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Fluttershy Whisperwing


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This story is a sequel to Looking Glass


Authorized spiritual sequel / AU to Looking Glass.

Twelve years ago, Sunset Shimmer ran away from Equestria and left her whole life behind her. In traversing the portal, she became a five year old human girl. Through trials and tribulations she grew up, eventually forgetting her true origins.

Three years ago, she learned the truth. Yesterday, her rage culminated in one night of fire and vengeance. The powers of Harmony defeated her, and offered a second chance. Change her ways and heal her heart.

Today she takes her first steps on the path to her new life.

[Updated, Edited, Re-Released.]

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 13 )

Until I see more chapters I think this will be on the back burner

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ok? Don't really gotta comment just to tell me you're not gonna read. Way to kick a mare when she's down, guy.

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I tend to invest myself in stories a lot that never go anywhere is why I am waiting. Half my favorites and following list should probably be removed as most ahven't been updated in 3+ years.

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Rude comment is still rude. Declaring lack of interest makes fics less likely to continue since nobody will read it.

Comment posted by Nira Lightshine deleted Mar 27th, 2019

Happy to see this updated again. ^^

Hell yeah, super excited that this is back again!

Well, that first half was dramatic, what with doom and all. Archaic terms help, don't they?

“Ah, Sunset Shimmer, you’re finally awake. I’m Agent Lovelace, and this is my associate Umbra. We’ve got about as many questions for you as I’m sure you have for us.”

Well, those names don't bode well...

Umbra and Lovelace... Sombra and Chrysalis...

Well, we'll just have to see if they're the same or not.

“If you'll all look right here for just one moment.”

Ah, brings back memories of Men in Black.

Princess Twilight explained it but she used a lot of words I wasn’t familiar with and I’m pretty sure she was talking a different language for most of it.

"Especially when she started making horse noises. Which was most of the time."

“Ah, Sunset Shimmer, you’re finally awake. I’m Agent Lovelace, and this is my associate Umbra. We’ve got about as many questions for you as I’m sure you have for us.”

I'm sure those two are completely trustworthy and in no way plotting their own sinister agendas.

Once the excitement had died down a bit, an entirely new form of excitement formed in the shape of lights and sirens.

The blue one waved "Hi! So, I'm Sonata, this is—"
The purple one grabbed her by the ear and dragged her off, muttering dark vengeance against the entire Wranglish language.
The yellow one in the clown wig just shook Twilight's hand and said "Very sorry about the confusion. Looking forward to working with you soon." Then she ran for the hills with the others before the agents noticed them.

Twilight blinked slowly, so nonplussed she was practically minused.

This is a fantastic sentence, and you should feel proud of it.

Rarity beatboxed briefly and flicked her hands like she was having a seizure.

If anyone else had done that, Twilight might have been concerned.

In any case, excellent start. Definitely looking forward to seeing where you go from here.

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I'm sure those two are completely trustworthy and in no way plotting their own sinister agendas.

Well... if they ushered my magical-creature ass back where I came from (or help me) to prevent me from getting blackbagged or something, and then made a big flashy masquerade-breaking event basically not happen, and then falsified my new friend's medical data so nobody would be scratching their heads about the new patient with a K blood type I'd be inclined to trust them.
Then again, Twilight probably has enough experience with Mayor Mare to take "I'm from the government and I'm here to help" with a moon sized grain of salt.

Also the siren aside had me crack up a bit. It's always interesting to see where your mind will run off with little things I feed you.

This is a fantastic sentence, and you should feel proud of it.

Cannot tell if this is mild sarcasm. I've gotten a lot of mileage out of it!

If anyone else had done that, Twilight might have been concerned.

Twilight is probably already drawing up dossiers and assigning similarities. "Oh so human Rarity does the "ugh pff ptch" thing too".

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For the record, I was completely sincere about the nonplussed pun. I'm a big sucker for wordplay.

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I've used it a lot! I don't think I'll ever tire of the phrase either. It's a "go to".

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