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Really liked it, but I feel like it was a little fast. Would have liked to see Nightmare Moon toy with Celestia some more, she broke too easily I would say. Still very nice.
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Agreed on all counts.
Heh.
Hah, wow.
HAHAHAH OH WOW.
HOLY SHIT MY SIDES.
Wow dude, solid 8/10! Haven't laughed that hard in ages, you should write more comedy!
Fast paced and characters way out of character. I didn't enjoy it at all, but does that mean I rate it bad? No I never review on personal preference, it is good not amazing as it is lacking in content and a comedy tag has to be added because I did chuckle a bit.
6/10 would be a 7 if the story wasn't a bit lacking in content.
6900334 Was never meant to be a long story with character development. Just one of many quick requests I took to celebrate reaching 200 followers.
6900183 As a matter of fact, I do plenty of comedy! You should read The Life and Times of Deepthroat Cockslut if you like this. :^)
Added comedy tag at the request of several readers. It appears I just can't escape the silly.
6900599 I've actually read that, its pretty entertaining. Either way, I fucking love cheesy porn dialogue, it really amuses me for some reason. Keep on trucking dude.
This was good, it's just too bad that it was short. We don't get a lot of stories like this anymore.
6900334 lol I just left a review on a previous book you viewed, then I find another. I just hope I wasn't to harsh
It was a
Sparkle of Incest
by Corey19
6902189 Well when you review a story that is really poor you can't help but sound a bit harsh because it feels like you wasted a few minutes of you're life reading crap. But reading you're review I would say you sounded a little pissed off but you manged not to sound like you were flaming it to pieces
Plus if you saw my random comment I was just not in the mood to review because I spent all day reviewing on Fanfiction and barely had enough energy to come on Fimfiction and do a couple of reviews on here.
This deserves nothing less then an applause it is pretty 'ass spankingly good' I enjoyed this fic, it had some story line behind it, unlike others.
If I could find any negatives about the story, it would be the lack description. For example with a sex scene, you could say. "He slowly rutted the mare with heated ecstasy, feeling a growing pleasure with every thrust" something like that would be adding more description. Some character tags would be nice also, just so that it's easier to discern what character is talking.
Feedback Points
Story total - 10/30
Plot - 5/10
Arousal - 3/10
Personalities - 2/10
6902260 ah, I see, well I was a little agro at the quality, but I have the tendency to tell you it straight, I don't sugar coat things, if people don't like my opinion, then its there choice.
Thank you for following me.
I would like to see more of this story!
More like Nightmare's Celestia amiright?
.......
I'll show myself out.
It was pretty good for the most part, but...
I almost busted out laughing.
6908629 irk? nmm's dialogue in this is just great XD .....
I just love a good corrupting/impregnating of Princess Celestia. Great fic!
This doesn't need a sequel.
It DESERVES a sequel.
F#%king brilliant story mate
I'm out (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻
7045971 It's a real thing in the comics. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
7045976 And those aren't canon, yet you're using the NMM timeline from the show in this story.
7045984 Actually, they are canon.
https://twitter.com/andypriceart/status/461550768492150784
Short but sweet. You had a clear intention and went for it, and you did a marvelous job. Well done
6899826 what's up with the 32 dislikes?
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I put down one of those 'first' comments to see how many dislikes I can catch. I think I've got a record for most dislikes on one comment now, so I guess I succeeded.
7045971 Trust me, I feel the same way, but hey, good clop is good clop
6908629 this is now a running joke with my gf and I. We're weird like that
6899826 Liked it so much I gave it a down thumb for you. Higher record?
there are SO many questions i need to ask
What Happened To Everyone Else In Ponyville
Did The Mare 6 Get Dominated Like Nightmare Did To Celestia After They Were Defeated
7836768 This was just a short request. :/
My other story, Nightmare's Reign, is basically the same concept that someone has commissioned me to expand, and a new chapter is currently in progress. In time, that story might answer your questions.
7837473 I've Read Nightmares Rein But It Still Didn't Answer My Question About What Happened To Other Ponies
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You don't like Celestia much, do you? ;-)
"For tonight begins a nightmare that will never end, a reign of fear that can never be broken. The darkness has given me power, my little ponies, power far beyond even that of my pathetic sister." Here, she licked her lips, her tone turning seductive. "Power greater than any stallion could ever hope to wield between his legs."
Random Stallion in the assistance:
"Well you were not so cocky when Tia banished you, huh? You FRAUD!" :-)
I love sass.
When you're trying to fap but the dialogue is too cheesy...
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