What does the being who represents loyalty do when those they are loyal to abandon them?
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Dash can bail Equestria out of this mess of theirs, give Bitchlestia a good verbal beatdown for her actions, then tell them to go fuck themselves and go back to Pryha.
So it was BOTH of them, so begins Rainbow Dash's return to Equestria as an Conquering Hero and be cleared of her "crime" an DAT'S when ‘da nice an propa stomp'n uv dat chrysalis git an ‘er swarm starts.
I hope Luna gets hit in the teeth with her neglect helping cause this mess just as much as the Element Bearers. After all she was the one who simply didn't bother to check out or try to either verify or disprove Rainbow's version of events once she decided Cadance was telling the truth.
For what it's worth, the only way I can see any of their relationships salvaged at all is if they discover that Twilight was being controlled like Shining. If so, Rainbow may get back onto non-hostile terms with her alone, though renewed friendship might be stretching it after everything that's happened. The others, including the Diarchs... deserve the return of every bit of misery they inflicted, with compound interest and salt rubbed in.
In the long term, the Equestrian government as shown here needs a serious overhaul. There's no appeal or checks to a decision by the Diarchs, which means the whole system is basically dependant on Sunbutt always being right. And even in canon, she regularly screws up by the numbers, let alone her blunder in this story.
I might get hate but wellp oh well
I hope rainbow atlest forgives pinke / luna / flutershy and gose nutrle / avoids the others + hate calastia
resone … chandlings can alter their minds and mind controle like say hve calestia banish rainbow dash
you do you on what you say this is my apeyen on this epic tail
I want to see Luna rip into the girls and Shining Armor for nearly bucking things up so badly.
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........WHAT?! Sorry but what the heck did you write?
You know. This chapter was a bit underwhelming, if I say so myself. However, it's nice to see Gilda once again and also Luna
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I have no clue
Called it the guest being Gilda. Didn't expect Luna to be there aswell.
Good chapter.
I love that as we've seen dash go through hardship, we've also seen her grow as a character. Sure she still isn't a fan of the equestrians but she's willing to put that aside to do her job not just because its the good thing to do, but because she's loyal to her country. Not only that but as we've seen so far, her country has been loyal back. Funny how that inspires her to do her job to the best of her ability isn't it?
She still perfectly embodies her element after all this time.
The Caesar is kind, but firm with his rule from what we've seen, and doesn't act so rashly as to make such simple calamitous blunders. Blunders such as exiling one of the wielders of your (seemingly) only defensive weapon in a blatant fit of childish rage, set up in nothing short of an insulting attempt at a Kangaroo Court.
My only parting words to the former friends, and the Royal sisters would be: "I hope you get everything you Deserve."
Having made this statement tells me that the Rainbow Dash you've created is a much better person than myself, as I'd still be far too bitter about having my life so cruelly ripped from me, Changeling interference or not.
The Rainbow Dash you've created is what a hero truly looks like.
Thoroughly enjoying the story, keep up the fantastic work.![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
I'm just wondering.....
Do they actually know that Rainbow was set up by Chrysalis or is it just Celestia, who is currently captured?
If they don't know yet that RD was set up AND THEN sought out RD for her help, still believing they were in the right..... That is a powder keg with a short fuse just waiting to be lit.
The interactions on the way back will be incredible tense.
Will we see some of the thoughts from the others POV (hopefully Fluttershy and Luna)?
Regardless whether or not they know about RD's innocence.
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No. No, they don't.
So.......they are aware that Equestria law states that if Rainbow does return to Equestria she is considered a enemy and will be attacked right?
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Well, no one is really willing or even able to ENFORCE the law, is there?
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The next question would then be, is Shining Armor still under Chrysalis' thrall, and how strong is her control over him now?
Would this be a (big) spoiler for the story?
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Good point
I'm ansy for the next chapter to come out. I can't wait
I wanted to fight sunbutt not help her. I demand we have control of the elements then