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Gilda and her friends don't know it yet... but they are so f***ed.

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Im trying to work out what punishments they should face besides just merely jailtime because that's already in a lot of anon a miss fanfictions
I want to do something unique

What about the Rainbooms? What going to happen to them?

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don't know yet. But something will

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Oh how new you are when you think there's anything that can be unique to this genre. If you can think of it, it's already been done at some point. That's how over saturated this site is in this genre.

Wow:pinkiegasp: An a Anon-A-Miss story where Sunset is straight up murdered. With no bull crap in between.

That’s the first.

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I can already see it happening:
Gilda: 😰Oh God, Help us!
Satan: GOD CAN'T HELP YOU ALL NOW!

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It's pretty obvious what will happen to the Rainbooms:
Our Friendship Princess will have no mercy on their souls. They won't fear Hell because she will become (in her world's case) TARTARUS INCARNATED.

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i forget if celestia actualy had a motherly role to sunset but wouldnt the murder of a citizen or tecnical princess make equestira have cause to invade or demand trial?

"You're going to love it here." My Dad said. "Canterlot is a very nice place. I'm sure you'll make lots of new friends at your new High School."

Isn’t CHS far way from the house?

"Yeah...friends." I grumbled. Forgot to mention someting about me. I don't really like to make friends much. No let me rephrase that. I don't like to make friends anymore. Don't get me wrong. I don't hate people I just lost interest. For reasons I won't tell right now. While I don't like to make friends. I'm still willing to talk to you if you have the patience. I don't have many friends anyways. If anything I have more of them in the video game community than in real life. Friends online are just easier to talk to. I don't know why.

I feel that.

Nope. It’s Over. I would move to the streets.

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With how many anon a miss stories there are I doubt you could do something that hasn’t been done, but I wish you luck.

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You never know. The story just started so it’s hard to tell.

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Really? I don’t see a twilight tag.

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I don’t think so, but opinions on that vary.

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Show far I only know of two. But they didn't just straight up show the murder like this story did.

Not bad
Has my interest i really wanna see what happens when gilda sees that anon a miss is still posting.

Can't wait to see what happens when the truth is revealed to everyone.

There’s going to be CARNAGE.

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Oh yeah, people are gonna be BUCKED(Read FUCKED) when he finds out what happened. Hopefully he can get in contact with Princess Twilight, and when he does, Jordan is in for a big surprise and Twilight's gonna be PISSED!

I hope this doesn’t sound racist, because if it is I’ll definitely delete it. But, you can tell this guy isn’t black or hispanic.

Derrick rolled his eyes and grabbed the flashlight and looked around. There was nothing there. "Are you sure you weren't just seeing things? You do watch a lot of horror movies."

No he doesn’t, because if he did he wouldn’t have went down there.

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If anon a miss is still posting, then Gilda would probably think it’s sunset from beyond the grave still spilling secrets.

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Gilda can't seriously be that stupid to think of something like that......🤔Or can she?

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It depends if she believes in the paranormal.

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How so?
Is there some specific cultural stereotype in speech between them you are referring to?
I'm genuinely curious, as I'm not an American.

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Sort of. Blacks and Hispanics are known for acting differently in these types of situations.

Jordan, I know this is a lot to process right now but try to pull yourself together. As of now, you are Sunset’s only hope.

"It's just Sunset took advantage of our friendship!" Rainbow muttered. "It's a good thing I sent Gilda and her friends to teach that lying bitch a lesson!" She huffed. "Hopefully she'll apologizes to us and maybe we can be friends again!"

Oh Rainbow, how it's going to bite you hard once you learn what happened.

THIS is the point where it gets interesting. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.

I’m surprised he wants to help her with all the pain she put him through. When this is over his therapist is gonna get paid and retire early.

Can’t wait to see the girls reactions especially rainbows

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Well, when Rainbow Dash told Gilda she should teach Sunset Shimmer a lesson, it didn’t mean she should kill her.

Why are they pushing him to make friends so bad?

Oh come on!:flutterrage: Cancer!? Seriously!

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be interesting to see how this plays out

It's very similar to the movie Ghost. Maybe we can have Sunset Shimmer mess with them as a ghost and show them what has happened to her because of their actions. They kinda deserve a scare and then our protagonist can find her body and show it to the police and link the rainboooms to the crime since they all planned her murder

Oh-Ho! Sunset’s body has been discovered by the Police. Let’s see the Rainbooms still believe Sunset’s guilty after they see/hear this on the news. And let’s see if Gilda and her group can weasel their way out as well.

Something tells me that the magic of friendship is gonna cure his cancer.

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Didn’t the posts stop after sunset’s death? As for gilda and her crew, they probably already skipped town, unless they’re stupid.

nice work on chapters out so far look forward to more:twilightsmile:

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Maybe, unless the CMC didn’t know. But still, even if the posts stopped, they will have high doubt because I’m positive that Sunset being dead was one thing they; especially Rainbow, didn’t account for.

"Take the body to the examination room. We need to find a cause of death as soon as possible." He ordered. This mystery wasn't going to be easy.

Not really gonna be all that hard to figure out the "Mystery."

Gilda carved "Anon-A-Miss" on Sunset's stomache. That'll narrow the investigation down to the students of CHS since Anon-A-Miss only targeted the Teens at CHS.

And since they're getting her body autopsied, the police will know how and when Sunset died. (Which'll screw The Crusaders over since they've probably been posting shit days/weeks after Sunset's death before calling it quits. Hell, they could've probably posted something while Gilda and her goons where torturing/killing Sunset.)

All they gotta do is inform Mystable about the death and how it's linked to the Mystable user "Anon-A-Miss" to get Mystable to release whatever info they have on Anon-A-Miss, the police'll come up to Anon-A-Miss's places of residence, interrogate/interview them, then arrest the account creator(s).

Along with this, they can also go to the school, inform Principle Celestia on why they're there, getting her to share as much info on Sunset as she can (Minus everything she knows about magic and "Pony World." Otherwise, she'd be put in the Loony Bin.), interview her along with the other staff and students until they either find those involved with her death or until the perpetrators willingly turn themselves in. (Dash for helping in setting Sunset up for Gilda's trap, and Gilda and her cronies for killing her.)

So yeah, it's not a hard mystery. It's just time consuming.

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Bender: So, I can’t understand what that means. Is everyone except for Sunset, Jordan and his family boned?
Leela: Yeah, they’re boned. So strongly boned.

Please, don't stop this is going to more interesting

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