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hmm, good story, and yes spike will make a antagonist
Well, Spike WAS a cohort for Tirek in Generation 1...
so I COULD see some antagonist side of him, sorta...
Insanity, my old friend it's nice to see it again. This is definitely interesting and I like the idea.
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Nothing's bad about the story, it's just like... "the fuck, bruh".
Y'knawmean?
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Spike makes a great bad guy please update soon
Considering this, but nothing really clicks concerning this :V. Still, seems like people are enjoying it...so who knows, maybe I will too.
Enjoyable, but as a few of others said before me, what the fuck am I reading
? I think this story could go either exceptionally well or down in flames depending how you go about it. I look forward to an update.
This story is insane! Luckily, I love insane things. Continue, please :3.
Thank you all for your comments! I must admit I am surprised by the amount of feedback. I'd love to continue reading your comments and responses to the story! I just have a comment of my own: is the "wtf" comment as a result of not understanding the story, or because it is a new idea. I would like to know in order to consider for the future.
Ehhh, I really don't like the concept, but you're not a bad writer at all. I'm not interested in seeing where this is gonna go, but I wish you luck in getting there.
Thanks for writing, at least
I like it, it seems to have an interesting plot. Hope to see more.
Where the hay is Twilight?! I doubt she's gonna put up with this...
Or better yet, Fluttershy. She'd definitely put the little ankle biter in his place.
Content Rating: Mature
wat?
Mature Categories: Sex
search gave me this fanfic.... description = "This is not a clopfic"
The story contains sexual content, but it is not desribed as an erotica, therefore not a clopfic.
Read and find out it sounds like the old cartoons were they would say tune in next time on the next *insert show title here*
That's what I'm going for! Haha!
What's Spike got against Celestia?
Nrmally I prefer romance stories. But is always good to give into the darkness every now and then. And I have to say, this is a pretty good one. It is so good to finally find a "Dark" story that doesn't involve a Psycho sadic bitch Pinkie, or an overpowered Discord or Chrysails who are rape/mindbreaking every character on the show.
Hope to read more soon.
Spike's antagonistic sentiments towards Celestia will be explained in the next chapter. Remember how Spike ended up in Canterlot in the first place. :0
I'm sorry, but again I'm slightly confused by the timeline of this story. Um, was the conquer ponyville before this?
No, this scene is before the conquering of Ponyville.
And so you throw us into a bleak, chaos-ridden Ponyville, without rhyme or reason, and apparently Dash is Spike's slave.
Ohohoho God, Mr. Author, you have a LOT of story to be catching up on.
Intriguing...
So what's cooking up there in that darkness-soiled brain of yours, Spike?
And just what are you planning to do with an entire country to battle against?
This oughta be good.
dark spike that could be a new MLP character right...
Thank you for the comments. Well, I am pretty excited about the process of Rainbow Dash's conquering. Yes, Dark Spike would definitely make for quite an efficient antagonist. That is the story I believe I can deliver. Oh, it will be a fun ride. Conquest starts with Luna.
very ooc for spike but still somewhat interesting.
meh
do continue
Careful about changing tenses; you're switching back and forth between past and present. It's difficult I know, but it'll make things much easier to follow for your readers.
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Thanks for the tip. I knew something didn't feel quite right, but you've been able to point it out nicely. I'll be sure to edit appropriately. Everything will be past tense.
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I feel Spike going "OOC" would be appropriate for this story. Thanks for the comment.
Man, that was fucking awesome. OOC Spike is awesome and it is what got me to read in the first place. Now if only he could be like this in the real show.
I was liking it until this chapter, when it came to dealing with the two princess, I was expecting spike to use a more vocal form of manipulation, a play on words to indirectly ot even directly weaken her resolve by attacking things like ; How the ponies will never had never accepted her. How her own sister instead of taking the time to help her over come the darkness, choose to lock her away for a thousand years and so on. He really just openly insulted her, angered her where it wasn't necessary, when simple manipulation and word play would have be more affective and damn sure more fun. Than when her resolve was at its weakness, spike goes into his offer, but right not her anger and resolve towards the dragon should really make this plan fail.
Well, manipulation was on the agenda for the next chapter. His proposition was to be followed by total and complete manipulation (especially by words). Everything you mentioned was to be included, though at first Spike's plan was to utterly shock Princess Luna. His insults were meant to anger her - to alarm her and intensify sentiments of hatred and rage - because he knew emnity could be easily manuevered. From himself to somepony else in particular (Princess Celestia).
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I'm looking foward to see that happen.
well shit just hit the fan
I liked how he fucked with her before he made his proposition.
please more
Totally
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So Spike's master plan is to build a sex kingdom for himself?
Update plz
This story is genius. I love how Spike is conquering everyone, especially his hold on Rainbow Dash. I wish this story had more chapters.
This doesn't seem like anything like the summary, can't even follow it cause I don't know what's going on.
its dead
