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Well, that was monumentally disturbing. Certainly sets the tone for the story though, and I'm definitely getting Kiva and Kikai flashbacks already... Very nice work, I have to say.
9613648 Never thought I'd actually take "monumentally disturbing" as a compliment, but here we are. I mean, that was the intention, its not some happy series with sunshine and rainbows, so the fact that you called it monumentally disturbing means I did my job right. yay.
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Heh, of course you'd use that picture. 👍 (See, I have to return the thumbs up!)
But yeah, this is definitely not going to be a happy story. No matter, if giving me flashbacks to Fallout Equestria and expanding upon Kikai's idea in a sense is a necessary evil, so be it.
9613670 Yeah, this should certainly be interesting going down the line. Ah the joys of a hive mind, even a fairly limited one.
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Because I can, and because I'm a nerd...
(Wrong type, I know but... Only so many Hive Mind videos I can find out there.)
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Not gonna lie, some of my favorite chapters in your Kamen Rider stories are the crossover chapters. Looking forward to some possible ones for this. (hint hint, nudge nudge)
In all seriousness, This was a wonderfully dark introduction, and has made me infinitely curious as to how this will play out.
9613839 That would be a fun crossover, not even sure how that would work honestly but hey if we can, sure. But yeah, this is a dark opening and this is going to be far from a cheerful story.
I greatly anticipate Chrysalis getting Rider Kicked.
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Yeah, I'd have to agree, I'm not even sure how I could do a crossover with this one. It'd require some thinking, and a lot of Decade binge-watching I suspect. But yeah, Ruin gave me some future plot details and let's say they leave me shuddering given Kabuto was another inspiration for this story from what she tells me.
9613874 Not gonna happen for a while, but I promise she will get Rider Kicked.
9613902 Well I'm not against the idea, but we'd just have to figure out how to make it work.
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Hmm... the sun sounds appetizing. She could join Phoenix up there. Charbroiled bug anyone?
So sets in the Blade part of the story... God above, I think I'm going to be sick. This... this just eclipsed any of your stories in pure fright.
Rain... No, I can't even call her that anymore. She needs to die.
No. Nonononono! DON'T DO IT YOU MONSTER!
I'm going with this one being Sweetie Belle?
Hey! The gang's all here! CMC represent!
Hmmmm.... I have a feeling that the Elements and Scarab might have a bigger connection than you're telling. Whether I'm right or wrong, please don't tell.
Also, Solar Wind and Moonbeam, Chrysalis' personal enforcers and most likely bodyguards.... Not that subtle, huh?
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My only experience with Kamen Rider is through the crossover stories on this site, so I don't exactly understand what's so terrifying about Blade.
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Trust me, you will. I'll try to avoid spoilers here, but there's a reason Kenzaki has possibly the most horrific fate amongst KR leads. Let me just say that.
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Also.....I'm getting Faiz vibes from this. ....then again, I recently watched reviews for Faiz and Paradise Lost.
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That must mean everyone should fail to communicate when they should by rule of common sense!
9617560 I am, kind of drawing on the darker aspects of Kamen Rider for this story. I'm gonna try and be less dark next chapter.
Ah yes, a wonderful first sight. Almost as nice as gazing into the eternal abyss of damnation, or in other words Michael Bay's TMNT.
Better ask for the safeword sooner rather than later.
"Oh no, we really shouldn't have had that party in the Everfree Forest, especially not with so much booze."
"Well, I always found you attractive and since you can't run away now..."
"Oh, just had a little fun..."
You are making this way too easy Rach.
"Now, where were my toys again?"
Is this Vore?
Oh, which innuendo to chose? Which one to chose?
Oh, I know.
"You get to bring new friends into the fold?"
"So, like an orgy?"
"NEEED D-!"
Ok, stop you right there. I'm not comfortable going this far just yet.
At this point, I'm convinced you are doing this on purpose.
Oh, I'm sure they are just out for quickies.
"Who knew she had a thing for you Sun Butt?"
"After a bit of fun of course. Wouldn't want our victory to be boring and dry after all."
"A good victory party. Prepare the prisoners!"
And of course the occasional "Pleasure Raid"
Like I said, "Pleasure Raid".
How? Seal shut her la... On second thought, I don't wanna know.
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I think you just ruined any nightmarish prospects Ruin set out with for this story in just several lines.
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I know and I'm not sure if I should be proud or ashamed.
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BE PROUD!
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...I will now be examining every Chrysalis line from this point forward to see how I could make innuendo out of it.
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Well, Changelings are MLP's version of the Succubus and Incubus myths...
Nice. The reveal I'm most looking forward to is the one around Solar Wind and Moonbeam. I'm excited to see the looks of despair and hopelessness on the ponies' faces...
9636695 Not saying that you’re right, but if you are they did know they fell a long time ago.
Oh yeah! Not sure if it was addressed in an earlier chapter, but what happened to Discord?
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"Fell" can imply more than one thing though...
9636704 He’s currently stoned off his butt.
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...What I'm interpreting from that is there's a possibility, no matter how remote or small, that he could play a part in events?
9636722 Was just a funny way to say he’s still a statue, but yes there is.
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Oh, that isn't going to be a pretty sight... Oooh boy.
So Scarab's first kill... Yeah, going to want to hug her soon.
One thing I have to question, why don't the Changelings send more than one Combat Drone down at a time? Yes, they have Drivers which means a Rider war of sorts is coming, but... Not like they have a budget to worry about. They could easily send down more than one to deal with the rogue Driver, who by and by I really like. Reminds me of a mix of Alfred and Ankh really...
