• Member Since 11th Apr, 2012
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I liked it. Small error in the last line: "To be something your not, something you could never admit to wanting to be. That was the thrill." Should be "you're". How come I can't put spaces between lines now? What's going on?

935225 Server errors, probably. Same thing with the abundant 504/502s. Also, awesome story. Favorited. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra2.png

Woo, oh yeah. This is one of my favourite kinks- Just wish it was longer, and a bit meaner (not violent). I especially liked that Rainbow Dash had walked out in anger/panic before, felt like it fit her.

Man... at the end there, it took a sudden turn into heartwrenching. Rarity working out a few demons? :raritydespair:

Waaaaay better than I thought it would be. Rairdash is almost inconceivable since they are more like acquaintances than friends.

You've labeled your story as 'complete'. Pity, it has such epic potential. :raritywink: :rainbowwild:

Um, Wow.... Rarity's got some issues...
Must know more.

You can't just leave us hanging like that!

Raridash... so rare! :raritywink: :rainbowderp:

I only ask that you include more details.

In truth, Rarity has indeed taken a lot from Rainbow Dash, but look out! She's really a dominatrix in disguise! And well, Dash doesn't seem to mind getting a little submissive. Very cool story! Looking forward to more.

Interesting, but I still wanna know Rarity's issues. After the last chapter and the gaudy trash line and such, I can't help but feel she's rather broken, emotionally. Though I do agree with the more details thing. Well, we got some, but not enough. Guessing Side Stitch treated her this way.

I'm also a bit curious about Romance in the title, since I'm not seeing it. Dashie helping Rarity through this perhaps?

First time i see a Raridash, and this one is pretty good:raritystarry:
But why? Why do you leave us now?? More, QUICK !!! :flutterrage:

I agree that this is quite hot - apparently 'feminizing a tomboy' is a form of submission I find hot.

Would like to see more, with longer chapter as some of the previous commenters have suggested.

i really like this story short and sweet.
keep it up!

I would like to see a story made of this, if not from you than perhaps someone else.

I am more then a little slightly disturbed by what I just read... so as to compound the fact that I am bat shit crazy... ON TO CHAPTER TWO!!!!! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Yep this shit is fucked Up! Why I'm still reading it is beyound my current comprehension... I guess its like a train wreck in that fashion... you want to look away but you just can't. :derpyderp2:

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It is supposed to be distressing and make you read it despite wanting to stop. Because trauma.

This is one of those stories that I disliked after the first read, somehow found myself rereading, and disliked it even more.
It needs some kind of sequel where RD SOMEHOW manages to break free of this kind of relationship, either with the help of the others or on her own.
(I realize that's not likely, but I just HAD to say it)

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