What does the being who represents loyalty do when those they are loyal to abandon them?
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(sniff)(sniff)wipes tear from eye(sniff)
That was so...beautiful.
Sorry, Flutters, Pinks, Rares and AJ. But, you four are just gonna have to face facts: You four had a wonderful bond with Rainbow and you all went and blew it, all sky high. You're all.....just gonna have to accept the fact that you lost a friend. Maybe one day, she'll give you a chance but, given what's happened to her, that's probably never going to happen at all.
9672728 Couldn't have said it better myself.
Welp that's over and done with.
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Same here
9672786 Yeah, they pretty much permanently burned whatever bridges they had with her.
Put another way: They all made their beds, and now they have lay in them.
Here's my 3rd eye saw the entire chapter:
Mane 4 stopping rainbow= now where to dig
Applejack start off their apologize attempt=this looks like a nice spot
Pinkie starts the second apology attempt=let's start digging
Rarity starts the third attempt=okay good so far, let's see if we can go deeper
Mane 4 attempts the next round of attempts=this is so slow
Fluttershy yells "we're sorry"= "Here, let me get us all some bigger shovels"
Who else saw this
That's one thing that's always annoyed me about the ponies, they think that all they have to do is apologize and everything is sunshine and rainbows again. Well, not this time, they'll have to face the fact that not every mistake can be fixed with an "I'm sorry" and a hug.
It's completely pointless to apologize to a person that is to stubborn to accept it, so I don't know why are they wasting their breath to begin with.
Is that it? I am assuming that the story is over at this point.
Is rainbows family gonna move to the empire or are they just visiting?
Love this chapter
It all comes down to trust, and the ReMane-ing Four's lack of it. They refused to trust Twilight when she tried to tell them something was wrong about Cadance, then they refused to trust Rainbow when she told them what had happened.
A major result is that the ones they wronged really have no reason to extend any trust back, no matter how sorry they say they are. And without mutual trust, friendship isn't possible.
*sniffs*
AHHHHH..............Don't You just LOVE the smell of betrayal and how the traitors are now licking their wounds? It smells....WONDERFUL!
Oh, you poor delusional fools....Why Twilight, Shining and Celestia were forgiven was that they were controlled like puppets. You chicks were following the crowd like sheep, much like the rest of the damn country. I wonder if the news will spread? They'll try to suck it up but Rorschach once said
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Same, a betrayal like that would leave a REALLY big wound that would either take a LONG time to heal or will never heal at all, I am SLIGHTLY hopeful that she will forgive them in time but as I stated already it may never happen.
9673270 I think they're just going for a visit.
9673378 Very well put; me, too; and you're probably right.
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Indeed.
9673476 Yep.
That was harsh on Dash's part. I agree with the other reviewers in the fact that AJ, Rarity, Pinkie and Flutters weren't played by Chryssie (like Twi, Shiny and Cadence were) and turned against Dashie when it seemed that Dash was a traitor (even though she had been set up). Now doesn't mean squat, girls, THEN is when you should have believed Dash.
In the real (as opposed to the cartoon) world. Not every feud or injustice can't be fixed with a sincere apology and/or a hug. If Dash wants to reconcile in the future, that would be her business. But the rest of the Mane 5 just have to accept that they f***ed up and go back to Ponyville and move on and perhaps find a new element of Loyalty and start over.
Perhaps, when this fic is over, you could do a sequel when Dash is still leading her new people and the rest of the Mane 5 go back to living in Ponyville and assist in Equestria's rebuilding. I would like to see how Twilight deals with her current condition or how her friends move on. Also, I would like to see Scoots living with Dash and her parents and see if there could be a reunion for Scoots with her fellow crusaders, Apple Bloom and Sweetie (even though Dash is in the outs with their big sisters).
Finally, I would like to see how Luna (aka Best Princess Pony) leads Equestria as it rebuilds and how everybody moves on.
Part of me would have liked to have seen a reunion with the rest of the Mane 5, but stories with happy "sunshine-and-lollipops" endings get old sometimes. Dash went through too much hell (and her ex-friends bailing on her when the you-know-what hit the fan) for that to happen.
Huh. That happened.
*And I couldn't be happier*
Hey! It's the dark side of my brain!
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To put it simply in the same manner as a famous internet comic reviewer once put for Cry for Justice: The reason Rainbow deserves to be ticked at them because they failed friendship! They failed to believe Twilight when she proclaimed her suspicions about Cadance and left her almost all alone except for Rainbow. They failed to believe Rainbow when she attacked "Cadance", thinking she attacked the princess for no reason, other than "being a bully" (as Fluttershy put it) when in reality, it was part of the Chrysalis' plan. And of course, Twilight and Shining are the only exceptions since they was under Chrysalis' control. They failed as friends. Rainbow does care for them, alright. And because she cares, she is utterly ashamed of them and ashamed of herself for thinking they could pull this "Friendship is Magic" stuff off.
Keep moving forward, don't look back. No sense in giving them any hope of thinking you regret your words.
You certainly don't.
We harvest what we sow ... says a proverb.
Anyway, they grilled from Dash's game entry.
And then with all she endured. Previous comments
throughout history confirm what has been said ...
Go roast in Tartare !!
Otherwise excellent story
*skips to the last 2 chapters*
...so Loyalty means blind obedience to whoever is the most awesome? I don’t know what Rainbow Dash is saying in the end either. She helped the changelings destroy Equestria out of spite and she’s here to rub it in their faces now?
I can only assume this is a “make Rainbow Dash an absolute badass at all costs”-story.
This was great. They know they screwed up and rainbow has better things to live for now so back to her true home now
I agree with Rainbow. Those four can burn in Hell. Release the Wargs!
*Warg growls behind me*
I wouldn't be surprised if Twilight doesn't forgive the four as well
but like Rainbow said, sorry won't take back what happened to her
Oof. Big F for ex mane 5(6?) They fucked up indeed however I feel that rainbow should at least given them the warmth of forgiveness being accepted don’t mean she has to like em or anything but feel she could been a little more cooler with em. But yet I also understand why she did what she did so really comes down to what the reader thinks. Really enjoyed this and glad to see closer to that mess of a string. (Kinda pulling shit outta my ass at the end there Xd.)
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To quote private Lenore church “ what the fuck that’s like wrong in eight different ways”
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Tbh I think something’s broken in there head if that’s the conclusion they come to
What does IPS stand for
Ah...there we go, that's what I've been waiting for.
Yeah, from the moment Rainbow returned to Equestria, I knew that a simple apology would mean fuck-all to her. Do I maybe wish she hadn't full-out blown up at them. Yes. Do I think they absolutely deserved the verbal thrashing? Also yes.
Treat others the way you want to be treated. If you treat someone like dirt, don't be surprised if you taste that dirt later.