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WishyWish
Bringing personal and commission horse words to you over a cup of steaming Earl Gray! I write in many genres, for all audiences. Check my library bookshelves for convenient sorting of my stories.
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I think it was a good read.
Perfect!
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Definitely worth the wait, and 100% worth the price! Thank you <3
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I'm glad to hear you're happy with it! You were a pleasure to work with, so please feel free to call again anytime if you like. Mission accomplished
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Honestly? Second time commissioning a story, and I'm really glad that you didn't force me to write a script, half the story, and all that. ;3;
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Write a script...? Why not just write the story yourself then would be my first thought
On the contrary, I'm actually rather flattered that you allowed me such a measure of artistic freedom here!
7606068 That's what I said!
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It's a commission not a collaboration
I'm glad you got what you wanted out of this story though, enjoy!
You have a lovely way with words when it comes to setting up the scene. The romance of the situation with your word choice was a nice addition. I would personally enjoy seeing more content like this.
One bit of critiquing I have though is about your dialogue. Some of the sentences seemed to use words and structure that was a bit too articulated for the characters. It was in no means unnatural or jarring, but seemed a bit rough to read through at points.
Other than that, the story flowed well, there was enough detail to help the story along, and it was an enjoyable read from beginning to end.
Fuck yeah! We need more story of those two.
..........oh, well, at least it's clean diapers.
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Funny, I thought I was dumming the dialog down a bit too much for the characters (well, at least for Spike)! Problem there is my context - I'm comparing it to how I've written such characters in the past, which isn't the same reference point most readers are going to have. So I do see what you're saying. I wasn't sure if this story should be labeled 'Romantic' or not - I'm glad you enjoyed the read
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The commissioner wanted clean diaper play between two males that did not involve the guy who's strangely obsessed with tubs of jelly!
More stories in general with these two could be a plan though!
I would have loved more of the nursing/baby side to it, but I'm not the commissioner, so...yeah. I still enjoyed it very much. Very arousing. And I always do love seeing Spike take charge~
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Psychological caretaking and comfort also plays a part.
Mm, this approach was more about the DL and less about the AB. There's a lot of ways to do diaperplay. Some folks think it's all about waste
Well, yanno, Spike growing up...he could get that dragon dominance in him!
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Explicit sex? Not quite my thing.
Aww yiss.
(Just having some fun with your comment :P )
But I digress, while the primary goal of the story isn't my cup of tea, and the diapers were more props than anything, the writing style and prose is very impressive indeed. The opening was especially evocative, and as such you've grabbed my interest. Would you be willing to take on a commission with diaper content, but in a more tender and less forth-cumming way? Apologies if I should have kept this to a note, but I felt I might as well double-dip on my comment to save some spam for your inbox.
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No worries. Diaperplay seems to be one of those fetishes that can be presented in various different ways, and evoke different responses. As far as commissions go, I try to stay true to the vision the commissioner has for it
Per my commission guidelines on my page, I consider myself a "safe zone" as far as topic goes - I will at least listen to and entertain any idea, whether or not I choose to take it on. So feel free to drop me a message!
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I've sent you a note on DA, it'll be from The Backup.