What does the being who represents loyalty do when those they are loyal to abandon them?
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You forgot to put ‘do’ after loyalty in your short description, I’m only saying this because when people consider reading a story, they look at the grammar in the short and long descriptions to judge how you write, and having just a single error in a description can turn some people away.
Other than that though, interesting story. I didn’t read the original that this is supposed to be a rewrite of, not sure how that was compared to this one. Also, I’m not exactly a fan of Rainbow Dash, with few exceptions. Despite that, gotten me interested in this story, well done. I’ll be keeping an eye on this one.
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little late but, where can i find the full image of ur pic?
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I think she was using Donut Joes like some people use Starbucks or McDonalds "DO you want to go get some McDonalds" or "do you want to go get some starbucks" Ie it is big enough over there, it's brand has become its own thing
Little hard to read. The flow is... off. Good content, though. Deffinetly reading more.