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Date Night

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Frankie2

Frankie2 #1 · Jun 5th, 2017 · · ·

Well, the date didn’t go nearly as bad as the description made me think it was going to go. And the clop was better in the first story. It seemed like after Starlight gave a BJ she just put it in, sat down, then *BOOM*, they both orgasm.

Zheroxzone

Zheroxzone #2 · Jun 20th, 2017 · · ·

The build-up was nice but the pay-off was like..... yeah not much of a satisfying conclusion. Be a bit more detailed about the intercourse itself -what are they doing, -how do they feel, etc. And once again, a lot of spelling errors. You really need to work on those.