What does the being who represents loyalty do when those they are loyal to abandon them?
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Yep.
Guess I misread that particular chapter (that being so, it still kinda begs the question as to just who's controlling that sun and the moon, though), and that bit was stated in the last Interlude with Cadance and Shining Armor.
I'm confused why is Shining and Applejack with them shouldn't they be back in the Crystal Empire?That's one way to get RD to talk to them, Why Should I Help You Speech mixed with Reason You Suck Speech next chapter.
Disliked? really? Was this because I was confused or because of what I'm guessing what happens next? Which aren't reasons to dislike something.
The chapter was good, but if I could make a quick suggestion. Having the language being untranslated, while it does show how the girls how truly out of their depth they are. The reader feels entirely left out of half the conversation considering we've been able to understand it basically the entire story.
Maybe having a translation in Parenthesis, or just having it in a different color like you've been doing with Equestrian would go a long way in keep the reader in the loop. Although I understood what was going on in the chapter, half of it was basically unreadable text for those who don't understand the language.
Ha, I had a felling that rainbow would not care about equestria. it turned its back on her first after all...
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Ok, maybe I was unclear. When I meant 'looking for her', I didn't intend to mean in the field looking. More like she was researching where she might have ended up or outside sources. When she found out, she took that info, told the rest of the (former) Element Bearers and Shining. They then went to go get her.
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Oh..........
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If it bothers you that much add a translation program to your browser. The author is using Latin so it shouldn't be too hard.
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The thing is, I shouldn't have to add a 3rd party program to my browser to read a story, especially this late into said story.
It doesn't bother me, it's more a friendly piece of advice to keep readers interested instead of not being able to read half the chapter properly and/or having to install some sort of translation software. It shouldn't be up to the reader to translate a book.
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I'm used to stories that do both and neither bother me. To me leaving as is works fine especially since this chapter is primarily from the perspective of the Equestrians thus helping with the immersion.
Oh shit, there is an explosion coming soon...
Oh geez.. hope it isn't the guard getting knocked out
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No, just the door shutting.
Who would even be knocking him out?
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I somehow expected more intelligence from Mane 5, I hope they got kicked out.
For some unknown reason i looked at this and thought it said
2 years, two months, and ten days since exile lol
Seriously I had no clue what was said in that other language. You should have something like a translation in the end or have it in English in brackets or something. It really takes alot out trying to understand what is said. And i tried translations on Google but got fed up with it after a few lines...
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Well, ok then. I put the translations in brackets. Hope you enjoy!
I think you need to fix the translation. The language must have accidentally been copy-and-pasted.