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maness1993


I'm a dorky 19 year. My hobbies include writing short stories and writing reviews for music, books, movies, and tv shows. I'm also a huge fan of Breaking Bad, The Dark Knight series, and many more.

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Good story so far. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

This looks very interesting. I have never seen Dexter but having this as a crossover might give me a general idea of the show.

I've been waiting fr a dexter fanfic,and now I got! I could kiss you right now, but I don't swing that way in other words good story can't wait for more!:pinkiehappy:

I love it, and you should probably add this to the crossover group if you're gonna use material from the show.

I like the idea. Story's where Spike has a dark side and are done well are good to read sometime.:pinkiehappy:
One thing though I think would be a good change for the story. If Spike is a 'Dark Dragon', wouldn't it be better if putting others to sleep be a power from his heritage instead of using a syringe. Think it leaves to many questions. Like how he got it, what's in it, so on and so on. And I don't want him to get caught.:pinkiecrazy:

Also, something about this makes me think of "Dirty Sexy Pony". Not sure why yet, but it does, and I love that story.:moustache:

Good luck! Will be watching.:twilightsmile:

I will explain how he got the syringe in Chapter 2.

yay!!!! Haven't seen a story like this one in a while!

Thanks for the comments guy's! I'm currently finishing the first two chapters of a new story and finishing the new chapter for this. I'm even getting chills from this story.

3152490 Thanks for the head's up man. Sorry about that, I'm new to this. lol.

A few errors, but a good fanfic :) can't wait for chapter two!

3160586 Sorry, this is my first real story.

3172127
This will be somebodies reaction...

I like the way you are portraying Spike in this fic.

Considering the pinki tag im guesing shes the culprit

Spike you evil bastard.
I love the idea when he goes homicidal. :pinkiehappy:

Im not a fan of spike getting shipped with the cmc... but I still enjoyed this chapter

3180210 Sorry needed a Rita (Dexter's girlfriend) and I'm so sick of Spike and Applebloom stories. Lol

3181094 I don't like it cause I never saw spike in their age group, he's clearly older then any of the kids in cheerlies class.

3182340 in the story Spike is 18 she is 16. Sorry if that doesn't help any.

3182467 oh... I thought he was way younger, like, 12 or 13. But 18 is cool. :moustache:

3182533 Yeah, sorry about the confusion folks! That's my bad!

good story dieing to see more!:twilightsmile:

3178919 me to it shows that evry thing has a dark side.:raritystarry:

3224204
The Joker once said "All it takes one bad day to drive the sanest man alive to lunacy."

It Spike's case that is one too many.
Seasons 1-3 for example.

3224578 I think Dragon quest had a big impact on spike. He's basically alone in the world. Sure he has friends, but they don't understand him. Maybe if they invited him on more quests and missions every now and then, he wouldn't have become the monster that he is in my story.

(That's the way I see it.)

3224967 Being ostracized and social rejection
can drive people to be antisocial.
Homicides and suicides.

3225197 Unrequited love.
At least Spike has Sweetie.
:moustache::heart::unsuresweetie:
Me: :yay:

3225221 Spike loves Twilight and Sweetie more than anything. If it wasn't for them, he would've destroyed Equistria a long time ago. In a way, those two are saving him from himself.

3225253 :eeyup:
They are the only ones keeping Spike in check. ( Unaware that is)

3225267 Yep. By the way, I love that Joker quote used. "The Killing Joke" am I right?

How I wish I could eat those cookies!! Besides dexter; Joker (The Killing Joke version) and Travis (Taxi Driver) are big inspirations.

wow too bad you couldn't make spike the element of love

And now the murder games begin.:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

It's okay to be a little crazy. :pinkiecrazy:

So Spike will now become a serial killer who murders other serial killers. Nice! Let's hope Sweetie Belle still accepts him regardless.

And there goes sex night:facehoof:!

I'm surprised no one noticed the Hunger Games reference yet. XD

How the hell was twilight supposed to get from ponyville to canterlot in seven minutes?

4647007
She teleported. My bad.

4394305 or spike and the mysterious killer (Maud or Pinkie is my guess) hookup and turn sweetie into a mass murder where all three of them go on a killing spree of blood gore and sex.

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NOW THAT SOUNDS LIKE FUN:pinkiecrazy:

(inhale) :fluttershyouch: (exhale) :fluttershbad: (inhale) :fluttershyouch: MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAR:flutterrage:

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