• Published 8th Oct 2017
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My Little Pony Meets Equestria Girls - Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever

Now My Little Pony Meets Equestria Girls the cutie mark map calls for them and they go to the Crystal Empire.

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Cutie Mark Map Calls For EqG

The main 7 fell out of the mirror. “There you are!” A purple pony said, as the main 7 was looking at her hooves then her face, it was Twilight. “I knew the Cutie Mark Map was calling for you guys! Interesting the map is calling from the other world for some reason I can’t find that in my books or anything! And why not us might have to show there human personality to the Crystal Ponies hmmm...”

“Ahhhh!!!! What happened to us!” EqG Rarity said, as the main 7 stand up on their two behind hooves.

“Uhhh...” Twilight said, as she pointed her horn to her hooves.

The main 7 then standed on all there hooves. “Come with me,” Twilight said, they all followed her to the Cutie Mark Map, “Here is the Cutie Mark Map that’s why your cutie marks were glowing earlier.

“Cutie Marks?!” They all said.

“Yes a cutie mark is a special talent,” Twilight said.

“The how did we get these cutie marks? We just came here,” EqG Rainbow Dash asked.

“Well it’s complicated you all look the same here with the other main six except the other, Twilight with glasses on and I don’t,” Twilight answered. “Now all of you should go now to the Crystal Empire just take the train that’s all.”

“Yes but actually where is the train station?” EqG Twilight asked.

“Oh, well I will take you there,” Twilight replied, they all followed Twilight to the train station. “Here is your train,” Twilight pointed to the train. “So here is how the Cutie Mark Map goes you walk around and see if there is any trouble around if it’s a big thing then that might be your problem to fix,” Twilight explained, “Okay? Good bye.”

The main 7, went on the train and the train started moving. “To the Crystal Empire hehe,” Pinkie Pie said.

Soon they arrived. “Now to spot any trouble,” Sunset Shimmer said.

“I don’t want to be a pony!” A sudden foal said.

The main 7 ran to her. “Hi what’s your name?” Sunset Shimmer asked.

“M-m-m-my name i-i-is, Sunlight,” Sunlight said nervously.

“Hi my name is, Sunset Shimmer and these are my friends,” Sunset Shimmer introduced herself. “And why don’t you want to be a pony?” Sunset Shimmer asked

“Because you have to walk on four legs and you can’t fly free like a bird,” Sunlight explaned.

“Well just live a live like a pony and uhhh...” Sunset Shimmer paused for a sec to think of course she wasn’t even a pony and was wandering why the map sent them.

“Hello? Are you just gonna stand there or what?” Sunlight asked.

Sunset Shimmer was still thinking she didn’t know it was the right thing to do but anyway she’s just thinking of have a go of it like when she brought Starlight there to visit her world. “Well I tell you what I will take you to our world.”

“Pfft, everypony knows there is no such thing as another world than Equestria,” Sunlight commanded.

“There is,” Sunset Shimmer said, now she was thinking of a spell to go back to their world. “Ok I’am going to do a spell that will transfer us to our world,” Sunset Shimmer wasn’t sure if it was going to work what was she thinking if she doesn’t know the isn’t she supposed to not do the spell but luckily, they were back to their world.

“Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Sunlight screamed very loud that she almost lost her voice.

“Wo, wo there, Sunlight calm ya farm,” Applejack said.

“Here let me help you this is how we stand it will take a while to get use to walking like this,” Sunset Shimmer said, Sunlight almost fell but luckily, grabbed on to Sunset Shimmer. They all went inside started learning and Sunlight was getting taught human stuff. Then school was finished.

“This was fun! Can I visit again someday?” Sunlight asked.

“Of course, here take this book to get in contact with me,” Sunset Shimmer said.

“Uhhh... does this even work?” Sunlight asked.

“Of course is does write in it and I’m sure I will get your note,” Sunset Shimmer said. Sunlight wrote inside the book with her mouth. “Uhhh... here use your hands here we say hands instead of hooves,” the note appeared on Sunset Shimmer’s book and looked at it. “See I got it now let’s go back,” Sunset Shimmer went through the portal and the others and then teleported to Sunlight’s home. “Now you see being a pony is ok once you go you may turn into something else.”

“Yeah for now on I’m going to enjoy my pony life,” Sunlight said.

“And now I know how being a pony is all about and my friends all because of you,” Sunset Shimmer said. “Well we’ve gotta go, friend.”

“Bye!” Sunlight said.

And now that Sunset Shimmer already knows spells now they teleported back to Twilight’s Castle. “Hi, Sunset!” Twilight said, “here are my friends see you guys look the same and yay you finished the Cutie Mark thing.”

“Sure did it was a bit hard,” Sunset Shimmer said.

Twin Rainbow Dash’s flew up. “Awsome!” EqG Rainbow Dash said, and all the others talked and communicated together 6 hours later, it was already night.

“Bye everyone I mean everypony,” Sunset Shimmer said.

The main 6 said. “Bye!” and so all of the others said bye as well and the main 7 went inside the mirror to their other world.

Author's Note:

Hope you liked it I put a lot of work in this one. For all of you who were waiting for this story or movie.

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Comments ( 17 )

Why is it divided into 2 chapters? Neither the format or length justify splitting it in two.

The engrish is stronk in the description and short description.

First off, I love the picture that you used for this. The image alone of Spike looking at his doggy counterpart like "Really?!" Is hilarious.

That being said, this story is honestly a confusing mess. There is so much wrong with these two chapters, that I would make up an entire chapter myself just talking about it.

I would suggest either doing some SERIOUS editing to this fix it, because it almost reads like someone who was drunk tried writing it, or get a damn good proofreader to help you out with this. Because, as of right now, I have to give this a serious down vote.

If you can somehow fix this mess, that down vote might be removed. But right now....yeah, no.

Peppermint frost is my editor she edit it and I’m just practicing writing. I just want to show everypony my skills how I write and who I’am.

I suppose this isn't bad. I love the concept and love the cover art. Needs a bit more.........fleshing out. As a suggestion I would recommend writing just a brief outline of what you want to happen then start making a more detailed outline of each event and use that. You'll find writing longer more involved chapters becomes much easier this way where you can easily crank out 2000 words and feel like you have barely written anything.

Feels... rushed

sorry, I really tried, this story looks like your teacher assigned to write a fic but you don't want to do, but in the end, you write something just to not turn in a blank assignment.

try to improve the story a bit and I'll remove the downvote

It’s not my fault I’m just practicing. :flutterrage::rainbowhuh:

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Comment posted by Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever deleted Dec 22nd, 2017
Comment posted by Cutest Boxer Puppy Ever deleted Dec 22nd, 2017

I understand it might of been rushed but all these bad comments could really hurt her feelings. Just imagine if you had people hating your work.

Thanks, Rain I hope other people know how I feel.

Quite short; could be longer? No hate, though.

Thanks! :twilightsmile: I needed some positive feedback on this story. Please don’t forget to like.

Yeah, with you on that one. Come on, guys, everyone's different and everyone has a different taste in what they want to write. Seriously, enough with the hate. :raritydespair: Look, you made Rarity cry!

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