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MallaJong


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Pinkie Pie materializes in front of three fraternity brothers of one of the most party-hard Greek Fraternities in the nation. What happens when Pinkie Pie finally parties with actual party animals? Inspired by SimGretina's At The Gala (20% Cooler Remix) I wrote this story in one sitting on my cellular device. Many adjectives are repeated. This is because I just did not care about how the story was written, as long as the story was executed.

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You know, story execution is all well and good, but you shouldn't sacrifice quality. A great story poorly told is simply a poor story.

HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS FUNNY AS ALL HELL!!!!!!!!!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Pinkie parties with frat boys. I like this.

Aru

I like this dude who shout randomly "I'll show you sex baby!" :pinkiehappy:

Sees title. Must read.

I read it. It was funny.

"Oh, shit, we killed it!" :rainbowlaugh:

My face is actually red from laughing so much. It was pretty funny. :rainbowlaugh: When she took it all in at once, I knew all hell would be released. A single drop of something like that would surely set off Pinkie, and I'm surprised the world didn't blow up with all of that in her system.

I do wish we got to know how the heck she got there, unless I totally missed that somewhere. And the writing was decent. Could have been better, but I won't say anything considering what you wrote in the description. If only Pinkie were ever at a party I went to. She'd make it a million times cooler. :rainbowdetermined2:

at first I was like: :rainbowlaugh:
and now I'm like: :rainbowlaugh:
hilarious.

This was a fun idea. However, the actual writing is really hard to follow at times.

I'll show you sex, baby!!!!!

This was beautiful. It really was.

943871 It's a frat party. This story was written as if it was written at a frat party. IT'S PERFECT!!! :pinkiecrazy:

Hey! Someone in the front of the pic stole Pinkie's hat and repainted it!:pinkiegasp:

I wasn't initially going to check this out, but then i saw this line: Inspired by SimGretina's At The Gala (20% Cooler Remix)
And being obsessed with the brony music community as I am, I had to check this out.
This pic sums up my thoughts on this story:
i.chzbgr.com/completestore/12/9/12/zhdn_vqbaUuue1s5rB6b5w2.jpg
But in a good way. You never fail to impress Malla, you never fail to impress.

Why didn't they rape the living fuck out of that bitch?

OMG I watched Hangover part 1 and 2 for the first time then I found this story like 20mins later lol PARTY FUCKIN HARD!!! :flutterrage:

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