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Dude living in Michigan. Been writing since middle school. I love games and playing piano. Married to a lovely artist.

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This hits a LOT of my fetishes.
Edit: Elaboration: Big dicks.

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That's honestly 90% of the reason I wrote it. I feel like most stories about Big Mac are forgetting one of the biggest reasons to write clop of Big Mac in the first place.

Let me guess, by the end of this story there will be a bunch of Little Macs running all over Ponyville :trixieshiftright:

As the wisest of all say, 'Big dick is best dick.':heart:

This story is up my alley in so many ways, and I'm a sucker for 'the stud gets all the mares' stories. Though, the one criticism I have for this chapter is that the ending with Aloe and Lotus could've been made into a whole chapter by itself.

Regardless, good work! I can't wait for when inspiration strikes you again, and to read all the encounters Big Mac gets to experience!

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It could have been it's own chapter, but the problem with "stud gets all the mares" stories is every time he talks to a female, it could be its own chapter. So unfortunately, I have to do some editing.

I chose to start with Fluttershy to show that 1. Big Mac is irresistible to even the most meek of mares who might not otherwise be interested in seducing stallions and 2. Give us a simple one-on-one encounter to establish what he's like in bed and what he does to a mare. That way, in later chapters, I can add more partners or more interesting scenarios to build off that foundation.

I'm really glad you like it! The story's getting a good response so far, and fanfic writers run on nothing if not attention, so we'll see how that impacts my mood. I already know what the next chapter will be and have it started, but banging it out and getting it just right will take some consideration.

Yes good. Very casual fun cock worship with a protagonist who always gets his way no matter little sense it makes, because that's the true meaning of having big dick energy. I like it, please give more, and get more depraved with it~

I definitely want to see what happens when somepony tries to say 'no' to that cock actually that's a lie, Big Mac's too nice here to make that fun

Holy hell, I was not expecting to see a story from you in my notification feed!

I check every now and then to see if anyone has updated whilst I am working on my next book, glad to see you are still active!

He looked down and her eyes were fixed on his body. Yep, she was definitely checking out his balls. He made sure to take the ladder extra slow, raising one leg nice and high and letting it linger, giving the shy pegasus a good view of his heavy sack hanging low between his thighs. When he had climbed onto the roof, he hopped up with both hindlegs and crouched, letting his fat nuts dangle over the edge a bit. Fluttershy gasped, and he stood up, chuckling quietly to himself.

Naughty boy... Carry on!

He decided not to play coy with her; it was clear Fluttershy was aching to see the goods. He trotted up to her and reared up, planting his forehooves heavily on her kitchen table. Then, his namesake flopped out of his sheath.

Such an good, well-mannered stallion...

The farm stud was truly in his element now, and his true special gift was coming to bear. Not only did Big Mac have a terrifically huge cock, but he knew how to use it, too.[...]
He gave a rough grunt as he felt the first burst of cum fill her. It was a sensation he would never tire of; fucking the hell out of a mare and jizzing deep inside, his essence stuffing her full and flowing back around his massive dick.

Mares simply love this combination!


As others had said before: Good story!
I'll leave it on my tracking list to make sure I won't miss the next part, whenever that will be.
In fact, you said you wrote it for yourself, and you did good. Things as this can't be rushed.

I'll follow this; see where this goes when you decide to update it.

How big is big, that’s MY question. Can always use more dicksplaining

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Rather than edit, I think I'll explore that more in a future chapter

Fuck that was hot. Love when a happy couple share a stallion.

So glad to see this update! And with a cuckolding chapter no less!!:pinkiehappy: I do wish that we could've seen the action with Spoiled Rich, but hey, Mrs. Cake was fantastic in this. Good thing, too, since I'm pretty sure having another cuckolding bit would be a tad redundant in this anthology.:fluttershysad: (not that that should stop you if that's what you want more of).

I'm surprised Big Mac hadn't experimented with a stallion or two before this, especially if he has a 'hole's a hole' attitude. That said, making Mr. Cake his first is a bold move; I don't recall seeing any clopfics with him in an M/M situation. So, kudos to you.

Also, 38 inches... I guess ponies in this stories are actual horse-size. Otherwise, there'd be no way Mac could go balls-deep in anyone. Not a bad thing, just have to rework the image in my head a bit.

Anyway, aside from that (and maybe an intimidating word count), well done! Here's hoping for more in the near future.:raritywink:

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I’m glad you liked it! I thought about using a human scale for the ponies and having Mr. Cake be about six, but then I every number I wanted to use for Big Mac felt way too outlandish, so I settled on a scale that was more analogous to equines. And this way, Mac can have a near-literal third leg.

I doubt I’ll be revisiting cucking in the future of this story. I’d love to do more M/M stuff since it’s not as common in MLP, but I honestly have a hard time finding pairings and angles I like, so I don’t write it as much as I’d like. Maybe it’s because there aren’t as many male characters of note?

I expect the length of future chapters to be similar, since each idea I have seems to involve a fair deal of setup. But I also find I just write long, which you can see in my other pieces as well.

I’m not quite sure where I want to take this story next. I’ll probably want to do a few more slice of life-type chapters before I attempt to address any real character arc for Mac, but I’m still figuring out what I want to do with him. I have a lot of ideas, but none I’m totally settled on yet. We’ll see I suppose. But I enjoy writing this story enough that I’m sure it’ll get another update sooner or later.

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