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StrangeBreed


Furry and Pony writer from Canada looking to give you all my crazy ideas and fulfill your commission needs

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You've got Big Mac and Braeburn listed in the image but you didn't include them in the character tags. If this is clop then it is typical (and helpful) to use the character tags primarily for those involved in explicit acts. If this is not clop then I am even more confused.

7636807 Admittedly this site still confuses me with tags. I saw no actual place to type in tags, instead it just showed character pictures and when I tried adding the full cast of the story it said I could only choose a maximum of 5. So I'm sort of at a loss as to how to remedy this

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There is a limit of 5 character tags to a story to encourage authors to only tag the main characters, rather than every appearing character. For clopfics, this usually means tagging every character in sex scenes and then looking at whether other characters are important to the story.
If an author feels strongly that they have more than 5 main characters (that can't be grouped in tags, such as Mane 6 and the CMC), then they will sometimes list other characters in the description.

Absolutelly disgusting. A horrible affront to morals and family values of the show. You should be thrown in prison.

9/10 Would read a sequel.

can't wait for the next instalment.

The climaxes could use a little work. A lot of good build up followed by a clinical one to two sentence climax. Other than that and a few typos it's great.

Nice, spike is really perfect for this kind of story and it's been largely untapped, I think.

I don't get why this gets so many downvotes. It delivers exactly what it promises: pure fetish fuel.

And it is glorious.

Did you think about a sequel? Maybe Sweetie using what she learned from Rarity and using it in DT? What better present for her mistress that another slut?

7637767 This comment has got to be one of my all time favourites xD

7639926 I'll keep that in mind for future installments, thank you for the constructive criticism and advice ^^

7640091 I knoooow, he's such a boy bottom in a female world!

7652118 Thank you muchly ^^ Yeah downvotes confuse me too, but eh, at least I'm getting some reaction hehe

7777720 Great ideas :) don't worry there shall be more on the way

7777720 And getting Scootaloo, Apple Bloom, and Silver Spoon involved as well. That would be great!

You've got to be kidding me! Why only stop after only three chapters, and why on such a cliff-hanger that promises more like that? Please tell me you have plans of continuing this because, frankly, I would love to read more!

More! I want more!

idea for a sequel, rarity starts breeding her "pets" and in some cases inbreeding

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hmm... not a bad idea ;)

8346401 :rainbowlaugh: Not what I meant, but okay.

So will this actually be continuing? If so, you need to change its status.

8357858 Don't worry. There will be a fifth installment later on down the line.

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Then I repeat, change the status to incomplete so that people who liked this will have incentive to stick around and see what happens next.

8569779 That's true, though the next installment won't be happening for a good, long while.

I would love to see other colts brought in, like Button Mash, Rumble, that sort of thing. But honestly, anytime Spike is getting plowed I really enjoy it, as a man who loves anal sex, plus I think Spike is very sexy.

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I might add that at some point, good idea :) Really glad you're enjoying it ^^

8662424 Yeah, a foursome between Spike, Big Macintosh, Rumble, and Button Mash would be so hot!

I see that this story has recently been changed from "Incomplete" to "Complete." Having said that, I'm guessing we're never going to get that fifth chapter. :applecry:

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