Displaced: The Metal Armed Vigilante

by WhalenJP

Chapter 10: Nightmare Of An Epilogue

Chapter 10: Nightmare Of An Epilogue

Jon came home after everything that happened at Faust Manor, his mind a whirl of thoughts as he thought of Cadence’s pregnancy and the fact of Celestia welcoming him to her family tree.

In all honesty, he was flattered, and a bit happy that he has something worthy for being here after all since Jonathon knew he wouldn’t be able to get back to his home dimension, to his real family.

He maneuvered through the cluttered shelves of the area of the warehouse and up to his home, and went inside and took off his trench coat.

The actuators carried him to the couch as his body started becoming sluggish ever since he took care of that gang a few blocks back, turning them into the police station like all the rest of the trash. Jon knows being a vigilante means not following the justice system, but he doesn’t care, he is doing a good thing at least to help the world become a better place since he arrived.

He sat down and shut his eyes, eyelids heavy with the day’s events catching up to him, but it wasn’t so bad.

At least I’ve got family to look out for, and I guess I have to look forward to a long term stay instead of this warehouse. He thought to himself as he fell to the land of dreams.

What he didn’t know or the actuators see was that someone was already in the room with him, a pair of turquoise dragon slitted eyes staring at him with fear and weariness.

Then stepping out of the shadows came a woman, a woman with purple hair that flowed around the shoulders and wearing a body hugging silver armor that has seen better days.

Who is he? She thought, What are those metal contraptions coming out of his back?

The woman took a step forward and reached a hand out to take a look at the face of the man that came into her shelter, wanting to see who it was so that she may recognize him back in her world, but was stopped by one of the metal arms grabbing her hand suddenly.

The man’s eyes opened and she stared at the blue irises that looked like they were glowing in the light, she could even see her reflection in them.

The woman started panicking a little bit and started to try and pull her arm out of the three pronged metal hand, since she doesn't have enough strength to fight and wanted to run.

She stopped struggling as she saw the stern glare pointed at her as the man spoke

" Who are you, and what the hell are you doing in my home?"
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THE ENDorisit

Author's Note:

THAT'S A WRAP FOLKS!!! II know that's a crappy end to a good story, but that is the end of The Metal Vigilante! I hope you guys enjoyed this story as much as I enjoyed making it, lemme know in the comments down below if there's stuff I should put in or fix, or if you guys want me to do another story altogether. Until Then... TOODLES!!!

Comments

[Resadur164]

I think I speak for most when I say SEQUEL WANTED

[Mourningmist]

9297091
The ending was sequel bait and shite bait at that. I want a sequel to but first I have to get this taste out of my mouth.

[Sup dawg]

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL.

[Painkiller]

What he didn’t know or the actuators see was someone was in the room with him, a pair of turquoise dragon slitted eyes staring at him with fear and weariness.

Then stepping out of the shadows came a woman, a woman with purple hair that flowed around the shoulders and wearing a body hugging silver armor that has seen better days.

I have no idea as to who that is.

*looks at the chapter name*
Oh. Of cource.

[Noctis Prism]

Awesome, curious to who the woman is.

[Danny Eclipse]

What he didn’t know or the actuators see was someone was in the room with him, a pair of turquoise dragon slitted eyes staring at him with fear and weariness.
Then stepping out of the shadows came a woman, a woman with purple hair that flowed around the shoulders and wearing a body hugging silver armor that has seen better days.

When I saw that description, I began to look around the MLP characters and I think I know of two.
#1 and the most likely one: Nightmare Rarity.
#2 and not as likely but still a suspect: Nightmare Moon.

[WhalenJP]

9301352
i'll give you a hint, Luna's counterpart.

[Raccoon Writer]

Well then, I think a sequel is in high demand if the comments are anything to go by.

[The Faceless Maker]

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[Andonexus13]

Is a sequel currently in the works as it were?

[WhalenJP]

9458888
no, not yet. I have been hit by the worst bug in history: WRITER'S BLOCK.

[Extinction]

Feels a little rushed. But I’ve most definitely read worse. No the less. Great short story.

[DL2]

Awesome story. Doc Ock as always been my favorite Spider-Man villain. Heck... I think he's my fav marvel villain in general. I once had a dream wheres I had Alfred Molina's Doc Ock arms soon after I watch Spider-Man 2 when I was younger. It. Was. Awesome. Reading this brought back that memory. Thanks man. ^^