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TwiPON3


Just a few more steps...

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This story is a sequel to If You Want To Go, I Won't Stop You.


After the events of If You Want To Go, I Won't Stop You, some suffered more than others. Decisions were made, a certain five girls and three kids are never going to see their home again, and there will be a lot to adjust to.

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Comments ( 23 )

I'm sorry, what? There was no context or intro for the first one, and there's no real sense of chronology here.

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Chapter 1 is a few hours after Chapter 2 in the original. Chapter 2 is the first day back to school after Sunset's funeral. Chapter 3 of the first story is just the Afterlife. At that point, both Sunset and Seth are dead.

Does that help?

Comment posted by Speedy Silverstreak deleted Sep 3rd, 2018

Twilight essentially has just started WWIII. Think about this for a second: those children including rhe Rainbooms HAVE FAMILIES. Twilight just took 300+ students in a act of rage and didn't think for a moment the worlds governments wouldn't take so kindly, especially the US Government. There have been people in rhe world who have done worse that the students of CHS and they get BETTER sentences than those kids did. And if they are refusing to return those kids then technically they just enacted war on the Earth. The UN would get involved and the US will have allies from multiple countries with advanced militaries and technology able to alter the portal to actually use weapons of mass destruction. If all this happens Equestria would fall because one prissy book princess didn't think that TEENAGERS are different than ADULTS!

Twilight just killed Equestria

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Just like the garbage that is the DCEU.

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Should I use a minigun or these?*pulls out Cap's shield and Mijolnir*

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Careful. You're going against powerful magic, here there.

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*walks into Pentagon*Get me a line to the president.

Soldier: Yes sir.

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One good 50 cal shot to Celestia’s horn would be enough to cut off her magic

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Tsai did say that she was willing to work with Celestia, and Mitzi and Twilight are there. Not to mention *some* of the cell infrastructure is still up. It is debatable as to how good it would actually work at this point, though.

I'm not saying it won't be tried. I actually was trying to figure out how long, and how bad, it would be until a fight broke out between them.

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I wanna read that story, lol, it sounds like a curbstomp fest of epic proportions :trollestia:
Sounds like it'd be fun to see humanity kicking ass against some kidnappers :yay:

Also, having read this... this is... eeeh, kidnapping over 300 students and imprisoning them in Equestria for the rest of their lives? Yeah, somehow I don't think that'll end well - depending on the level of technology that the world in which CHS rests has. I would think that kind of information would end up spreading beyond the school's borders, no way can they keep that secret for very long - those families will find out at some point.

...This inspires me to write some ponies getting curbstomped :trollestia:

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I don't really like writing this story anymore. Is that a bad thing, or a good thing?

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Well... I have a lot of stories I don't like writing anymore, and people want more of those stories despite me not wanting to write for them. If you don't like writing for the story anymore, then don't force it and move onto something you enjoy writing, and write it regardless of what others say - you're the author here, in the end it's up to you whether or not you want to continue writing or not.

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Thanks. I think I've made my peace at FimFiction.

Well, this turns the tables somewhat...

And then America found a way into Equestria, rescued their people, and kindly informed the Equestrians that kidnapping American citizens is an act of war. Stupid, and very ooc, ponies did not listen and tried to get the "prisoners" back. America declares war, E=mc2, and Equestria is reduced to a radioactive wasteland that Little Pip would feel right at home in.

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Read the first story that's linked. Although, that one should have also gotten more backstory as well.

So, why does Rainbow still hate Sunset even after her innocence has been revealed?

How is rainbow scared of a child?

Equestria is doomed.

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