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RuinQueenofOblivion


Dashite forever!


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This story is a sequel to Finding Love


Rarity has kept a secret hidden from her friends for as long as she has known them. When Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo start dating, she decides that its time to admit the truth to the most important pony in her life, Applejack.


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Aww, that was nice. Not my favorite fic you've written, or even on this site, but still sweet none the less.

The spell that let two mares have a foal together had only recently been developed and it was easy enough to learn,

Okay, I do have a problem with this line. If it was a spell that was recently discovered, why is it so easy to learn? If it was that easy, you'd think it would be discovered far sooner.

There's also the fact that since the spell involves having foals, it would be something that only a doctor/nurse could really learn. (Unless you're Twilight of course.) Think of it like, you have to understand the cell forming of a child's birth as a level of how complicated it would be to use that spell.

I don't doubt a spell like that could exist, but I don't think it would be a simple spell.

8363795 Eh, I dunno, I haven't even figured out the details on that...

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That's my point. It wouldn't be so simple to learn.

8363845 Okay, maybe not at this stage... sorry, you're right, I messed that up.

8363795
And that is not taking into consideration things like how such a spell would affect the population numbers , or the impact that it would have upon feminists and non feminists . Also though we don't know how the spell works , I do think that it should be riskier and more prone to negative side effects and consequences since they are trying to utilize artificial means to create new life .

8497310 I admit I did not think this through very well, just assume whoever developed the spell figured out a way around some of that.

Is this going to be reflected in soaring hearts?

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Oh,my bad. I get confused with the different arcs sometimes.

8517642 Its fine, I have a lot of stories with the same characters so it can be hard to tell continuity apart. This fic falls under the Next Generation continuity while Soaring Hearts is under its own continuity, easy enough mistake to make.

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