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StrangeBreed
Furry and Pony writer from Canada looking to give you all my crazy ideas and fulfill your commission needs
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Despite the claim at the beginning of the story, it's pretty clear that the twins are not adults. Unless the family somehow managed to restrict their mental and emotional growth, leaving them in a strange sexually active but child-like state, which seems very unlikely. Readers who don't like underage stories would still dislike that due to that. As such, denying it does no good in this case.
That being said, it's kind of disappointing. It doesn't seem like a full story, but just part of one. More like a random scene of foreplay with pseudo-bdsm overtones to it. There's a lot of build-up, but the literal climax in the story does not really seem like the climax of the story.
7641029 The disclaimer is for countries were shota/loli/foal/cub is a little less tolerated, as no ages are stated it's just to be a little butt covered even a tiny bit. I've had a lot of flack for it before, but eh, haters will hate. In terms of the story, sorry you did not enjoy it. It was based off two pictures so I only wanted to take some liberties, it was also written as a way to let off some steam in between commissions I was writing. I had another person comment on my other story as having some weak climax scenes so I'll have to try and get them working better for my pony work.
Admittedly I started with furry and have most of my fanbase and story income through there, so pony work has just been a side hobby, but definitely wanna improve my craft in any areas. Thank you for the feedback :)
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I know which two pictures you are talking about... XD
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Generally, stories like this get downvoted quite a lot. But that doesn't mean it's a bad story. However, people will go into this story thinking that the twins are actually over the age of consent. When they realize that's not the case, your story's going to be downvoted even more. And honestly, I don't blame them. If you give people a warning, they'll either read the story, or they won't, But tricking them isn't going to get you much of a following here, I'm afraid. I realize your intent, but it may not work out as well as you might expect. Just giving some friendly advice. It's better to know what you're getting into, rather than being tricked into thinking it's something else.
As for the story, it was great in terms of smut. But the finality of it, as Hopeful stated, is lacking... well, finality. It just sorta ends. But I realize that's not what you were going for. Smut for the sake of smut is always fun. However, about the first thing... your intentions might be good, but it won't land you anywhere good. Trigger warnings are very appreciated around here. I don't know if there's a specific rule against this, as I haven't read the rules in quite a while, but these kinds of situations can make new rules pop up. It's a stretch, but it's possible.
As always, friendly advice. Otherwise, your time here might not be too enjoyable. FiMFiction isn't the most hospitable place to kinks this extreme, even less so for those who don't provide proper trigger warnings. Even more less so for deception. Alright, I'm done talking. Just figured I'd give you a bit of advice. Take from that what you will. Either way, I enjoyed the story. ^^
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NephoxVenom is right, by the way.
It will be a lot worse for a story when there aren't proper warnings and people get into something they don't like.
Since it's not anthro/human, foalcon is allowed to post on this site. So just state it in the description as it is, and it will be better as a result. I mean, there are very high rated foalcon stories on this site, so even if you'd get a few trolls or complainers or downvotes it wouldn't be as many as you can get by misleading people into thinking it's not foalcon, when in the text it clearly is.
Also, if you put that fair warning, the story is more likely to be added in foalcon groups on this site, which will bring you more views and likes from people who are actually into this stuff. Which is a gain good for the story and to get your fic judged by quality rather than by its content.
have a seat pinkie
7641641 No Mr. Hansen, Nooooo D:
7641369 Tis good call. Tbh the disclaimer was copy pasted from another site that was super heavy on needed a big disclaimer at the beginning of each story, most ppl ignored it or read it off as an ass covering thing, but some ppl surprisingly still don't get it. I'll edit how it's written in future stories. I still wish this site had a better overall tagging system.
7641345 Good advice :) Admittedly I forgot the disclaimer was even there before I posted it xD I'll change it in future chapters. Wasn't meaning to smoke and mirrors. My fan base is quite big on my other sites so I don't really need to trick people into reading my work. This profile was more or less a favour for pony fans who told me it'd be easier to track my work here. Any extra followings as a result are nice though :) I'll be more careful next time. I realize this site is a lot more hostile than any site I've ever visited before. Not that it will detour me just an interesting thing to note.
7641318 ;D <3
7641297 Haha unless of course Rarity is a sick and twisted as I write her in the other fics :3
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It can also be really fun, it just requires a different sort of approach. Anyway, I hope to see more stories from you! ^^
Noice.
This might be interesting to explore further.
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sequel?
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At some point most definitely yes
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Is it weird I want to see a reverse version of the one you have up? Like Pumkin and Pound dominate their Mom and dad?
YAY!
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...I LOVE this idea, hmmm hmmm, maybe when I'm done more commissions and my money situation is better. That is something I'd love to see.
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Just a thought. And I hope your situations get better soon. You do some good work that I'd hate to see stop.
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