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riicky83
Sunset Shimmer is my dream girl.
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nice work on both chapters and looking forward to the relation on what happens next.
I think I see what is going on... Sex/Love frees them from whatever curse they are under Right?
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To be honest, I'm unsure, part of me kinda wants to go down that route but I'm currently trying to come up with something different before deciding on what I want.
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Perhaps ypu can make it so Dick is part pony and his magic blends with his cum and that is what frees them?
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To be honest I was thinking of having it connected to something else.
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What
9091865
Well in the description it mentions a mistake that needs correcting, I was thinking of having it connected to that.
so far so good
Rarity has been freed from this mysterious curse, whatever it may be. :D
9091875
Makes sense
Alright, lets see where this goes.
Is he gonna order more mannequins?
What's the fetish?
9093930
Well in the second chapter it has sex with an inanimate object, well at least until it woke up.
oh boy
Let’s see how this goes
Oh no, nah-ah! you cant just make all the action happen off-camera and not show us! you better make up for this in future chapters once the girls are free.
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No offence but people moan if there's too much and now they moan if it's a tease, not every episode has have sex in it.
Plus how would you put in several hours worth of sex into a story?.
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Didn't mean for my comment to come off as rude or angry it was more of a joke pocking fun of the fact that there was an orgy but we didnt see it.
"not every episode has to have sex in it." that is correct and its fine, i just find it weird considering you tend to put a lot of sex in almost every chapter you make. Not a complaint just pointing it out.
"Plus how would you put in several hours worth of sex into a story?" Well... it can be done but it depends on a few things.
Story length, single or multi-chapter, how much time the author wants to sink into it etc...
Sorry if i offended you, it wasn't my intention.
It was a bit jarring suddenly jumping a head like that. When I want to do a time skip I generally put three asterisks "*" Between the two sentences to help illustrate the point. I believe it's what most books/stories use actually.
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How do you mean?
like this *** or like this
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First one. Like this: * * *
Usually with a couple of spaces between lines, So the end result should look something like this:
9093930
haren ?
A good story man, i wonder what will happen to derpy, she needs love too.
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FiMFiction's chapter editor (the same one used for comments like this one, as it turns out) also has a handy little "Add Horizontal Rule" button that you can use to separate scenes, if you so wish.
nice work.
nice work.
nice work.
The story is wholesome but quick
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Well, I've been trying to think of a suitable backstory for Manne as well as explain why some humans have Ponyish traits.
In the end, I think a small part of Manne's backstory ended up with a Chucky vibe to it.
Hopefully, if my brain doesn't come to a dead end, this story should have two more chapters before I can finish it.
nice work.
hahahahahahahahaha. i saw that coming. i literally thought 'heh, she is totally putting that on Dash.' i actually thought this when she picked out the materials. when she first grabbed pink i first thought Fluttershy cause her mane but then i thought 'hehe, Rarity is going to torment Dashie.'
hehe. that must have been jarring for Coco.
Coco: *walks backwards into front room cause reasons* "Welcome to Carousel Boutique where everything is Chiq, Unique, and Magni...."
Coco: *faints*
nice work.
This is so sad
Whut
um who is dolly?
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No offence but have you read all the episodes?.
i did not know until i read the last chapter
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Well I kinda wanted her to be somewhat mysterious until the end. I might do a small back story on her but she is in short, a small figurine that Manne created and then he used his magic to make her into a real life-size pony to do his bidding.
Am I the only one who thinks the quickest way to get pinkie out of her manikin form would be to break a pinkie promise. I can imagine it. Your doing something you promised not to do and suddenly you hear something. You look up and see pinkie shaking. You think 'thats not possible.' then you hear a loud crack.ing sound alerting rarity as she passes by. She looks in and join you as you both watch as a crack forms around the left eye. Then the piece of porcupine in the eye falls out leaving behind an eye burning with fury. Rarity slowly turns to you as even her main gets whiter. "Please tell me you didn't break a pinkie promise." She all but screamed. You have no reply as you are captured in fear as you watch more cracks form. There was nowhere to run, nowhere to hide. The last thing you hear as you faint, is a scream of rage a the sound of her getting free, from her cage.