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kelduo647


I'm your friendly neighborhood hero who adventures alongside his Pokemon partner Keldeo. Alone, we are strong. But together, we are the Kelduo!

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In the middle of an adventure to save Pop Star, Kirby and his new friends travel to the Divine Terminus to prevent the Jamba Heart from being reconstructed by Hyness and his generals. However, one of Kirby's allies makes a mistake, and suddenly, Kirby, his other two friends, and the evil Hyness find themselves in an unknown world. Equestria is suddenly threatened by Hyness, and the Star Allies must stop him. After that, lunch and a nap!

By the way, this is based on a fanfiction that I wrote and so will involve an original character or two. Some well-known characters will be mentioned but otherwise never appear. I intend to post the aforementioned fanfiction later, so be on the lookout!

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Comments ( 12 )

9615706
It's a work in progress. If you haven't played Kirby Star Allies, I suggest you at least research it before reading this story.

This is good I just hope you finished this story because I'm interested in it

This is so good my one problem is that I want the chapters to be longer

9620253
I'll do my best to make them longer. Just be aware that I'm not a professional writer. :twilightsheepish:

Uh oh, writer's block. Any ideas for the story?

9620813
You don't have to be a professional just try your best it's funny now just keep trying

this is based on a fanfiction that I wrote

Really? Can I get a link?

9628294
Sorry, but the fanfiction I wrote is on paper, and it doesn't heavily involve My Little Pony. Kirby Star Allies: Friend Hearts are Magic acts as a sequel to the sequel to that fanfiction. However, I'm in the process of making a sequel to this fanfic that will involve several characters you know and love. You'll get to read it after I finish Friend Hearts are Magic, so be on the lookout! :twilightsmile:

Until now, this story is really funny. Also, I like the lyrics of the song. You are really good with them.

9629326
Thanks, I've been working on the lyrics ever since I first heard the Friend Train theme. Also, what do you mean by "until now?" You have me concerned. Is there anything I need to do to revise the story?

9629533

Also, what do you mean by "until now?" You have me concerned. Is there anything I need to do to revise the story?

I meant nothing. Just that the story is fun so far. I haven't read the next few chapters for now, but I'm sure that they are as fun as the rest.

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