These Words are Not My Own

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How valuable is your voice?

If you lost it, what would you do to get it back?

What would you do to keep it if you did get it back?

Is it worth the price?

Now with an awesome dramatic reading!

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Love Moth

Love Moth #1 · Feb 5th, 2019 · 2 · ·

But did the drums stop?

Sypher

Sypher #2 · Feb 5th, 2019 · 6 · ·

Not bad. To be honest I think it would have been more interesting if "Twiggy" was merely Autumn Blaze going insane rather than actually being some sort of Lovecraftian horror, but you sold it decently enough.

TheAncientPolitzanian

TheAncientPolitzanian #3 · Feb 5th, 2019 · · ·

I would've put in a longer review, but Sypher summarized my thoughts much better than I probably could.

Have a Like. :)

Eroraf86

Eroraf86 #4 · Feb 5th, 2019 · · ·

Well. That was mildly horrifying. I'm guessing this was at least partly inspired by the Master from Doctor Who.

Set

Set #5 · Feb 5th, 2019 · 1 · ·

I half expected Autumn going on to just kill every kirin in the village in a desperate attempt to get her voice back. Maybe "Twiggy" saying something like "We need more, Autumn! Then you can get your voice back!" Though that would just be the insane Autumn talking to herself rather than a demonic twig

Central Story Time

Central Story Time #6 · Feb 5th, 2019 · 2 · ·

I liked it. The heartbeat as this ceaseless drum that brought insanity with it was very Florence and the Machine.
I swallow the sound and it swallows me whole
'til there's nothing left inside my soul.
I'm empty as that beating drum,
but the sound has just begun.

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