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RuinQueenofOblivion


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Close to a year after their wedding, Fluttershy talks to her wife Rainbow Dash about the idea of adopting a foal. Rainbow Dash is unsure about the idea but starts to think it over, and as she does comes to find there's a pony close to both of them that needs them. What will happen?


Cover image made by Redheadfly.

Written for the Third FlutterDash Group Contest

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Comments ( 25 )

Well, let's face it, if they were ever to adopt a young 'un, it was always going to be Scoots, wasn't it? Not much suspense there...:raritywink:

7604018 True but it's really more supposed to be about the struggle of trying to figure out if you're ready for that responsibility.

I smiled today. This was cute.

Aww, this was absolutely beautiful. A perfect way to start my morning.

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Glad you two liked it, I worked hard on it.

THANK LUNA!! A SCOOTADOPT STORY!!!

7605353 Yeah, I admit it wasn't necessary for the contest, but its what I came up with and I like how it turned out.

Comment posted by Zerocool7785 deleted Sep 30th, 2016
Comment posted by RuinQueenofOblivion deleted Sep 30th, 2016
Comment posted by Zerocool7785 deleted Oct 2nd, 2016

I reviewed this story as part of Read It Now #94.

My review can be found here.

Comment posted by Zerocool7785 deleted Nov 8th, 2016

This caught my eye. I'll check it out later and let you know how it is.

This was a cute story, if rather brief. I do like it. I will offer one correction, and that is that the sentence tenses are confusing, sometimes reading like present tense, other times like past tense.

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Comment posted by Zerocool7785 deleted Oct 11th, 2017

8480505 If you continue to make these comments I will report you.

Comment posted by Zerocool7785 deleted Oct 11th, 2017

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What was that guy bothering you about, if I may ask?

8489880 He kept referring to characters as, uh, well I don't want to repeat it but its a derogatory term for gays and lesbians.

OMG YES I love it! This is the first Scootadopt story I've seen that wasn't... how do I put it? Angsty. (Seriously, why does the internet suggest me fanfics for edgelords...)

Anyway thank you author, so so much, praise this, I'm a like-fave

This is the most awesome thing I've ever read!

Awwwwww

Though I don't get why Scoots foster parents can just up and leave her. Is that legal?

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