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Cardinal Dan Productions


I love to write, I love to read, and I love this community! If there's a story I want to read that doesn't exist yet, I'll write it myself.

Comments ( 17 )

Where did you get the cover art for this and Beach Bum? That's been bugging me for a bit.

7730087 I think they know a guy that know this other guy, who's the cousin of the other guy's girlfriend, which her friend's brother-in-law does this on the downlow. Basically, they have 'connections'.

Beach Bum was good and Im liking ware this is going too. Keep it up

Not a fan of how Luna acts because I've been victim to this in the past but I'll follow to see where it goes.

In the end Luna saw men as a nothing but tools after what they did to her sister. Understandable in a way, that sort of resentment is easy to acquire when family is involved.

But I'm also profoundly wondering the following. WHAT KIND OF EPIC-DOUCHE WOULD BREAK CELESTIA'S HEART? I MEAN DAMN!!!!!! A WOMAN LIKE HER IS IMPOSSIBLE, IF NOT RARE! I WOULD INVADE A COUNTRY, GIVE UP MY ARMS AND LEGS, AND SUFFER HORRENDOUS TORTURE JUST TO GET A GLIMPSE OF HER, AND HEAR A SINGLE WORD FROM HER LIPS! :flutterrage:

perfect start fav and tracking want...no NEED more pls :raritywink:

Oh shit, you had me going and I got cock-blocked. Damnit. Make more or I will raise Hitler from the dead with his army of Panzers and make you write more, you magnificent bastard.

Seriously, good story, mate. I really like it and will enjoy more that you post, seeing as how I like saucy stuff.

Again, seriously, make more.

Hey um can you please make more?

I really don't understand why you quit after one chapter. This is really good.

*wonders the exact colors and types of bikinis the two sisters were wearing, if the bottoms were thongs, if the tops had straps, etc.*

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Aight cool, cause the 1st chapter got my interest

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