a cliffhanger than a heartbreaking end. Even with sunset feeling the way she feels she does not seem like the kind of person who would just abandon Adagio with nothing more than a written note explaining why she left. I would love to see a sequel for this because this just feels like another chapter is waiting around the bend.

Dang, just tear my heart out why don't you. :raritycry:
Well written even if it definitely wasn't the ending I would have liked. I could imagine not to this, but I understand that an ending needs to be an ending. Thanks for a great series.

This is a really interesting story, keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

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