Moonlight Rising

Talent.

Personality.

Exposure.

Svengallop cultivates all these.

Troubleshoes complicates them.

And Moonlight Raven just wants to worship her dark goddess.

Fate, it seems, has a funny sense of humor. But before the month is out, the Raven shall Sing!

Coverart a combination of works by Brony-Works, missgoldendragon, cheezedoodle96, and BlueThunder66.

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FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #1 · Apr 25th, 2017 · 1 · · Flight of the Raven ·

I am perplexed, yet intrigued. This promises to be most fascinating indeed.

James Fire

James Fire #2 · Apr 25th, 2017 · 1 · · Flight of the Raven ·

Who is Troublehooves?

You have Troubleshoes in that image, but who is Troublehooves?

Masterweaver

Masterweaver #3 · Apr 25th, 2017 · 1 · · Flight of the Raven ·

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Excellent question!

CoffeeMinion

CoffeeMinion #4 · Apr 25th, 2017 · 1 · · Flight of the Raven ·

I already love this for the casting choices alone.

James Fire

James Fire #5 · Apr 25th, 2017 · · · Flight of the Raven ·

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I found a few typos, should I post them here or pm them to you?

Also, this does look to be interesting. Another good story by the master.

Thought Prism

Thought Prism #6 · Apr 25th, 2017 · · · Flight of the Raven ·

I feel like this story was randomly generated. Is that what you did?

CoffeeMinion

CoffeeMinion #7 · Apr 25th, 2017 · · · Flight of the Raven ·

OK, now that I've actually read it, I love it even more. Please keep this going!

FoxMcCloud7921

FoxMcCloud7921 #8 · Apr 25th, 2017 · 1 · · Flight of the Raven ·

...I totally forgot about this mare but I love her nonetheless.

Malandy

Malandy #9 · Apr 25th, 2017 · 1 · · Flight of the Raven ·

Musing on Faith and Religion in Pony Culture! Very nice!

It was certainly helpful that she performed her dance on a balcony of her apartment, and not the street below.
And that she was very, VERY easy on the eyes.

Ha!

... So, Sunshine Smiles isn't gonna appear? I was wondering what she thought about Moonlight's religion... And on Cutie Marks... I wonder what hers means...

Puns on your handle! Brilliant!

Typo:

amethyst eye shadow she
wore; to her,

Spacing error.

James Fire

James Fire #10 · Apr 25th, 2017 · · · Flight of the Raven ·

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Since others seem to be doing it, I will post them here.

Moonlight Raven didn't much care for her appearance, though. She didn't hate it--hate was a fire that consumed all, a lead to a false sort of emptiness that did not truly embrace the glorious writhing of the dark--but... well, if she had to sum up her opinion in one word, that word would be "meh." Her mane, a sultry purple that coiled round her neck and horn like a lover's embrace, was merely a reflection of the night's confines. The golden rings of her eyes could enrapture any who looked into them, even shaded as they were by the amethyst eye shadow she
wore; to her, however, they served as reminders of the trickery of vision, and the truth of the immaterial. And were one so inclined to rate the attractiveness of her smooth, softly curved body, one would be surprised to discover that Moonlight herself did not feel her mortal vessel had any need for attention more then the basics.

Is this separation supposed to happen?