What does the being who represents loyalty do when those they are loyal to abandon them?
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oh shit thats Latin.
It seems like you are writing the language in Latin at times but it seems to break into English and a few other languages at some points? It might just be me but it feels strange to have a conglomeration of various languages put into one. You could perhaps go with the good ol ‘different language’ rather than trying to write it out.
I do, however like the effort put into the language, I sure can’t write more than 4-5 word sentences in Latin.
I’m also liking this story so far and will be eagerly awaiting more.
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Actually, only Rainbow is speaking another language: English. All the other characters so far are speaking latin, or in this universe, Demosian. The only English words in their sentences would be names. Maybe your misreading it.
Void Gazer? Isn't that the name one of those infiltrators was using?
Ah, it was! Out of the frying pan and into the fire?