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Holy balls, 479k words!!@!@!@#!@$!@#

TBH This is about as far as I've read of your stories on the other site, I started the next One but never finished, 1290912 70+ chapters my friend, shit gunna go down.


Well, I do hope that if you pick Decretum up again you find it enjoyable as the others. It's. It's long after all, yes. But it should be up on this site in a few days. And thanks kindly for the fave.

it's not that I don't enjoy it, I just blow it off for a day or two for one reason or another and then when I remember come back to around 12 chapters and just can't be bothered to read all of them at the same time. I did the same thing with this story to be honest, I ended up reading 2-3 chapters in a sitting and then taking a break for anywhere between 4-5 hours to a day.


I do that with things a lot myself. It's definitely good to take things slower, I agree. I still find it amazing people are reading my stuff at all, much less going through as fast as they do.

i have never seen a troll fic before, and im not sure if this is one (haven't really looked at it) have you done the honor of being the first troll fic i stumbled upon or is it just that long and hard to read?


No, it's a real story and part of the series. It's just rather... dark.

and so the Darkness begins to spread itself

beware the Wolf-Scented Sheep, for it spreads the taint of Darkness
the Once-Corrupt shall return to Darkness all the more rapidly

Light begins to fight the Darkness, in front of and behind the scenes
Darkness helps Itself and hinders the Light by helping the Light and hindering itself

Light's warriors are being seeded with the taint of Darkness
the Once-Corrupt again accepts corruptions sweet embrace

Corruption spreads, reaching and grasping, looking for a foothold
the Wolf-Scented Sheep trades its wool for fur, forsaking the Light
a Mysterious Figure appears, seemingly on the side of Light,
but they hinder the work by acting too quickly, angering Darkness

the Rogue scares way Lights allies and spreads Darkness' corruption
the Gray One has chosen the side of Darkness, becoming corrupted
the Once-Corrupt struggles to fight the Darkness as they recognize
that as the Shifter and Sahdow succumb to Darkness,
they will bring the Gray One down with them as well

I'm about half way through and want to keep reading but with every chapter I just scream "No, no please stop it you're ruining everything!" then curl up in a ball and cry bitter tears...
Its just pure unadulterated agony to watch it all fall to pieces....
I want to but I can't T^T
I'll manage it some day....


Yeah. Yeah. That... sums up this story pretty well. Everything kind of just... falls until the last Stage. Then everything really goes to hell. I've been told by a few people this is uh... scarring. It's a big part of why I made sure to make this optional reading.

I suppose darkness has claimed it's first victim in that way... However, as much as I wish for Scrivener to show the others what Twilight saw, I doubt it will happen. Just the atmosphere of the whole situation... I had hoped everyone could coexist with the darker versions of Luna and Scrivy, but I don't even think everyone will even survive this... I think Applejack should die first. :moustache:

Oh man this IS scary BlackRose, but I love it. I just hope my feels can withstand this dark ending I feel looming...


I'm glad you're enjoying it. I hope you're able to continue to right to the end, because it definitely will get darker... but I promise there'll be so... interesting twists and turns, too. Some happiness, here and there, in spite of everything. Because I think it's the 'good' parts of this story that help make it so scary, even more than the 'bad' parts.

I almost want to stop here... Darkness is great and all... But taking souls and using them for your own ends is not (depending on your view of course)

This long spiral into darkness can only lead to disaster. Damned Odin and his Elixir of Awfulness...

That was awesome! I really felt my own emotions twisting throughout the whole thing. I kept on switching sides throughout it all, until finally I gave in myself, and especially enjoyed Applejack and Rainbow Dash's punishment/torture. Does that make me a bad person? I think it does, my smile never left my face that chapter :pinkiecrazy:
Only thing I disagreed with past that point was Scarlet and Applebloom becoming concubines...

I had a lot of fun poking at how this all related to the "main" plot of the other parts, from time travelling back to where Scrivener became a Tyrant Wyrm to stop all from happening (Although I did remember Valthrudnir's explanation on how time Travel wasn't possible, Midnight Hour's special talent, however, made me actually believe this(:derpytongue2:)) to me deeply thinking about all of the realities Odin replicated and confusing myself. I was too dumb to realize the answer was in the first few paragraphs, that it was a story (hurr).

Part of me wonders if that in some other reality, it DID happen with that little tease at the end there...

Truly, I will miss this dark possible-future you created in your universe. If the Blooming Moon Chronicles were books, they'd be on one of my higher shelves, with all my other favorites.


Thanks very much. I'm thrilled to hear you ended up finding it so enjoyable, since. It did get into some very dark places. And well... there is definitely a connection to Decretum, I'll say that at least. I ended up making this. Rather crazy whole. Well, it's hard to explain. You'll see, and I hope you enjoy it.
But thanks again. I hope the series continues to be just as enjoyable as it goes on. There's still quite a few places to go, and some of them are even crazier than where BLCA went, so with luck, it'll continue to be just as thrilling a ride as it's been so far.

I was surfing around and saw this:

It's a song about Rarity as a vampire. Sounds familiar eh?

Ohhhhhh gawd. They're getting a bit TOO evil. Something's going to happen. They're going to need a wake-up call. I'm willing to bet the EoH are going to be used upon them. That's just a guess though. Anyway, reading on now.

ALright. I think I've been proven wrong. Glory in your victory, foul foul creature :rainbowlaugh:

Ooooooh god. Gotta love 'em
within the

I think I'm in love.
will grant

Overwhelming order is no better than discordant destruction
I see what you did there. The extreme temptation is too much!
i c wat u did there :trollestia:

before a pair
God. These double spaces. Nothing more to say.

slightly-greater size of her darker alter ego
My mind interprated that as "The slightly bigger size of her ego"

Oh god who told you I say that?
Yay! Finally another error. I was feeling useless =)

Whoooowe. This has escalated. L and S have both turned dark, and you have left on a cliff-hanger. I'll continue reading.

her husband her daughter
Alright, even if this does work, it's still a grammatical error. Fix it xD
Still feelin' useless here... Either you and your editor are getting hella' better, or I'm too tired.

this? Does
I think it's that I'm too tired to be able to spot the errors easily. 'fraid I'm not going to be much help for a while.

Nightmare moon
Have an error in capitalization. Thank Ri2.

Also, I have a question. Do you like pokemon?

suppose My only

Alright. I'm going to go completely out on a limb here, and say that the guy who I can't remember the name of will summone jormungand, and they'll beat it up.
Gotta go, sisters home, see you soon.

it around Sleipnir's shoulders
Finally someone with the same disease as me! If you don't know what I'm talking about, ask and you shall receive!

because of their retaliation
I think a marriage is in order :rainbowlaugh:

with a cradling
Alright. It's official. I'm just going to sit down and have babies with these things :rainbowlaugh:

Alright. Back now, and ready to continue reading =)


I think the last I played was an emulated Fire Red or Leaf Green. I like the older stuff, have no idea about most of the newer stuff.

I'm glad zecora is gone.

That got really dark really fast.

I knew from the title this would be emotionally painful, it certainly was...

It certainly was.


Yes, this is admittedly a story that likes to kick you when you're down. And it doesn't get really bad until the final sequence.

Just looking at the picture is creeping me the hell out and I can't figure out why, granted she looks like she just got out of an extremely intense surgery but it's something else about it that's creeping me out.

Just looking at the picture is creeping me the hell out and I can't figure out why, granted she looks like she just got out of an extremely intense surgery but it's something else about it that's creeping me out.

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