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Draco S Brony
I am a long time reader, and now amateur writer. I hope every one comes to enjoy my stories and follows me as I get better. :) (I'm back~)
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please write more soon
5795100 was actually thinking about it, but I still am really apprehensive about posting it...
don't be I can guarantee it will be amazing
5796985 someone seems confident.
(New to the site, I've been here a whole 4 days if that. But Penned IN has been worked on for ≈10.5 months by this point. I'm wrapping up the epilogue right now... 31st chapters later.
)
5800758 thanks, I made the mistake of not reading the beginner's guide to writing thing that they have on here before writing this out. from the eighth or ninth chapter on, it should be immensely better but till then, it's gonna be more of this... well, provided we can't hook up before I post the next chapter. shouldn't be too hard since I just found out I lost a bunch of edits I had already done that made minor changes to the storyline. So once I fix those, I can send chapters 1-8 over.
I see a great story in the makeing but you have to take your time with stuff like this plan out the story ahead and write with detail and corect grammer some on the site can be good or bad grammer nazis but the biggist things are plan and take your time relese a chapter when you fell its ready
5800839 Thanks I'll keep that in mind
i like your story please continue
hmph.
5806547 hmph?
5806552 hmph.
5806566 Why hmph?
Your getting better and i aplaud you for it keep up the good work and remember my advice
5807562 Hai, arigatōgozai masutā!
Are you guys seeing a double authors note?
Nope
5807753 weird...
5807669 I'm not and I just have to say I don't know why this is getting so may down votes. The only problems I see are the small mistakes that you know about so far I think this is pretty good
OMG I LOVE YOUR WORK KEEP IT UP!!
5807757 indeed
5807209 because James is my name.
5808245 lol, heray for coincidences!
5800165 but of course I recognize a good author when I see one
LOL Title reminded me of this song
That boy needs therapy, Psychosomatics!
5809232 It should, that's where the chapter title came from...
ib cant wait for the next chapter
me likkey i eagerly wait 4 more
BTW, if any one was wondering why the chapters are so short, it's because originally all of theme except for the first one were meant to be one, big, giga-chapter. but I decided that that would be too big so i split them up.
AWSUME
iz not high. iz hi. GRAMMAR NAZI OFF
why would he not know about the elements? they are quite famous.
5811632 will be explained later
5811943 i can already make a guess that he is in some different timeline than the one the show follows.
5812950 not exactly... though I just now realized I failed to mention that Lord Tirek will not be appearing in this fic. Why? because I don't like him. so any one who was hoping for some Tirek time, too bad.
great chapter as usual keep it up
i know that you arnt that good of a writer and i hame some suggestions. 1. when you start or want to start a new paragraph press enter and it should give you space for as new paragraph. 2. make sure to have letters like this ---> Boop when you are starting a sentence so everything looks like how it should be, as well as a . after the character talks but not after the "
Hey everybody, I just got admitted to college and today was the first day. While this is exhilarating, I am afraid this will put a damper on my chapter production.
Which means it will be a while before the next chapter comes out... especially since I have to rewrite the next chapter... because I'm a dumb ass... that is all...
I freaking love this story so far. Please write more soon!
oumathclub.files.wordpress.com/2013/08/50ca3e9862e4f-preview-620.jpg I am almost done with this quarter, and should be readily churning out more chapters here shortly.
its good to see more chapters on this fic
6173456 thanks, sorry it took so long.
i love it
Absolutely loving the story, keep up the good work!
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thanks, I felt really bad for not putting out a chapter till now, so I spent some extra time trying to get it out.
mind blown
6238462 lol
Update?
6481719 sorry.
in all honesty, I've tried to Wright this next chapter like 10 times now and each time I fuck up somehow and loose a bunch of my work, and when that happens, I lose my motivation for like a week.
And even without that I've had LOADS of writer's block. I'm still trying though.