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What if you add that the CMC didn't do Anon a Miss and someone else did? There is only one story on here that tried that and it was cancelled

Here it is;

The infamous holiday special, retold in an entirely new way.
The Blue EM2 · 14k words  ·  40  18 · 908 views

Cheers. Let me know what you think when you do read it.

Well that is an interesting start.

Considering what Pinkie usually is in most realities, I doubt whatever power set Jenny has available could stand up to her. It’d been an interesting fight to watch though.

Who said it would be a 1 on 1 fight? Recount the shadows.

So if all her shadows are separate entities with their own power sets It'd still be sending like sending the Justice League to battle Slaanesh. An epic fight of course, but terribly one-sided. Unless of course, this incarnation of Pinkie is only operating on Toon and Slasher physics. Ethier way I can’t wait for the next chapter.

This is gonna be very interesting.

Love the Hellsing Abridged reference.

Why Boner 3: RECKONING!!!

What do you think, remove the brakes and go full throttle or play it safe.

First, that needs one of these --> ? (no offence intended, just my inner perfectionist breaking loose.)

Second, and more important: I vote don't stop at full throttle, strip it out and just make sure the correct fuel mix is fed right into the engine.

Throttle it. Go full bore.

Thanks for making someone else AAM.

Crack open the regulator. Just don't kill the CMC, please...

I have no idea what's going on, but it confuses me.

I'm liking where this is going let's floor it

Let's go to overdrive and put the peddle to the metal bro. FLOOR IT!!!

Yeah this chapter felt very off.... All that background info was more annoying than helpful to me and only confused the hell out of me.

Nice, and sre hope Lyra and Bon Bon heard that last part, make sure to report least some moron thinking with their head up thier ass tries something.

And that kids, was the beginning of the end.

continue with the fic, it's good:fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttershysad:

I personally like the stor, it’s good. Maybe finish this story and maybe make a remake. Up to you.

Keep going; it's too good...!

Messages like these can be done through a blog post by linking it to the story in question. Putting them in as a chapter is actually against FimFiction's posting rules, and can get your story taken down, or at least flagged, regardless of whether or not you want to continue it.

As for your question, it is entirely up to you and whether or not you enjoy the story you are writing. If you feel that starting over would be the best course of action, then do so now that you have a better idea of where you would like the story to go. If you don't start over and continue regularly, that's fine too.

I'd like to see the story continue as it currently stands, but more action/mayhem wouldn't necessarily be a bad thing.

That said, at the end of the day; you are the author, write the story you want to write.

Really a.rewrite of what you have can't hurt. It's ok but meh. It was worth a fave.

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