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It's cute.
It ticks all the boxes.
The writing is solid but of course the editor in me still had a red pen in hand the whole time. Another editing pass wouldn't have gone amiss.
So what about the theme?
Well, the limited word count has somewhat curtailed a more drawn out build up. The subject of incest is hinted at slightly, then comes in full force, and ends just as quickly with the fic's closing words. So is there a saving grace? Yeah, I think so.. The sisterly banter makes up for most of it.
It feels authentic and at times earns a chuckle. They seem like sisters, and that is paramount. And, sadly, this aspect is not always present in these kinds of stories. So much the better that it's here.
Good work.