9636747 It’s quite simple actually. Usually one Drone with a combat form would be enough to overpower a pony. They grossly overestimated their ability and underestimated her and her bond with Scarab.
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Ah, I see. But now, things should be very interesting given that they know what Scarab can do...
9636861 Oh definitely.
I ship it.
I would pay to actually see that happen. And the Changeling dumb enough to try.
Fucking god...
(And nor are you helping Layton in providing shortage of material... Sorry, had to make that given how... disturbing that scene actually is. Fuck you Prism.)
Uh-huh, that's not a unique color scheme or anything. Even if it's a throwaway line, I'm feeling better about my theory that the Magic of the Elements was used in the creation of Scarab and the Hive Drivers after this little thing.
Nice chapter.
9656757 Really it just goes with his color scheme in insect form but... yeah, that could make sense. I'm not gonna say either way, but its certainly an interesting theory.
Hajime can empathize.
...Should we call the Black Joker into this universe to clean things up a little?
Run away Scar(Let). Run away, and never return...
But seriously, I like her. She's a Changeling, yes, but she seems like a perfectly reasonable sort. Even saved Lime's life.
Corrupted Generosity. Oh, so we're going here again eh?
Tor lorek san, bor nakka mur,
Natromo faan tornek wot ur.
Ter Lantern ker lo Abin Sur,
Taan lek lek nok--Formorrow Sur!
...Okay, now this is interesting... Secondary Rider perhaps?
Just have to apply the latex and the buttplugs and they are ready!
"Shame none of them are dancing. I miss the cage dances in the hive!"
"Or they have gotten it and are just too eager to join our... escapades."
Yes, sex, sex and more sex and worst of all, hugs!
"Why would she need the Penetrator 3000 for that anyway?"
"Don't be ridiculous, you would like it anyway."
"Ok, listen, I heard they have that great healthcare plan and... Ok, it's the sex, I heard it's supposed to be super good! I kinda want to try it."
"You know, maybe it's one of their sex-toy-"
"I'm on it!"
You won't be just eating love...
"Do I have to shove it in my ass or, how does this work. what even is this? Strange sextoy!"
"Ah, now I get it! You are supposed to go in there! Nice!"
"Well, if you already have to ask-"
"SEA SPRAY!"
"Ok, ok, fine, we can do this later."
"No, by a pervert that could rival Chrysalis! The being a pony is just the cheery on top of it!"
"Wait, I'm pregnant?"
"What other functions do you have? I heard of those double penet-"
"I don't want to hear it!"
"And spend a year in chastity? I rather die!"
"And after that, my sex slaves!"
"Uh, you think I could stuff these two into my-"
"No!"
"Well, after I fucked the resistance out of you."
"Oh, we could do that later, as long as it doesn't involve my friends."
"I heard she has vibrating chastity belts... I hate my life."
"And I missed out on all the sex. But if you didn't want to, guess there was no other way."
Wait, she didn't take her as a plaything? I'm disappointed! And kinda heartbroken...
"Oh, now you decide to convert me? After all these years? You can shove it Rainbow! You lost your chance!"
"I said no! You made your choice years ago! I will not! You abandoned me and now you come crawling back? Buck off and fuck one of your pets you like so much!"
"Away from her! She doesn't want to play! Look for someone who actually wants to play with you. Only the lowest of the low dare to do this to unwilling ponys! Never heard of consent! I would be up though after I beat you green and blue."
"Apparently you don't know the word. You are following the wrong path to perversion! I will show you the right path towards the climax!"
"While that would sound lovely, it really does, they don't want that and as long as that is the case I won't stop fighting you!"
"So, it's not a sex toy? Lame!"
"Or do you want to visit the dungeon after our meeting? I have time, a lot of time!"
"I thought the montly 'party' was in a week?"
"We are currently testing prototype H.O.N.E.Y. It looks promising."
"With enough latex, gags, and toys she will learn. Oh, she will learn."
"Do you require our services? Should we get the lube?"
"Or they could have bribed a guard."
"Apparently not," Jasper returned.
"Smartass."
Oh, here it is ok? But when Light Bulb askes one time? Damn double standards!
"Well, I could study you..."
"Never mind, they may do as they please!"
"And you would be better of up my ass, but we don't always get what we want."
"If I'm of no use to you this way, I always am capable of providing more, pleasuring services."
"Nah, not now, maybe later."
"May I fuck you Princess?"
"Well, aren't you an eager one. Well, I think I have an idea..."
Later that evening a large orgie had erupted in Prism's Hive.
"If you dare to come back empty-handed I hope you enjoy being used as a toilet!"
"Don't play coy with me, my pleasure is your duty!"
Figures. Really, that was no surprise at all.
"Oh, one could tie someone to this tree and the sex would be phenomenal!"
"Do you ever think about anything other than sex?"
"No, Should I?"
"I will make sure no pony that doesn't want to play has to play their games! As long as that isn't the case is will I fight!"
Oh, now this was fun. Always happy to team up Rach. ...Now the question everyone should be asking is, how far can they run and how fast, before everything all goes to hell?
Erg...
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9748514 Don’t be silly, this is Scarab, you can’t go where you already are.
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Point taken. This is the kind of world Decade could go all Destroyer of Worlds on and it'd be considered merciful eh?
9749733 Possibly, but at the same time when you’re in Hell, the only thing you can do is fight to get out of it. That is after all at the core of this story.
This was entertaining, can't wait to see what happens next.
Rejoice, for the secondary Rider now has taken the stage...
Well, this was a fun one to write. Glad I could join you for it, Ruin. (Even if your computer didn't actually agree with us.)