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fluttercordlover232
As you can tell from my username, I'm a very hardcore "Fluttercord" shipper! I'm dedicated to only writing Fluttercord stories!!!
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Love it. love it. Love it!!!
what happens next?
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Some really nasty stuff
I'm kinda busy lately, but the next chapter might come out by the end of march
Can't wait for the update!
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I'm glad to hear! They'll be coming around mid April as I finish some other requests I have queued
Thanks for the follow btw!
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Welcome!
Getting to the good part
Your chapters are definitely too short, but I used to do that too. Start striving for a bit more words in each and you'll grow as a writer. Things like poetry tend to work well with short chapters, but you aren't writing poetry.
The issues from the previous chapters still still are present, and are only becoming more obvious as your story goes on. I haven't downvoted this, but a lot of other people have.
You picked a sensitive and complex issue and handled it very poorly... unless you wanna go back to the development stage with this one, your story will not be received well. Your introduction of the perpetrator, Star Struck and further attempts to handle PTSD are all very amateur. Please consider doing research.
Deleting comments is also not a good sign.
can't wait to see what happens next.
Holy shit. I need more. The 👏 anime 👏 hasn't 👏 been 👏 concluded 👏.
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What do you mean by that? What anime?
I feel like this is from the movie//book Misery. Keep up the good work I wanna see how Fluttershy gets away or is rescued and what happens to this bastard of a pony!