What does the being who represents loyalty do when those they are loyal to abandon them?
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Good to see Dash forgave Twi and Shining, and her reasons for it were valid.
The other girls I'm not so sure about.
I was also proud of her for the way she handled Celestia.
Well done, Dash.
Not long til the end now.
just the way dash handle celestia was both funny as hell and true
gg dash
Makes me wonder what the other story is gonna be like
So in conclusion...
Twilight is paralyzed due to rainbow.
They are more or less even with cadence, shining, and dash
Ps is Flurry still in lock-down... I fell that that has been over looked
Celestia is actually going to attempt to be a competent ruled/ or advisor for her sister
Moon but is now in charge of Equestria
The main 5 - twilight are still back at square 1
Rainbow's family is still unknown if they are joining their daughter.
And dash still has that brand that makes her a walking Beacon for Celestia, along as she is in Equestria
Wait. So that's it? No elaborate way of forgiveness? Just "I forgive you but your still pricks" and that's it?
Huh. Surprisingly well and subtle.
Also slight suggestion. Maybe Ceaser keep RD in Equestria......for help with the trade and military purposes of course.
My question is: Is that one charge of the Elements going to be used or was that a red herring?
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If I remember right, there should only be 2 chapters left, and other then making dash an alicorn (which I don't get the vibe from this story) or healing twi and restoring rainbow's eye, forelegs, and getting rid of the exiled markings and MAYBE the scars, I don't really think theres much they could do in that time
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Same, indeed.
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I've read bits and pieces of this fic and what I've read was very well done. I would like to read this fic all the way through. But I liked how Dash forgave Twi, Shining and Cadence, since Chryssie was playing the three of them (though the rest of the Mane 5 had no such excuse). And that Dash tells Celestia to return and be there for Luna (aka best Princess Pony) in ruling Equestria.
Perhaps Dash is right, 'Tia isn't very suited to the modern world. Perhaps there will be a sequel where Equestria becomes a constitutional monarchy, like Great Britain. Where there's technically a monarch but an elected government does the deciding.
Jeez we know you screwed up but have some self-respect.