you might want to put a link in this chapter

10176735 I agree.

10206685
I guess, but there was no development of it. There was the sort-of-date, the drug addiction, then she left for a war, then they got married.

10265159
I realized that later, but the story was pretty unclear so I thought the trip was going to be permanent.

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Still needs to be capitalized, though

10273734
True

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I ain't steal nuttin

10405966
Thanks for telling me. I didn't know.

10268458
Well there is the possibility of adoption to consider

10602137
And that was After you got shot in the head!

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Pryhan. Basically everything at this point in the story is in Pryhan.

Welp that was a solid 9/10 Excellent story. There were a few minor typoes here or there but nothing really noticeable.

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One lesson is not gonna change who you are as a person, not matter how big or harsh the lesson was. It was literally explained by Fluttershy in the episode Fame and Misfortune. Hell the fact that she’s in this mess should make it worse, because Rainbow Dash is a hot headed person who is talking to the person who set up the worst moment in her entire life.

It is not psychologically possible to change that much without repeated lessons, especially if it’s a habit you’re been doing for years.

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Question wasn't Celestia hypnotized so this whole thing wasn't her fault she just got out played by Chrissy

Okay I know this might be an unpopular opinion and I want to make something clear first I understand why rainbow dash it's still angry at her former friends but to pass Fair judgment on them you kind of have to look at it from their perspective the evidence against rainbow was water tight in every way there was nothing that could have been said in rainbows defense and yes you could say and they should have had more faith in their friend but look at the evidence which was placed against her it was pretty convincing and pretty damning oh and also in defensive of Celestia she was hypnotized her judgment was impaired and rainbow dash forgive her and Twilight so amount of opinion if she's willing to forgive them why not the rest of the main six because even though they weren't hypnotized they we're still lied to and in all honesty she should be mad at Chrissy I'm not saying rainbow dash shouldn't be mad at them I'm just saying considering everything else she should forgive them this is still a good story

Loving the story so far!

But can someone explain to me what a terran, demigryph and a caragor are? I think i must have missed the descriptions of those creatures?