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Jade Ring


“Stories have to be told or they die, and when they die, we can't remember who we are or why we're here.” -Sue Monk Kidd

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"It's getting late, my love. I hope you enjoyed your dinner. I knew that you'd appreciate a quiet evening at home after such a long, hard day at work. Now that the dishes are washed and the little ones are asleep, let's enjoy a little alone time before bed. What's that? Of course they're asleep already; they went down like a dream. I just told them a story and off they went.

What story? Oh, just an old folktale my mother told me. A little story about love and loss, about a beautiful lady, a passionate love... and a broken heart.

You'd like to hear it? Well... if you insist.

Once upon a time..."

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Day 3 of the Seventh Anniversary Story Bomb.

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Comments ( 5 )

I liked this. It was interesting.

*internal horrified screaming intensifies*

Creepy. But the good kind. I liked it.

When I saw the title, I thought it was going to be a weird ship between Chrysalis and Sweetie Belle, but this is much better. At first it reminded me of that Vocaloid song, "Daughter of Evil," but then it went a different direction.

And dannng man. That ending.

5/5.

Ah, that creeping feeling of "this is going to end badly...."
I've seen a few semi-tragic origin stories for Chryssy, so it's interesting to have this one be inspired by her instead. Heck of a soundtrack, too.

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