What does the being who represents loyalty do when those they are loyal to abandon them?
Page generated in 0.024 seconds
Total duration
579 users online
773,659 hits today, 2,107,360 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Glorious, simply glorious.
Ps is the foreign guest Gilda. Considering Griffinstone is a semi close allie of equestria, then it would make sense that she would ask for her help.
Why should I help you? Check
Reason You Suck Speech? Check
I'm willing to bet that's Luna that's out there.
But we'll see next chapter won't we?
9636150 Not yet.
I prolly will tomorrow, though.
For now, 'tis bedtime for me here.
9636148
Take they don't know Chrysalis set everything up yet. Otherwise Fluttershy be begging for forgiveness.
Wow.
Just... just.... wow!
We all expected Rainbow to give her traitorous ex-friends (and Shining the Shitwad) a verbal beat-down, but this is about 1,000,000 on The Awesome Meter.
And she's not done yet?!
Yikes.
Methinks things are really gonna hit the fan next chapter, so grab your jumbo-sized umbrellas, folks.
As usual, you did not disappoint with this long-awaited chapter, Centurion.
Well done, and I eagerly await the next one.
Lo and Behold Luna or Cadence arrive at her home and are speaking with the Ceaser for assistance.
Btw... is it pronounced Ceaser (sea-sar) or Ceaser (kai-sar)?
Why are a Dash betrayed story interesting. I'm not complain I just love how she chews her 'friends' up and spit them out
9636225
Since this is pretty much based on Ancient Rome and not the Medieval Holy Roman Empire (the Germans) it would be pronounced Ceasar (Julius Ceasar. The Army ranks also give it away, and the fact that the HRE wasn't in control of Rome at the time, but the Pope was, also give the time period away. The Pryhans at this point have an empire similar to that of the Ancient Romans at the time of their Height. I'd imagine that if RD were to go back to Equestria to help them, that it would then set up a chain reaction within the Empire with its slow decay. Without Rainbow (and the Current Ceasar) the Empire would've crumbled faster
Good...
They truly don't understand. Rainbow had a big heart for Equestria.
She buried that heart when they falsely exiled her. Which I need everypony else besides Celestia to know.
9636141
9636148
9636225
Gilda makes more sense as the empire has an alliance with the griffins, giving actual reason for them to interfere. Any other source wouldn't have both a chance at actually convincing the empire and going for RD unless instead it's Chrysalis putting another scheme into motion. And considering how RD is viewed in the empire should the tale of what happened as she knows it get out (something that is quite likely since she'll probably be questioned about it in some way by the emperor and those in command) I doubt the empire will move for the sake of Equestria. There are a few possible wildcards the author could attempt to use but would be rather hard to get Empire involved depending on the situation.
I think the Equestrian's pleas are quite weak. It makes the ranting feel a bit hollow. I understand that if they don't know the truth yet and they are trying to get what they believe is a traitor to work with them that might explain that, but that is even more reason for Rainbow to not humor them. It would be more impactful if they knew the truth. Instead, if they still think ill of Rainbow, much of what she says will be ignored.
9636517
Well, that’s exactly what I’m hoping for in this story. For someone to show them what really happened that day and for them to learn and realize how officially and royally they Fk’d up.
In the show the Princesses don't apologize much like that episode where the changelings invaded. Did they ever apologize to Twilight or are they beyond that?
9636568
Just because it's not shown doesn't mean it doesn't happen, though I think a kid's show really should have given even as little as 30 seconds for some mutual heart-to-heart apologies afterwards.
This situation requires more though, since they aren't just asking Rainbow for help. They are asking for Rainbow to abandon her current duty, to abandon her new life, to abandon her family. And all of that is a non-starter if they don't beg for her forgiveness first.
I get the feeling that if Rainbow is, for one reason or another, ordered to help them, that all of this will just be postponed until the Elements of Harmony fail to work because, surprise, Rainbow has no loyalty to any of the others. The question is, will any of the ponies try to be proactive to make sure the Elements would work beforehoof? Or are they so selfish they will completely ignore it until it's a literal life or death situation? Because in my opinion, that would make any last second confessions very hollow indeed, as they'd be forced at figurative gunpoint to denounce their old attitudes.
Then again the Elements of Harmony worked after these same ponies only worked together for a or two day, at most, so their requirement to work was very low and didn't require significant interpersonal friendships.
9636576
Ah so you think stuff can happen in the background. Then yeah I can see that happening.
9636179 True
9636462 True.
9636225
Second.
9636395
Empires actually in a pretty stable position, militarily, economically, politically, and all around. But, yes; without either Caesar Diocletian or Praetor Rainbow Dash, the Empire might well have fallen.
9636462
Who says it can't be both?
And to the rest of you, Thank You for your support on the story. It means a lot!
9636674
I'm not certain which part of my comment you're referring to.
9636681
The part about who the 'foreign official' is.
9636674
Okay. I will prefer to him as Ceaser (kai sar) from now on.....
This really reminds me of Fallout New Vegas
This chapter is absolutely satisfying.
Oh that was satisfying right there.
YOU TELL THEM RAINBOW!
media.giphy.com/media/8fen5LSZcHQ5O/giphy.gif
Wow, I knew they were going to fuck it up, but seriously, the whole 'I know what it's like' stick? Also PLEASE tell me that shining armor is acting like a spoiled noble because of the mental strain from chrysalis because if not, I'm going to be forced to imagine him with a posh voice normally reserved for snobby pricks and I don't want to do it but I will, especially since I defended him in the early chapters, Here's the link to prove it. Also Demosian is Latin?
9636840
Essentially.
9636674
It indeed could be both.
Like you have any right to talk Mr. Locks his kid in her room for 2 years. Where I come from that's called child abuse and probably neglect.
Bravo on the language translations. Having them different colors kept the immersion whole and also at the same time gives us understanding on what was said. Also i had to punt a pillow across a room cause i couldn't punt shining armor in the balls cause of what he said to rainbow
The first bunch of chapters in a paragraph. Good job Rainbow.
I managed catch this chapter before and after the rewrite, and I must say the rewrite was a huge improvement. Good job! Have any other chapter been rewritten?
10001292
Not yet. But, soon.
Wow, so they really haven't figured it out? I mean, at least Twi and Shining have the excuse of having been and may still be, under mind control, but none of the others, especially Miss Known-her-since-they-were-foals Fluttershy put it together after the army of shapeshifters showed up that Rainbow was set up?
And I though the Anon-a-miss versions of them were stupid.